Why are young white males so awful at writing?

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Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:39:45 2018 No.10507299 [Reply] [Original]

Why are young white males so awful at writing?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:40:58 2018 No.10507303 >>10507299 Don't make fun of cigarette marine biologist man who writes shitty love poems about heartbreak, don't you know hes the most hated "poet" in portland?

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>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:42:08 2018 No.10507309 >menthols Fucking nigger

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:42:17 2018 No.10507312 Who drinks coffee with red wine

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:44:28 2018 No.10507320 File: 2.57 MB, 220x212, uh.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:46:44 2018 No.10507331 >>10507308 subtle

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:46:49 2018 No.10507332 File: 77 KB, 599x601, 1515367936768.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:47:56 2018 No.10507337 >>10507299 still better than richard brautigan

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:48:12 2018 No.10507339 >>10507332 Whys this an American spirit and the first is a menthol pack of Marlboro

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:49:25 2018 No.10507342 >>10507339 It's all a ploy to advertise cigarettes to hipsters.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:49:30 2018 No.10507343 >>10507299 >>10507308 >>10507332 itt: beta-male virgins upset that Chad Thundercock chronicles his exploits and genius in more immaculate verses than they will ever be able to produce

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:50:17 2018 No.10507345 >>10507343 why are you like this

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:50:57 2018 No.10507348 >>10507342 He should use Dunhills too then

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:51:15 2018 No.10507350 File: 84 KB, 960x960, 21616159_1585142658196052_1751406406062342272_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507343 nothing but alphas here

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:51:21 2018 No.10507352 >>10507339 He switched when he realized American spirits were hipster approved

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:51:34 2018 No.10507354 >>10507308 >GET IT?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:52:45 2018 No.10507355 >>10507299 The male Rupi Kaur

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:53:30 2018 No.10507361 >>10507352 I liked American Spirits more, they have a smoother taste and they seem like there are less additives in them, much more expensive though.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:53:38 2018 No.10507363 >>10507345 because hes baiting you

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:54:52 2018 No.10507370 File: 185 KB, 674x992, DIS7Rf1UEAE1FAQ.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:57:23 2018 No.10507377

>>10507345
>>10507350
>>10507345
bro, literally every single one of his poems is about how much pussy he's smashing and how many drugs he's slamming

literally every single one of his poems is the epitome of deftly deconstructing the postmodern post-ironic metasarcastic nu-sincerity that plagues modern literature and it is done so by an inalienable wit that is intricate beyond the point of effability and connected to some of the most complex metaphysics of our generation

everything from his aesthetics to his images to his complete disregard for such archaic institutions as "metre" is an immaculate show of the only absolute individuality that the modern man can cling to during the Kali Yuga

Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:58:24 2018 No.10507382
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>>10507343
lol there's a guy I know who actually goes by the name "the C.H.A.D." and posts his "writing" on his blog. I can take screens if people are interested. for all I know he posts here

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:59:41 2018 No.10507387 >>10507382 Post pls

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:59:48 2018 No.10507388 File: 170 KB, 931x596, my aesthetic.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 7 23:59:49 2018 No.10507389 >>10507348 since when do hipsters smoke Dunhill??

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:01:54 2018 No.10507402 File: 140 KB, 379x440, 3D4.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This thread is making me wish I could go back in time and kill Walt Whitman.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:04:23 2018 No.10507407 File: 135 KB, 315x388, gayjesus.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507402 you would just end up succumbing to his magnanimity and libidinal magnetism and having sex with him

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:05:02 2018 No.10507410 >>10507389 They were Lennon's choice so I figured they might

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:05:13 2018 No.10507411 >>10507387 >https://thechadwrites.wordpress.com/

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:08:20 2018 No.10507420 File: 109 KB, 773x903, chad.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507411 just looks like a bunch of goofing around and some regular amateur writing but this is what got me

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:08:53 2018 No.10507422 >>10507299 >Why are young white males so awful at writing? This will be the next wave that tries to kill /lit/. Fair warning.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:10:12 2018 No.10507430 >>10507422 white male detected. did your trust fund feelings get hurt?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:11:25 2018 No.10507436 >>10507388 I really thought it'd be hard to find a "writer" that I dislike more than John Greene. I was wrong. This guy is way worse. This is just insufferable.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:13:41 2018 No.10507447 >>10507430 Case in point

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:17:01 2018 No.10507455 >>10507436 t. alt-right

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:19:33 2018 No.10507468 File: 156 KB, 500x282, 1426793512655[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507436

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:20:42 2018 No.10507477 >>10507308 >thiscantbereal.jpg

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:21:21 2018 No.10507482 >>10507410 I've never seen a lame person smoking Dunhill. it's usually middle aged men I've seen. I really hope hipsters haven't caught on to them.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:21:43 2018 No.10507484 >>10507455 You're not wrong. Not sure what your point is though

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:23:19 2018 No.10507490 >>10507299 I want to puke. When did emotional dishonesty and abandoning others become romantic?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:24:03 2018 No.10507493 >>10507299 this is the worst poetry I've read in my fucking life. no doubt. like a 13 y old posh kid trying to do his best bukowski impression. >>10507303

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:24:13 2018 No.10507494 >>10507355 This. It's so over the top I have a hard time believing it's not a parody of that "style" though.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:24:41 2018 No.10507497 >>10507482 Honestly I've given up on smoking cigarettes, I might get a pipe though, I've heard pipe tobacco is more pure.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:25:26 2018 No.10507501 File: 74 KB, 599x596, ayy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299 lmao

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:25:35 2018 No.10507504 >>10507299 young people just suck at writing. weak technique and small scope.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:26:25 2018 No.10507508 >>10507490 When we began to live in a society where being sincere and honest is absolutely terrifying

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:26:48 2018 No.10507509

>>10507332
>Chad justifying his shitty lifestyle parading it as artistic

I want to smash my head in. You know what an artist does? They love earnestly. If they're not doing that they're probably afraid of being taken advantage of by faggots like this. This is so fucking petty

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:27:33 2018 No.10507512 >>10507501 oh boy, how original

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:27:35 2018 No.10507513 >>10507501 i actually don't think this one is as bad as his others.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:28:04 2018 No.10507514 >>10507508 Then acknowledge that. I don't understand why people need to fucking pity themselves for doing something your partner needs you to do. Unless of course you're dating a guy like this poet

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:28:13 2018 No.10507515 File: 128 KB, 291x293, dfw. (8).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299 >>10507320

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:28:36 2018 No.10507517 >>10507388 >I don't give a FUCK dude!!!! lemme prove it to you by replying to you multiple times telling you how many fucks I don't give!! >>10507420 >american psycho at #1 yep its a troll account

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:28:38 2018 No.10507518 >>10507513 It's not, but that's only because the others are about as bad as poetry can get

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:28:56 2018 No.10507519 >>10507508 I honestly came to the same conclusion a few days ago: Our society has lost the ability to be sincere and honest.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:29:26 2018 No.10507520 >>10507508 >baring your vulnerabilities in a world of wolves

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:29:30 2018 No.10507522 >>10507355 >tfw you realise Bukowski was pre internet male Rupi Kaur

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:31:24 2018 No.10507530 >>10507519 you're fucking retarded if you're just figuring that out, sorry

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:31:44 2018 No.10507531 File: 89 KB, 600x598, get it, head board, like she was giving head to a board.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:32:46 2018 No.10507538 >>10507508 I think he's honest, it's just that he's unbearably shallow

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:32:51 2018 No.10507539 >>10507420 >not one but TWO Junot Diaz books

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:33:53 2018 No.10507549

>>10507514
Oh I agree with you. Of course not everyone is like that, but the younger generations are shockingly insincere and dishonest to the point where being a good person and being emotionally honest and available to someone is seen as weird. Not caring about anything is what's seen as cool, but the reality is that even the youngest generation yearn for honesty and sincerity. We all do at some level, and it's a shame that people like this poet are praised for rejecting and misunderstanding what it means to be human.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:33:58 2018 No.10507551

>>10507299
Honestly the aspiring poets I've met are either 1) really just enthusiasts 2) earnest and talented woman 3) talking about rap or 4) expect greatness to be just shit out on their lap for telling people they're a poet and not put in the time, reading, or reflection to make anything

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:35:32 2018 No.10507558 >>10507551 >earnest and talented >women OH NO NO NO

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:37:02 2018 No.10507564

>>10507494
In reference to the other popular instapoets, it's really not that over the top. They all share what seems like a contrived delusion. Like they're so insecure that they've practiced "positive thinking" to such an extent, and have become so accepting of all of their own ideas, that they hardly seem to be self-aware anymore.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:37:16 2018 No.10507566 >>10507497 why have you given up cigs? I haven't come across someone smoking a pipe in my lifetime

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:40:09 2018 No.10507580

>>10507520
Being honest about your faults and making yourself vulnerable makes you a far more likable person though. It's very attractive, because it allows other people to make connections with you that are just not possible when you're an insufferable uncaring ass like the poet in OP. The cost is that doing so is terrifying and that fades very little.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:44:22 2018 No.10507591

>>10507566
Taste and smell mostly. Best cigs I've smoked were Dunhill and American Spirits. I've heard that cigs have additives to make them smell like shit compared to pipe but I've never tested it. I've dipped for a while. I was thinking either pipe or cigar every so often might not be so bad, the nice buzz of tobacco is pleasant and relaxing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:46:45 2018 No.10507602 >>10507308 jesus

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:48:42 2018 No.10507612

>>10507564
Roopi was the only one I've had any real exposure to and that was because of /lit/. There's something terribly sad and banal about a whole pseudo-artistic subculture developing that doesn't devolve into unaware self-parody so much as only exist as it. It's like all the worst things about the beats accelerated and distilled into one pre-packaged artificial mess.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:49:15 2018 No.10507617 >>10507558 >hypothetical woman named in an anecdote with literally the only information available that they are talented and woman >nah I've read their stuff it's not that great. not that I'm sexist.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:49:52 2018 No.10507620 https://youtu.be/aGzFMcoYvLI

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:50:57 2018 No.10507624 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lmEbF2uhsZk

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:53:48 2018 No.10507632 >>10507299 Poetry is usually pretty awful, always. It makes me think back to that poetry unit in high school and brings out those violent suicide thoughts my therapist told me to block out.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 00:58:00 2018 No.10507648 Do people really still believe that smoking makes you cool? How old mentally do you have to be to think taking a photo of your packet of smokes next to your shitty two lines of """poetry"""" is cool

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:00:00 2018 No.10507654

>>10507530
>you're a retard for not knowing things before I did

Can I call you a retard if you don't know how to do multivariate calculus or how to perform a fourier transform on a signal, then? It takes time to learn shit, anon; not everyone learns things at exactly the same time. Did you ever fucking individuate?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:00:28 2018 No.10507657 >>10507648 Yes, people still believe this. It just makes me laugh honestly.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:00:53 2018 No.10507659

>>10507632
I was pretty with you until that last part. I channeled my suicidal thoughts as a cry for help but it turned out I had abusive parents instead of a chemical imbalance so nobody did anything because they couldn't fix it by deciding that something was wrong with me and didn't like thinking about it. I got to make a lot of upsetting shit that none of the other shit-disturbing edge lords could get away with but no-one would tell me to stop.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:02:27 2018 No.10507664 >>10507654 ah, so you're an autist.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:04:27 2018 No.10507672 >>10507531 This must be deliberately ironic. Notice the increasingly unrestrained presence of cigarettes.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:06:17 2018 No.10507679 >>10507664 Probably. Explains why none of my relationships last longer than 8 days and all I get are one night stands.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:08:56 2018 No.10507685 >>10507531 Ahahaha holy shit, I'm not even disgusted anymore I'm just laughing

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:09:15 2018 No.10507688 >>10507679 -c.y.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:09:48 2018 No.10507689 >>10507688 He actually liked one of my poems I just posted. Within seconds. Hes running a stupid bot which is why he has so many followers.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:47:04 2018 No.10507800 >>10507370 fuck this is so true tho

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:50:46 2018 No.10507814

>>10507800
We all feel depressed sometimes and like to sleep in, but who the fuck feels that that is so profound and deep that it warrants some pretentious cunt typing it out all faux typewriter style and carefully arranging a cigarette next to a print out of it

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 01:55:21 2018 No.10507824 >>10507299 >glass of red. That's pretty bad desu

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:04:03 2018 No.10507840 >>10507824 yeah, red what? the guy just can't leave me hanging!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:06:33 2018 No.10507846 >>10507840 loooool, you're a funny one

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:08:13 2018 No.10507851 >>10507814 Isn't that a critique of the modern "poetry" though? Its all aesthetic, no depth—everyone is a rupi kaur clone. Also, c. y. is a "broet" not a poet.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:26:16 2018 No.10507893 >>10507493 Jokes on you bud, all poetry is a joke. Write a novel and stop be a faggot

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:31:23 2018 No.10507908 >>10507299 typewriter and ashtray don't rhyme. there's no way this is a real poem.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 02:50:41 2018 No.10507944 >>10507402 >This thread is making me wish I could go back in time and kill Arthur Rimbaud Fix'd

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:26:18 2018 No.10508019 >>10507332 Holy fucking cringe.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:27:10 2018 No.10508020 >>10507377 >>10507370

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:30:36 2018 No.10508028 >>10507520 Just stop being a normalshit.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:33:20 2018 No.10508030 >>10507617 He's saying that women can't be earnest and talented Are you autistic? Go back to facebook.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:34:25 2018 No.10508031 >>10507659 yea ok

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:39:51 2018 No.10508040 >>10507299 >typewriter >coffee >wine >cigarettes >manic pixie girl almost the whole package of images used by amateur writers who don't know what to write about all he needs is >rain

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:42:20 2018 No.10508045 >>10508040 You forgot waking up in the morning

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 03:54:17 2018 No.10508062 you know after spending just twenty minutes on this board i feel so trapped by ironic intellectualism that im not sure if i want to pull the trigger even more or less

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 04:14:04 2018 No.10508095 >>10507308 That's cringe as fuck

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 04:41:56 2018 No.10508132 >>10507402 Whitman for the most part was a mistake I agree, but When I Heard at the Close of the Day is one of the 10 best poems ever written.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 04:53:10 2018 No.10508143 File: 136 KB, 1000x1595, foLBFw4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Im a young white male and im good at writing and cute and and sweet and good in relationships so fuck u for being racist. I read your op pic and I threw up. Thank u

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 04:56:46 2018 No.10508150
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>>10507377
>Fuck some random girl
>Act like a retarded asshole
>Break up
>Fuck some girl you meet at a party
>Write le world weary man who had sex with a girl poem
>Gain 4chan admirations

Now thats a win.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 05:52:39 2018 No.10508216 Well, at least they can bait.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 05:59:59 2018 No.10508227 It's like the final boss of layabout Fauxhemians.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:05:43 2018 No.10508232 >>10507402 How, in any way, does this relate to Whitman?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:08:44 2018 No.10508235 File: 124 KB, 500x458, pepecasso.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507382 Seems relevant, post em >>10507411 checked

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:17:13 2018 No.10508244 >>10507388 >Oregon North Korea must win. For the art.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:19:11 2018 No.10508248 File: 37 KB, 680x395, 0e8.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507377 >the Kali Yuga is justification for being a sinkhole of culture and mores

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:24:55 2018 No.10508250 >>10507299 Bukowski

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:28:05 2018 No.10508253 >>10507299 jesus fucking christ every word of this what the fuck

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:34:43 2018 No.10508257 >>10507332 Damn....

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:36:33 2018 No.10508259 >Portland, Oregon

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:38:36 2018 No.10508263

>>10507814
yeah the romantization and aesthetic of it is pretentious bullshit, but the thought itself is rather relatable and one that i've had myself not too long ago. i used to dread the days where i slept in instead of doing something "useful", whereas nowadays i rarely get out of bed before noon.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:40:19 2018 No.10508266 >>10507308 just killed myself

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:43:40 2018 No.10508272 he is worse than rupi

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:49:27 2018 No.10508277

this fucking guy knows exactly what he's doing

when everyone's done making fun of him he'll get an ironic fanbase that slowly turns overly sincere, finding great depth and meaning in his shit, and ends up supporting him

see also: yung lean, lana del rey, lil b etc

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:51:55 2018 No.10508281 I don't throw the word "pretentious" around loosely, but this is absolutely the epitome of pretentious.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 06:57:54 2018 No.10508289 >>10507299 >>10507308 >>10507332 >>10507370 >>10507388 >>10507501 >>10507531 What's with the cigarette obsession?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:01:49 2018 No.10508296 >>10507509 probably the gayest post ive ever seen

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:02:55 2018 No.10508298 >>10508277 Lana actually has talent, even though it's just vain pop-nihilism.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:06:35 2018 No.10508307

>>10508289
Today one has to be more than just a portrait of the artist as a one-dimensional commodity. To add that additional dimension it becomes necessary for the old yipster to zoom out into a field to which he may view himself as if he were not there. And it is from this point that he can see the objects of his art as objects of his art. He becomes the cigarette in many forms, and the cigarette represents the transvaluation of his becoming as an artist.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:08:25 2018 No.10508310 File: 1.29 MB, 195x229, 1515355209556.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507654 >You're a retard for not knowing what the majority of society calls common sense. Yes, we can consider you a retard for not knowing that people are not honest.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:09:00 2018 No.10508314 >>10508266 Pass the kool-aid and I'll instagram my death as a .1% entendre.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:14:42 2018 No.10508326 >>10507564 decision theory realism

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:16:18 2018 No.10508330 >>10507339 pomo post-irony

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:19:37 2018 No.10508333 >>10507851 >Poe's Law Magical Accelerationism Maybe... What does this guy look like. That is the Poe Kryptonite.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:22:04 2018 No.10508339 >>10508277 yung lean is just an ironic fuckboi lana del rey is a product created by a major label lil b is a legit weird dude don't put them all together thanks

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:27:01 2018 No.10508351 >>10508339 that doesn't change anything i wrote though. their trajectories are identical

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:29:55 2018 No.10508358 >>10507612 >Roopi Can someone post examples?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:33:14 2018 No.10508367 File: 48 KB, 800x729, 8nRqoXW.jpg.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299 >>10507308 >>10507332 >>10507370 >>10507388 >>10507501 >>10507531

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 07:37:25 2018 No.10508381 >>10507299 feminism

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 08:08:29 2018 No.10508482 File: 489 KB, 811x865, 1514228997401.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507420 >this is water

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 09:23:23 2018 No.10508676 At least they're writing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 09:28:39 2018 No.10508682 File: 257 KB, 415x476, I WOULD PREFER NOT TO.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >Optimistic Nihilist >Swing dancing https://www.instagram.com/collin_andrew_yost/?hl=en

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:14:17 2018 No.10508822 Is this the male Rupi?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:14:59 2018 No.10508824 >>10507355 Honestly, this isn't even fair to Rupi. That's how bad this guy is. Jesus

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:17:07 2018 No.10508828 >>10507308 >530 likes how does this happen?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:19:18 2018 No.10508832 >>10508828 instagram thots and people who unironically like palahniuk

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:19:21 2018 No.10508833

>>10507299
Is he good? Absolujtely not. But he's doing something, which is more than you can say for most of population. He has skin in the game. Abd he's succeeding. Bottom line.

On the other hand you have an army of supposedly "better" talents here who are drowing in passivity and detachment. Everytime you head into the critique thread and select a random /lit/ submission to read it is either ironic shitposting or a supposedly proficient wall of text that is completely detached from any sense of individuality or anything personal. It's effecitevly a giant abyss of fear hiding behind semi-intricate stylistic puzzles. Both of these point to the same problem. You are all chained by your fear of having skin in the game, of approaching something without a shred of irony which you use to protect your persona from being exposed to the "real world". To any trained eye, even your writing reflects your weak, passive character. To an untrained eye, your writing will just produce visceral disgust even if they might not be able to discern the underlying reason for it.

I think the guy in the OP as awful as he is, is deserving of respect, which is more than one can say for some of the individuals who are more talented than him. Any person with any inkling of vitality would look at this guy and think to himself if the bar for success is so low, how much better can I do since I am more talented than him? But we both know you will rather just engage in day-dreaming and ego-stroking by thinking of that great next novel of yours. It's going to be so great once the word-count for it moves past zero, but you totally have the ideas for it, man!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:20:21 2018 No.10508835 >>10508833 - c.y.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:22:12 2018 No.10508839 >>10507350 is that him? lol

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:26:40 2018 No.10508853 >>10508833 Just shut the fuck up you psuedo-intellect.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:34:26 2018 No.10508872 >>10508839 I sure hope so. Connects to a pictame of him. Spoiler alert: mass MGTOW suicide incoming: http://www.pictame.com/media/1675967517874772034_304984701

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:38:04 2018 No.10508884 File: 133 KB, 1075x1059, DSKXVNIX0AE2O5B.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >3001 likes

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:46:06 2018 No.10508903
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>I read an article about all the hate you received. Just keep doing you, and strive to grow every day. It's shitty people get so vicious in hopes of sounding clever.
>@collin_andrew_yost “This isn’t you” on the mirror... interesting
https://theoutline.com/post/2488/collin-andrew-yost-the-most-hated-poet-in-portland

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:48:17 2018 No.10508907 File: 73 KB, 1024x512, hope.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >adds mirror >and everything was write in the world Someone with art skills please make this into a Narcissus meme for me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:52:30 2018 No.10508918 Man has become the Sirens. I think that I will never write again without the image of a writer before his mirror.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 10:57:19 2018 No.10508929
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>*CAPTION* Poetry has always had a controversial gender discussion throughout its history. For the early parts it was dominated by men. Soon enough women such as Plath and Dickinson and countless others switched the roles and gave women everywhere hope and empowerment. Today it is safe to say that poetry is dominated by women authors. It is also to safe to assume that the majority of readers are ladies as well. This is GOOD. I cannot preach enough that I am a fan and an advocate, but at the same time there is a glaring hole within our community. Men have dropped off. I should not have to wake up every morning and worry about posting a piece of art. I shouldn’t have to be anxious because I am a straight male posting a piece of writing from a mans perspective. I should not have to wake up and have an inner conflict about if I should stay true to my own writing, or if I should cave in and be a male author who writes to a feminine perspective to sell books and get signed. We should not be condemned for our sex and our opposite views. Art is art and the beauty of gender is how our minds think differently about the same situations. I support the women’s reign of poetry in modern society. I just ask that we don’t crucify men for their opinion. People such as R.H. Sin even came under attack for writing nice things from a woman’s perspective. I have came under attack for sexualized writing. Look at the famous signed male poets: they all are writing what the audience wants to read. They are catering to a perspective that isn’t their own. If you are a male writing from a male viewpoint you are ignored. The publishers only want the “wild” and the “moon.” I don’t mean this to be a controversial hate fest. I don’t want to start a fight. I just want to have a discussion. I support everyone regardless of gender or color or identity, I just hope we can acknowledge that the male voice and viewpoint is almost faded out. Writing is supposed to be controversial, it’s supposed to give a voice to those that are silent. Writing gives you a canvas to express anything you want, no matter how light or dark.
Free speech was a mistake.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:00:18 2018 No.10508937 This man is so obsessed with his aesthetics ans the idea of himself as a poet/writer that it comes across extremely shallow and narcissistic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:04:02 2018 No.10508949 >>10507299 As Wilde said “All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling”.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:10:36 2018 No.10508966 is this not satire?

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:15:09 2018 No.10508982

>>10508833
I agree up until "as awful as he is, he is deserving of respect".

No. He's bad full stop. And deserves no respect. Has he actually done work? Sure. I don't respect him for it though because its quality counterbalances the effort he put in.

He's as bad as the decent writers on /lit/ that never get anywhere because of a lack of effort or confidence.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:24:58 2018 No.10509002 >>10507308 whoa............made me thnk.............

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:27:42 2018 No.10509009 >>10509002 agge non what maked rwoyu think sometimes?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:28:47 2018 No.10509015 >>10507299 this is the worst shit I've read in my life. thanks OP

>>	sin Mon Jan 8 11:30:56 2018 No.10509019 File: 174 KB, 751x398, 1270611811053.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Does anyone else get agitated at how these post-post-modern writers neglect proper punctuation? Something about how they always write without capitals pisses me off as well.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:38:46 2018 No.10509050

>>10508833
"Succeeding"

He runs Instagram bots to gain him followers, was made fun of for how pretentiously bad his poetry is in magazines (at least Rupi has SOMETHING underneath it all) and his work is seriously pretentious.

He will find out soon enough that nobody is buying his shit, despite his hundreds of likes on Instagram.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:46:07 2018 No.10509069

>>10508833
>Is Rupi good? Absolujtely not. But she's doing something, which is more than you can say for most of population. She has skin in the game. Abd she's succeeding. Bottom line.
>On the other hand you have an army of supposedly "better" talents here who are drowing in passivity and detachment. Everytime you head into the critique thread and select a random /lit/ submission to read it is either ironic shitposting or a supposedly proficient wall of text that is completely detached from any sense of individuality or anything personal. It's effecitevly a giant abyss of fear hiding behind semi-intricate stylistic puzzles. Both of these point to the same problem. You are all chained by your fear of having skin in the game, of approaching something without a shred of irony which you use to protect your persona from being exposed to the "real world". To any trained eye, even your writing reflects your weak, passive character. To an untrained eye, your writing will just produce visceral disgust even if they might not be able to discern the underlying reason for it.
>I think the girl in the OP as awful as she is, is deserving of respect, which is more than one can say for some of the individuals who are more talented than her. Any person with any inkling of vitality would look at this girl and think to himself if the bar for success is so low, how much better can I do since I am more talented than her? But we both know you will rather just engage in day-dreaming and ego-stroking by thinking of that great next novel of yours. It's going to be so great once the word-count for it moves past zero, but you totally have the ideas for it, man!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:50:07 2018 No.10509088 >>10508903 >women see this and see misogyny Women were a mistake.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:50:49 2018 No.10509092 >>10509019 >post-post-modern writers >this Please learn more about literature before you spew this uninformed drivel.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:51:17 2018 No.10509095 >>10507312 poets

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:52:24 2018 No.10509097 >>10509050 Second book coming out. Supposedly sold more than expected of first. Was on amazon hot sellers at one point.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 11:54:46 2018 No.10509103 >>10509092 What would you call it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:00:15 2018 No.10509130 >>10507299 >>10507308 This is satire...right?

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:01:36 2018 No.10509134

>>10509103
I don't know, some here suggested amateur broetry, but I have a list of things I wouldn't call it, such as medieval scholastic philosophy, Sanskrit epic poetry, Buddhist koans, American legal document, and postmodern. post-beat? Even that's a stretch.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:06:53 2018 No.10509151 Does anybody have the one where he talks about his girlfriend dreaming about him cheating and then pouring coffee down the drain Fucking love it

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:35:04 2018 No.10509221 >>10509134 Disposal unit realism.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:36:13 2018 No.10509224 >>10507299 >I am. confirmed jokester. Makes me wonder if Rupi is satire too.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:36:42 2018 No.10509225 File: 106 KB, 675x1200, wastebasket.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10509151 lmao

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:42:15 2018 No.10509242 File: 68 KB, 1080x1080, woah.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299 >3005 likes F

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:42:16 2018 No.10509243 >>10509069 I agree with this. I defended Rupi for putting herself out there and knowing how to sell her work.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:45:17 2018 No.10509252 >>10509242 >poetessmiramohan >until she did FFSSj adbk bkad akd aksh kdad bskb hnjbdaksbdk... ... ...

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:49:24 2018 No.10509264 >>10509243 There is a deep yearning for a return of art, but this does not mean we should support the form in which the call takes.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:55:12 2018 No.10509278 File: 45 KB, 1080x1080, patience.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >u w0t

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 12:58:56 2018 No.10509286 >>10507497 >I've heard pipe tobacco is more pure you can forget about that

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:00:12 2018 No.10509291 >>10507531 Every time I see pictures like these I can't help but laugh at the thought of him sliding each cigarette one by one back into the pack. He has probably broken a few of those on some of his photos. Lovely.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:04:30 2018 No.10509302
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+S=E=X+
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and /formed/
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like tired
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enveloping
the mould
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+++'
_______
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grotesqueoozenessnessblahgoompah
???
perhaps you get it
but then
maybe not
like
that squirrel
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+33v33
oh my
and then
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it's her
and
I am
=S=A=V=E=D=
by the grace of it
and beheld
by
+H+E+R+

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:10:51 2018 No.10509328 File: 122 KB, 1080x1080, hatebreedlove.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:15:30 2018 No.10509347 >onegirlmuserealism Theme: https://youtu.be/Q9WZtxRWieM

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:31:17 2018 No.10509404 >>10509134 Wannabeat

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:44:19 2018 No.10509449 >>10509286 Why? It is.

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:46:13 2018 No.10509458

>>10509328
>They hate me because they don't understand it

What is there to understand? Who the fuck inspired your work? I feel like he would be a much better poet if he wrote about Marine biology and that subject, and introduce people to science through his art.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 13:59:18 2018 No.10509512 >>10509449 >>10509449 It's not. Thing is you don't inhale when smoking a pipe, but the tobacco itself isn't any less harmful to your health.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 14:01:39 2018 No.10509519 >>10507332 Sounds like something Drake would write

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 14:11:04 2018 No.10509540 >DUDE CIGGARRETTES LMAO why are smokers so cringey? why do they think it makes them cool and edgy when like 70% of people smoke regularly?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 14:14:46 2018 No.10509556 >>10507308 Lolololol

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:16:15 2018 No.10509843 File: 401 KB, 599x602, le cigarette man.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] is he a chad?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:18:05 2018 No.10509851 >>10508833 i agree with the sentiment of your post but disagree with the particulars. yes, i respect sincere writing more than ironic detachment. that said, his "poetry" is absolute shit. trite, cliche shit. and he should be told over and over

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:19:34 2018 No.10509860 >>10509225 holy fuck this isn't even poetry. it's just three shitty sentences

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:20:03 2018 No.10509863 >>10509843 No.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:20:16 2018 No.10509864 >>10509843 That's Brad who found a niche

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:44:38 2018 No.10509964

I would classify him more as an artist than a poet, with the art being everything from the paper to the typewritten words to the e e cummings signature and arranged cigarettes. The poetry itself moves between unoriginal and plain bad, but the combined visual effect is reasonably good for its type.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:48:23 2018 No.10509977 >>10509964 >but the combined visual effect is reasonably good for its type. no, its not

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:49:39 2018 No.10509984 >>10509977 Isn't it? I honestly don't know much about instagram poetry.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:50:58 2018 No.10509990 >>10509512 I know tobacco is bad for your health, I mean the scent additives and taste

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 15:56:47 2018 No.10510007 >>10507402 The problem is so many faggots want to imitate Walt without realizing only he perfectly tuned the wild free verse it and it could only work with him

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 16:05:10 2018 No.10510047 >>10510007 The classic "Milton problem", but then again that applies to practically everything.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 16:12:05 2018 No.10510087 >>10507332 woah...

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 16:13:02 2018 No.10510090 >>10509984 It's better than other Instagram poetry. Lots of rupi clones. Lots of typewriter types though. He's the cigarette dude though. It's a niche.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 16:43:50 2018 No.10510229 >>10507299 these aren't poems, these are more like the ambiguous updates women post on twitter sometimes.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 16:56:23 2018 No.10510278 File: 226 KB, 684x435, ¼6½.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >tfw you start to hate the west

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:04:44 2018 No.10510302 >>10507299 Hubris. They will learn as they age.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:45:59 2018 No.10510475 I feel vindicated. I thought i hated rupi kaur because she was a woman, but this chucklefuck proves otherwise.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:47:14 2018 No.10510485 >>10507299 Is this some kind of meta-commentary on how artistic precursors can destroy the creativity that they originally expressed or is this nothing more than bad poetry?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:51:36 2018 No.10510510 >>10510485 Read the article posted above.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:52:00 2018 No.10510513 >>10507299 Reading this ruined my day. Is it a parody of bad writing?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 17:56:17 2018 No.10510531 File: 300 KB, 1080x1080, 1515434112152.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10509278 I took a stab at fixing it. What do you guys think?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 18:01:36 2018 No.10510554 >>10507299 people like him are the reason god doesn't talk to us anymore

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 18:08:35 2018 No.10510578
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>>10507299
>To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand CY. The humour is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of theoretical physics most of the jokes will go over a typical viewer’s head. There’s also CY’s nihilistic outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation- his personal philosophy draws heavily from Narodnaya Volya literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realise that they’re not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike CY truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn’t appreciate, for instance, the humour in CY’s existential catchphrase “Wubba Lubba Dub Dub,” which itself is a cryptic reference to Turgenev’s Russian epic Fathers and Sons. I’m smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as CY’s genius wit unfolds itself on their computer screens. What fools.. how I pity them. And yes, by the way, i DO have a CY tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It’s for the ladies’ eyes only- and even then they have to demonstrate that they’re within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand. Nothin personnel kid

God I hate "LITERARY" writing. Don't get me wrong, applause for him actually making what he wants to make and putting it out into the world, but I can only cringe so much.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 19:04:22 2018 No.10510795 this isn't me, this is the smell of my shit after morning coffee cigarettes and your cunt -c.y

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 19:06:00 2018 No.10510801 >>10507299 you have to understand that Rupi is liked because she is a woman, he is liked because he’s good looking. the culprit in both cases anon, is female stupidity and narcissism. massive self-own, this OP is

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 19:39:16 2018 No.10510935 >>10510801 DFW is adored by /lit/ for both of those reasons

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 19:39:43 2018 No.10510939 >>10507299 Sorry, baby, that I left a skid-mark accidentally on this chair. Does it pair well with this red or is my heart just falling out of my ass like my body is a stair- well? Well, you can decide that. -c.y.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:07:25 2018 No.10511038 >>10507308 It's like Skinner and Chalmers doing the cross talk routine

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:11:51 2018 No.10511051 △ △ △

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:13:50 2018 No.10511057 File: 19 KB, 400x400, gaylord.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] agreed

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:14:40 2018 No.10511058 >>10510939 >internal rhyme too intellectual, appropriate theme though. 6/10 mock-up minimalism

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:24:50 2018 No.10511078 lol come chat if you want about literature science and philosophy and the supernatural https://discord gg/c37NwyB

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:26:04 2018 No.10511083
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>>10510939
Listen, I';m a man
,i've drunk my sixpack of
sorrow while stripteased students
signed my paycheck - get me?
I've got a beard and spilt beer on my bedsheets
as the half-naked lady whose name I only
half remember
spilled out into the bathtub
I can hear it like
my lighter click
like the rain
because i'm a man whose stood in the rain
and fuck you if you haven;t
gotten wet
(i'm talking to the ladies now)

-c. y.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:32:26 2018 No.10511097 >>10511083 This was better than mine anon, I'm dying

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:51:33 2018 No.10511153 >>10507308 Voice of a generation

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:55:44 2018 No.10511165 >>10507509 your post is more cringe than any of his poems

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:56:49 2018 No.10511170 >>10511083 kekek

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 20:59:49 2018 No.10511183 >>10511083 fucking kek

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:09:22 2018 No.10511210 >>10509540 Because most smokers literally get addicted to something that kills them. Not the brightest of people

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:11:27 2018 No.10511217
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>>10508903
>“He deserves to be beaten up in a strip club parking lot, while Bukowski rolls by in a limo and does not notice.”
>Bukowski
seriously though what is the female fascination with him

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:13:08 2018 No.10511223 >>10511217 Hes the only male poet they know about.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:16:46 2018 No.10511234 >>10507332 makes u think dont it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:17:42 2018 No.10511238 >>10511217 >talking to a girl i met at a party >we start talking about music/art >she says she likes reading and writing poetry >oh yeah? who do you like? >Bukowski, the list goes on... every time

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:21:08 2018 No.10511248 File: 1.35 MB, 1639x1305, MERRYCHRISTMAS.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10509540 >like 70% of people smoke regularly What shit hole do you live in?

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:47:36 2018 No.10511329

>>10511083

My honey cums honeycombs
She stings my whiskey dick
No rubber, but I do rub her
If you know what I mean
The clap never felt more serene
And I swear as she breathes my name
The pain in my balls
Reminds me that I'm human
And I scream:
I'l remember you
until
the Cefixime™ kicks in
so fix me another drink
or just
fix me

-c. y.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:54:09 2018 No.10511353 WHY ARE THERE SO MANY GASPING GAY GIRLS IN THIS THREAD BEING OVERDRAMTIC AND QUEER

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:56:02 2018 No.10511359 File: 120 KB, 286x445, Screen Shot 2018-01-08 at 9.53.55 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:56:21 2018 No.10511361

yost does not smoke
there's a facebook group "terrible internet poetry that we still would love to read" or something and we used to ask yost questions in private and then post the answers on the group. i remember it always being hilarious. like one person asked him why he always put cigarettes in his instagram uploads and he was like "im working on something huge, and once people figure it out you're all gonna freak"

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 21:57:59 2018 No.10511367 >>10511359 >"dead beat" heh

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 22:09:17 2018 No.10511407 File: 157 KB, 992x880, 1447636143934.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10511359 imagine being this assblasted at a person writing poetry you don't like

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 22:48:29 2018 No.10511537 >>10508289 notice the packs are all full. If that's intentional, I could give him the benefit of the doubt for playing a fool purposefully.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 22:55:50 2018 No.10511563 >>10508045 did that here>>10507370

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 23:03:09 2018 No.10511581 File: 228 KB, 560x560, 1450751460973.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10511359 >dead beat

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 8 23:57:32 2018 No.10511806 File: 2.37 MB, 436x502, 1469646582002.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10508929 >yfw everything he said was right

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 00:06:05 2018 No.10511833 Still better than Raymond on Instagram.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 00:55:57 2018 No.10512008 >>10511407 spooked

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 01:02:15 2018 No.10512035 A Caucasoid homo sapiens of good breeding can only begin to produce mature writing at around age 40, at the very least.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 01:21:51 2018 No.10512107 >>10510278 I feel you brother The infidels however...

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:05:45 2018 No.10512288 >>10508929 >Writing is supposed to be controversial >Complains about controversy Really jogs the noggin

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:14:55 2018 No.10512326 >>10507299 "Why are most young people bad at doing things that require experience?" You avin a go?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:22:12 2018 No.10512351 File: 72 KB, 667x793, collin yost btfo.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:29:19 2018 No.10512368 i am now pro collin yost. haters get out

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:32:06 2018 No.10512372 >>10512351 >be like DROPPED

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:43:04 2018 No.10512402 >>10512351 Ugghh men are the worst

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:44:28 2018 No.10512408 >>10512351 This is a good post. Get over it you incel edgelords. Of course you could make a similar statement about female poets.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:47:45 2018 No.10512416 The amount of buttblasted incel betas is ASTOUNDING. Masculinity really is fragile, it takes nothing to trigger you manchildren :)

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:48:44 2018 No.10512420 >>10512408 Um sorry sweetie Females are beyond criticism

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:50:09 2018 No.10512425 >>10512416 rape is hilarious.

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:51:03 2018 No.10512429
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Out of interest, does posting poetry or flash fiction on an online social networking account create some sort of copyright? Like could this guy sue if someone else stole it? Or does the website "own" it?

I was thinking of releasing some of my flash online but wasnt sure of the laws?

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:51:19 2018 No.10512430

>>10512420
The amount of projection in this post is simply HILARIOUS. I'm literally laughing at all you whiny males and your fragile masculinity. Y'all make threads about how much y'all hate women in literature, but when someone makes something being critical of males, y'all go crazy. Truly shows how this board is full of insecure incels :)

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 02:57:50 2018 No.10512451 >>10512408 >implying a post of any kind can be good

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 03:27:07 2018 No.10512513 File: 57 KB, 444x545, 1477541340833.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10512430 >Y'all

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 03:34:20 2018 No.10512528

the fact that this thread has received this many replies while if I were to make a thread about Hart Crane it would die within 11 posts, speaks of how insecure and frivolous the majority who use this board are, and that they would rather receive quick gratification by taking cheap shots at the lowest hanging fruits than engage in any meaningful exercise or discourse. Not that I expected anything else, but it's all so tiresome

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 03:35:38 2018 No.10512530 >>10512351 kek btfo

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 03:36:41 2018 No.10512534 >>10512351 >be like Literal cultural appropriation sweetie

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 03:52:53 2018 No.10512560 >>10507377 >bro, literally every single one of his poems is about how much pussy he's smashing and how many drugs he's slamming Yeah that sure reads as his real, every day experience and not a desperate projected ideal self image.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 04:17:20 2018 No.10512600 >>10512351 Men don't use the word "vagina" in poetry. Women are completely obsessed with that word, though.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 04:27:11 2018 No.10512619 >>10507377 Le upvote for Kali Yuga

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 05:53:11 2018 No.10512741 >>10508835 haha

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 05:53:37 2018 No.10512742 Young black males don't even know how to write

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 05:58:23 2018 No.10512749 >>10512528

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 06:02:51 2018 No.10512755 >>10511407 you're in this thread, aren't you?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 06:07:21 2018 No.10512761 File: 39 KB, 500x500, og.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10512742 blocks your path

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 06:31:42 2018 No.10512802 >>10512761 why doesn't /lit/ acknowledge him like they do with Dylan

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 06:32:34 2018 No.10512805 >>10512802 cuz they raciss

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 06:44:27 2018 No.10512824 >>10512761 >>10512805 Btw I'm not referring to his message but his delivery and lyrical skill.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 07:12:58 2018 No.10512877 >>10512824 probably because hip-hop alienates a lot of people who post here.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 07:59:24 2018 No.10512975 >>10508339 Yung Lean was an ironic fuccboi who slowly forgot he was being ironic and became an actual fuccboi then got scared straight into being a semi-ironic semi-fuccboi

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:00:38 2018 No.10512979 >>10512408 Post tits sagging over that shit Brad wrote about you. Or go read your STRONK INDAPENDANT ANTI-DYSTOPIAN WOMBANHEROS.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:22:28 2018 No.10513031 >>10508884 LMAO

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:26:10 2018 No.10513036 >>10509458 He took it a step further, really. He's implying if you dislike his edgy poetry you are simply envious.LMAO

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:27:22 2018 No.10513040 honestly if i ever publish anything i'd do it under a pseudonym because i'm just too fucking embarassed

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:28:02 2018 No.10513041 File: 26 KB, 367x411, 1488845895077.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507299 >>10507308

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:30:24 2018 No.10513046 >>10513040 if you're embarassed about your work you might want to consider improving before you look for a publisher. and a spellcheck that knows how to spell embarrassed.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 08:30:52 2018 No.10513048 >>10510531 Well done >>10510795 Powerful >>10511083 He would be un ironically jealous of this line

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:20:51 2018 No.10513686 >>10511329 Unironically good satire

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:23:59 2018 No.10513695

>>10512351
female poets be like
i am the part of nature no one sees
unbridled but a bride to be
the ocean is full but i cannot see
i rhyme because I cant think in poetry.
I was raped when I was 17,
then when I was 22, it felt
the same with a different man,
but I was the same and the
violation was all different, like
the hurricane of my mind, my verses' wedding day

-every published female poet 21st century

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:24:28 2018 No.10513697
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>>10512802
>>10512824
>>10512877
I hate his voice, delivery, lyrics, basically everything about him. He's the ultimate 'finally something I can praise as a progressive liberal' rapper. 'Concious' rap is shit.

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:37:14 2018 No.10513743

To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand c.y.'s poetry. The humour is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of post-modernism most of the puns will go over a typical viewer’s head. There’s also c.y.'s fuccboi outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation- his personal philosophy draws heavily from Young Adult literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realise that they’re not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike c.y. truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn’t appreciate, for instance, the humour in Rick’s existential catchphrase “Don't like my work? Hate my aesthetic? Good,” which itself is a cryptic reference to Keats's romantic classic La Belle Dame Sans Merci. I’m smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as c.y.'s genius wit unfolds itself on their instagram. What fools.. how I pity them.

And yes, by the way, i DO have a cigarette tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It’s for the ladies’ eyes only- and even then they have to demonstrate that they’re within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand. Nothin personnel kid

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:38:39 2018 No.10513750 >>10513743 shit i left in a rick

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 12:41:37 2018 No.10513759 >>10512351 This is actually funny lmao

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 13:54:35 2018 No.10514079 >>10512528 (You) Happy? Now go away you narcissistic cunt; stop making this thread about you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:21:58 2018 No.10514185 Who is this supposed to be for? Chads don't read poetry, /lit/fags know its juvenile, and women who read poetry would find it misogynistic. My only guess is this is supposed to appeal to teenagers.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:31:58 2018 No.10514222 >>10511083 LOL

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:39:57 2018 No.10514255 >>10513695 hehe nice

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:54:04 2018 No.10514332 >>10514185 It's for people that are low IQ and like some "art" in their life

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:54:38 2018 No.10514337 Poetry was a mistake t. Calliope

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 14:56:02 2018 No.10514345 >>10514337 Yo muse Gimme that sweet poetic skillz

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 15:48:02 2018 No.10514581 >>10512755 there's a difference between mocking someone vs. turning into a colossal sperg that writes an essay to a person you've never met, because they said some words you don't like.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 15:55:10 2018 No.10514601 >>10511329 pretty good desu

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:00:13 2018 No.10514617 >>10507308 >A FUCKING PUN

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:01:55 2018 No.10514627 >>10514185 It's a parody

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:12:32 2018 No.10514667 >>10507944 Rimbaud might have been an edgy teenager but what he wrote had some depth to it and required quite a lot of effort. Plus prose poems existed long before him and he never used free verses.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:19:23 2018 No.10514684 >>10507531 >filename.jpeg

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:48:28 2018 No.10514786

She's mad
and I forgot the cheese
What a way
to start a poem.
Sense doesn't come
to me
this late in the night
not as clearly
as the moonlight.
Even if you
try to decide
what to do
it might just be too late
to write this poem.
Oh !
And I forgot the cheese.

-- Is this better than the shit is writing ?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:53:18 2018 No.10514797 >>10514667 that's wrong tho, since there are two free verse poems, it's Marine and Mouvement

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:53:56 2018 No.10514799
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>>10512761
>>10512824
Ay, I remember syrup sandwiches and crime allowances
Finesse a nigga with some counterfeits
But now I'm countin' this
Parmesan where my accountant lives
In fact, I'm downin' this
D'USSÉ with my boo bae, tastes like Kool-Aid for the analysts
Girl, I can buy yo' ass the world with my paystub
Ooh, that pussy good, won't you sit it on my taste bloods?
I get way too petty once you let me do the extras
Pull up on your block, then break it down: we playin' Tetris

wow what art, truly a black Yeats or Browning

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 16:58:25 2018 No.10514817 File: 44 KB, 400x204, 1513810779456.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10513036 >if you don't like something you're jealous

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 18:07:10 2018 No.10515097 >>10507299 I've went over his instagram and I'm sure he'a trolling us big time otherwise he's mentally ill. This guy lives in a fucking hipster bubble.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 19:16:52 2018 No.10515339 >>10509302 >bring me the horizon tattoo

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 19:22:52 2018 No.10515364 You stare at me, like you stare at your morning coffee; hoping i'd wake you from this bad dream of a relationship

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 19:27:33 2018 No.10515388 >>10513695 tweet it at her

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 19:34:23 2018 No.10515422

>>10508289
The cigarette is his phallus. His texts pretend to obsess about the female while he is truly just obsessed with ways to fixate his libido, especially orally, which shows also in the crude way he is expressing himself. His writing about hear smearing her lipstick somewhere is him fantsising about her being drown into his oral problems. He also fears being left by his female companion, because she could notice he is too weak and too immature, which is expressed in the picture with the destroyed cigarette. From a transactional standpoint his script is destroying himself through suffering by others and self harm, while putting up a strong front (look at how I can suffer) am not okay and you are okay. He allows the female everything because he thinks she is just with him for the empty „cool“ nihilistic persona he puts up and will leave him the very moment she finds out he is so deficient. Which is when he will start to smoke more, get more tattoos, drink more and get an even worse slut who will leave him at some point.

female poets be like Tue Jan 9 20:17:44 2018 No.10515588

[Hook]
Hump me, fuck me
Daddy better make me choke (you better)
Hump me, fuck me
My tunnel loves to deep throat (it do)
Lick, lick, lick, lick (I lick it)
I want to eat yo' dick (I do)
But I can't fuck up my nails (I can't)
So I'mma pick it up with chopsticks

[Bridge]
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Mouth wide open like I was at the dentist
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Put it so deep, I can't speak a sentence
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Mouth wide open like I was at the dentist
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Put it so deep I can't speak a sentence

[Verse 1]
My fingers in it, gentle
Explore this nigga mental
I'mma write my name on his dick
Don't need a pen or a pencil
All I need is my body
My pussy pink just like salami
Don't need no drink to get naughty
Cause bitch I'm not Bill Cosby
My pussy mean, and it's clean
I'm not a squirter, I cream
Keep it smelling like baby wipes
I never smell like sardines
This will never fucking end
Ballerina that dick when I spin
I fucked this nigga so good
I ain't swallow one kid, I think I swallowed twins

[Bridge]
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Mouth wide open like I was at the dentist
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Put it so deep, I can't speak a sentence
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Mouth wide open like I was at the dentist
Mouth wide open, mouth wide open
Put it so deep I can't speak a sentence

[Verse 2]
Just come put it down my butt
Let's shoot a movie, no cuts
Ride the dick, get my nipples licked
That's breastfeeding while we fuck
Finna get the dick wet and firm
You better sweat me out of my perm
Can't wait till it's my turn
I wanna blow bubbles with sperm
Wanna hit it from the back
Let me arch my back
Once I arch my back
That mean attack this pussy
Don't need a pornstar
Cause I'm the moderin'
All my spit on his dick
Sound like I'm gargling
Make him bust three nuts, is the task
My panties stuck in my ass
So I pulled them down to show him the pearl
Made his pubic hairs curl fast

[Outro]
Fuck this pussy x12

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 20:28:11 2018 No.10515634 >>10515588 Based

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 20:53:06 2018 No.10515746 File: 19 KB, 272x271, 1492983912058.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507308

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 20:57:43 2018 No.10515771
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>>10507388
I am concerned with instagram personalities thinking they are poets, then through some perverse digital popularity contest become rich and famous. That shouldn't be how it works.

That being said, I don't think anyone is cutting this guy a cheque any time soon

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 21:52:30 2018 No.10516010 File: 28 KB, 552x361, anxious anon.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] /pol/ has better poetry than this guy

Anonymous Tue Jan 9 23:06:16 2018 No.10516447
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>>10507299
>Why are young white male LIBERALS so awful at writing?
Because the current education system teaches people that all things are equal--both the interesting and the uninteresting, the intelligent and the stupid.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 23:35:10 2018 No.10516598 >>10516447 er no, just young white males.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 9 23:38:54 2018 No.10516623 >>10516447 back to /pol/ you go :)

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 10 01:11:05 2018 No.10516963 >>10507299 This is is to Rupi's poetry as high school is to junior high - a very slight improvement in some ways, but still shit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 10 02:33:45 2018 No.10517190 File: 449 KB, 576x792, 0204389205332.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10507558

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