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Okay chapter 1 of my fantasy novel, i've been having a friend do some editing help for me and she really thinks I need to nail this first chapter (I have about 50k words written of the whole project and just a few more scenes to add to the first draft) She's really helping me extend it and go into more detail, which i need, because I want to get this up to 80-90k words so people who matter will actually look at it

I wont provide a summary because chapter 1 should sit on its own, I have a rough draft of a prolouge that involves several cult members gathering around a fire, sacrificing a lamb, and saying that "The hero has returned" so that's the set up, here goes...

It's called

"Braun and the Burning Blade"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VehNizYdsmzYXfR8P7fSRMWGCSRprYoMyoAODsiBso0/edit?usp=sharing

>> No.10569798

>>10569792
heres the edit link if you have suggestions

>> No.10569801

>>10569798
sorry actually going to save edits for her, but would like suggestions

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10569861

https://pastebin.com/Zfq57mQc

heres a pastebin if you can't use google docs