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10874628 No.10874628 [Reply] [Original]

Just gonna drop some poetry here. Its not gonna be the bust but idgaf.

I live in a world of sin and self-inflicted pain
There is no one around me
For they have no souls
Obsessions with reflections is all that I see
Never living up to the expectation they set
Never living
Why do I have to be so broken inside
The way out is no longer
I must stand and watch
Unable to look away
For there is nowhere else to look

>> No.10874634

>>10874628
very subtle

>> No.10874665
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10874665

C'mon /lit/ leave me some feedback, critique my poetry. The only way to get better is to know what to work towards. Tear me to shreds.

>> No.10874668

>>10874628
Is this a joke? Am I not getting it?

>> No.10874670

>>10874628
it's quite bad, learn new words.

>> No.10875428

I need direct contact
I’ve drifted away damn it
The flow got too wavy
And the weed too big of a habit
Ive lost the old ways
Of my former self

>> No.10875433

linkinpark/10