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Postem below.

>> No.10578549

Culture of Critique
Jewish rule conspiracy
/pol/ is always right

>> No.10579123

Is it OK to post erotica to be critiqued?
I haven't visited here for a while.

>> No.10579271

>>10578442
Dusk hangs thick in violet air.
Laying on dead grass, alone,
I recall your wiry hair,
Coarse as weeds on garden stones.

You and I in hands embrace,
Eye to eye and soul to skin.
You touch your nose to my face,
And my blood runs quick and thin.

Every leaf now hanging dead,
Autumn yields to dark and frost.
I think of all left unsaid,
From that time, now ever lost.

>> No.10579361

>>10578442
>>>/pol/
>>>/lgbt/

>> No.10579480
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10579480

pls r8 my story guys!!! i need to show it to my roblox gf do u think its good so far???

>> No.10579548

>>10578442
Why use a derailing op picture with a reference to anti semitism.

>> No.10579560

>>10579548
The last one went longer than most; it's mutually beneficial. Also, what you're calling "antisemitism" is a normal and healthy reaction to jewish behavior. Try to read up on the JQ, friend, this is old news in Internet years.

>> No.10579573

>>10579548
Because he's a /pol/ tourist that doesn't belong on the board and has no interest in literature.

>> No.10579590

>>10578442
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CZ_1yqOnDJqzH5eofqNiOPdPAJho7MdgsPeaV3Qov-U/edit?usp=sharing

It gets better around the later chapters. Feel free to skip ahead.

>> No.10579643

Wrote this in about a day or two and it shows. Very misinformed and all names used for surface symbolism. Eh: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SGI7e7XnNGkq9sJJXmpYL5zzSYIB4HWi1og7u1eMwQs