/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.10249418]

at what point does using the word "nigger" become artistically unacceptable?
I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
Is this too much? I want to write realistically but does there come a point where it detracts from the artistry?
It's a modern day story dealing with many present-day social issues and my main character is what most would consider a "racist" and so he is very flippant with the word's use but I'm worried that publishers will not accept my novella or see its artistic merit because of this and instead condemn it for being insensitive or intentionally inflammatory. But how else am I supposed to write this sort of character?
How often should I use the word?

[Anonymous No.10249423]

At any point, you pussy.

[Anonymous No.10249425]

>1 word out of 5
I think you might be a little bit obsessed with biggers, op

[Anonymous No.10249426]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

[Anonymous No.10249443]

ive been banned from /lit/ for posting the word 'nigger' before.

[Anonymous No.10249458]

>>10249418
You're full of shit, OP. Nobody could write a novel with every fifth word being "nigger."

Prove it by posting an excerpt within the next five minutes.

[Anonymous No.10249464]

>>10249443
Naturally

[Anonymous No.10249469]

>>10249418
>>10249426
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

[Anonymous No.10249472]

>>10249458
here you go. It's a first-person narrative:
>The nigger looked like every other nigger, his niggerdom obscuring any humanity that might have lurked within all that niggerness. His niggereyes and his niggerlips smacked of niggerlust. Niggerhands that could neither love nor heal but only grope niggerloving whores. There are many of those nowadays. It is a nigger’s world filled with niggers who know nothing but niggerways. So the world shall become a nigger too. It is already as violent as a nigger. Already as diseased as a nigger. Already the world has been remade in the nigger's image.

plus a lot of my dialogue has either blacks using nigga or whites from the 4chan type of communities using it in the same casual way that has become prevalent today.
>sandnigger
>potatonigger
etc.

[Anonymous No.10249481]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
May I have a link to this literary masterpiece, please?

[Anonymous No.10249492]

>>10249472
I represent a very large publisher, and would like to discuss your representation and book/film deal.

[Anonymous No.10249499]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
>one out of every 5 words is nigger
So I had the dumb nigger go to his nigger house with his nigger wife, and this dumb nigger asks himself, "How did I, a nigger, get here?"
Letting the niggers go by, let the niggers hold me down, into the blue again, after the niggers are gone. Once in a nigger, niggers flowing undernigger.

[Anonymous No.10249505]

>>10249499
How Dickensian.

[Anonymous No.10249510]

This is the best thread on /lit/ right now.

[Anonymous No.10249511]

>>10249418
Somebody make this a /lit/ banner

[Anonymous No.10249512]

>>10249418
I don't belive you. You are just shitposting, shame on you.

[Anonymous No.10249514]

>>10249472
Please publish this on /lit/.
Also that's not a first-person narrative but I guess you know that.

[Anonymous No.10249524]

While my own work does not contain nearly as many uses of the word, I do find it appropriate to post an excerpt from my forthcoming anthropological work, Among the Niggers.

Among the Niggers

By

Dr. Reginald F. Queensbottom

--------

Author's forward:

I make clear that I am no Nigger lover, nor do I hate them. This report is not to make any blanketed statements regarding all, most, or even some Niggers. My words as they are written here are only to describe these specific Niggers, as they were encountered in their unaltered, Nigger habitat.

I have only attempted to come, in an close as my finite time, energies, and resources would allow, to accurate depictions of this fascinating and complex species. Should any facts come into dispute, I accept the fullest responsibility for any inconsistencies within the body of emerging field work, made by those who seek this important work.

[Anonymous No.10249527]

>>10249524
cont'


October 21st, 2010

I was asleep, and then awakened by the sound of a Nigger's gunshots. I count maybe 7 or 8 shots, in the small pistol round.

Ensuring all light in the immediate area is extinguished, I quickly spot the Nigger who was just attacked by another savage Nigger. By the time I am able to clearly see what has happened, the attacking Nigger has already rifled the fallen Nigger.

---

March 12, 2011

The Niggers were drumming and chanting again. The beat added at least 10 degrees to the ambient, rhythmically transforming the unseasonable October heat into an acceptable tropical norm.

The chanting got louder. While it could not be seen, it could be inferred that the Niggers were reaching some kind of fevered apex of chanting and drumming in which the throat of a goat would be slashed, it'
s blood captured in a golden bowl and held high before being chugged by the Nigger Priest.

[Anonymous No.10249531]

>>10249527
Con't

--
July 7, 2011

I was riding on the train and it full of an unusually high number of Niggers. A Nigger woman sat next to me, and I could only hear one half of her phone conversation.
"I know you got locked up. You shouldn't even a been with them. You know REDACTED been locked up before...."
"I know."
"I hope you told them that."
"You a be out soon enough."
"I know."
"I know it's hard, but you got to stop crying."
"You got to stop crying, baby. People will see you crying."
"Baby."

---
November 5, 2011

Some niggers had gathered in a line to recieve free food. Word quickly spreads among the Niggers wherever there is free food, be it in church

----
December 18, 2011

I am on the subway, and a Nigger is across from me, pants down, hand glistening in petroleum jelly. Don't look. Don't look when the Nigger starts wiping the petroleum jelly on his flaccid, chapped penis and testicles.

[Anonymous No.10249535]

>>10249531
OP's book is better, if it exists.

[Anonymous No.10249543]

>>10249535
Well let's see your nigger book, then.

[Anonymous No.10249559]

>>10249472
Finish the story and publish it on /lit/. This is a great meme to be honest dude

From a serious literary perspective though, you have to tone it down with the use of the word nigger. Only /pol/ will read that shit and even they will get bored with such repetition, because that's essentially what you're doing. Develop that character from being a complete racist dropping the "N bomb" into one that the reader is forced to understand and kind of like even and then you might be on to something. Whether it's the word nigger or any other you're using way too much repetition. It can be autistic

[Anonymous No.10249566]

there's no way a real story uses nigger as 1/5 of its words unless it has a like 20 page digression of nigger nigger nigger
please post

[Anonymous No.10249570]

OP... easy on the nignogs...

[Anonymous No.10249577]

>>10249418
how the fuck is it every 5 words ahhahahhaha this doesn't exist you lying

[Anonymous No.10249581]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
this is my favourite day

[Anonymous No.10249585]

He sounds like he might be very one-dimensional. Go hang with the KKK, see what they're like when not obsessing over ethnicity.

[Anonymous No.10249621]

okay here is a 500 word excerpt from it
I don't really want to post any more of it on here

[Anonymous No.10249642]

>>10249621
It just gets better and better.
We are humbled.

[Anonymous No.10249646]

What, OP, does the Nigger symbolize?

[Anonymous No.10249648]

>>10249621
>>10249472
>>10249418
This... This is why I come to 4chan

[Anonymous No.10249649]

>>10249621
You're a fucking lunatic.

[Anonymous No.10249655]

>>10249649
Try the redpill, cuck

[Anonymous No.10249657]

>>10249621
A fine piece of niggerature.

[Anonymous No.10249660]

>>10249621
>The tumult of the niggers
Holy fuck that line.
Is that the title?

[Anonymous No.10249665]

>>10249621
You could have typed that just right now, I still not belive you.
>>10249646
The way the world comes up to you when that feel when no girlfriend becomes cripling and chronic

[Anonymous No.10249667]

>>10249621
This is the best thing I've seen online in weeks.

[Anonymous No.10249671]

Would’ve been hilarious if you used almost any other word for the joke.

[Anonymous No.10249678]

>>10249671
What on earth could you possibly mean? This is perfection written by a man of our times.

[Anonymous No.10249682]

>>10249671
I actually might do this desu just so it stands a chance of being published.
just mass-replace the word with something like "gumdrops" and say it is an avant-garde commentary on socio-political inequities

[Anonymous No.10249689]

>>10249682
>a chance of being published.
You have no idea what a self-castrating move this would be.
Would the Turner Diaries be the revered classic it is if the Main Characters went out shooting water guns at "gumdrops?"
You know nothing of art.

[Anonymous No.10249707]

>>10249678
No, it’s transformed into something completely different because he tried to shoehorn low hanging edgy humor into it. The best word to use might’ve been something innocuous and boring like “window” or “car.” With his version, the actual, great joke has to share half a stage with a low brow, edgy joke.

[Anonymous No.10249719]

>>10249707
You clearly do not understand what you have read.
>pearlsbeforeswine.webm

[Anonymous No.10249748]

>>10249418
It is not a problem if your work has artistic merit.

[Anonymous No.10249791]

>>10249621
Even if you just wrote this as a joke, reevaluate your life

[Anonymous No.10249843]

>>10249791
>>10249707
>muh white guilt
Neck yourself, more than half the niggers in this planet are sick of your overbearing attempt at protecting them for your own ego.

[Anonymous No.10249869]

>>10249648
same, praise kek

[Anonymous No.10249919]

>>10249621
im a leftist faggot and i think this is gold.
definetly publish it op.

[Anonymous No.10249928]

>>10249843
If I meet you, I will crush you.

[Anonymous No.10249942]

>>10249621
I would pay you for this, OP

[Anonymous No.10249964]

>/pol/ visits /lit/
include me in the screencap pls

[Anonymous No.10249972]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
so your novel is roughly 22% nigger
>>10249472
>here you go. It's a first-person narrative:
this excerpt is 17% nigger
>>10249621
>okay here is a 500 word excerpt from it
and this one only 12%

wouold you please post an excerpt with a more dense use of the word?

[Anonymous No.10249980]

>>10249621
post more shit nigger. It's fucking great

[Anonymous No.10249988]

>>10249964
>>>/pol/148770570

me too

[Anonymous No.10249999]

>>10249443
as you should be

[Anonymous No.10250007]

>>10249972
I hypothesis that there are entire chapters that are simply the word 'nigger' scattered throughout the novella

[Anonymous No.10250012]

>>10249972
agreed, those numbers ain't adding up OP.
I bet there's a passage though where the protag is going crazy and just says "NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER o hi mark NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER"

[Anonymous No.10250014]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
I love /lit/

[Anonymous No.10250021]

>>10249972
it wouldn't have a solid 22% distribution everywhere, that's not how percentages of this kind work

[Anonymous No.10250023]

>>10249621
>niggardly

[Anonymous No.10250025]

>>10249418
>>10249472

I like this. Keep going.

[Anonymous No.10250029]

How could fools ever get tired?

[Anonymous No.10250030]

>>10250021
But that means there have to be sections with significantly more than 22% being the word nigger. It would be incredibly difficult to write coherently with any one word making up almost 30% of the words in a paragraph.

[Anonymous No.10250032]

>>10249621
Reminds me of McCarthy to be honest

[Anonymous No.10250034]

>>10250012
There may very well be but who doesn't do this from time to time? Makes the main character more real and relatable

[Anonymous No.10250038]

>>10249972
>>10250007
>>10250012
>>10250021
>>10250030

I like how we are doing "nigger" distribution statistics now.

[Anonymous No.10250054]

>>10249682

Dont do that it’s literally perfect the way it is. It’s true art that isn’t being stifled by political correctness. I’d say it’s a modern masterpiece desu.

[Anonymous No.10250060]

>>10249999
shit nigger, those quads

[Anonymous No.10250077]

>>10249972
I have stuff where it gets more dense, very stream-of-consciousness type thing but they aren't as accessible so I didn't post from those parts.
this is around 300 words I think

[Anonymous No.10250078]

>>10250077
publish this please and give a copy to dave chappelle.

[Anonymous No.10250079]

>>10250077
holy hell
thank you

[Anonymous No.10250085]

>>10249621
You had one job.

[Anonymous No.10250108]

Modern Niggetheus

[Anonymous No.10250127]

Seriously OP, post it somewhere, I will pay good money for this.

[Anonymous No.10250137]

>>10250085
That stood out to me as well.

[Anonymous No.10250152]

>>10250032

[Anonymous No.10250163]

>>10249621
I could not get through a 55,000 word novella if you use Nigger THIS much. It just gets annoying and absurd (not in a good way).
I think the writing is actually quite good, but the repetition of that word gets so old to the point that it's insufferable.

[Anonymous No.10250177]

>>10250163
>repetition of that word gets so old to the point that it's insufferable.
You have to go back.

[Anonymous No.10250189]

>>10250163
roastie spotted

[Anonymous No.10250212]

>>10249418
Op if this is real and you try and publish you're going to have to pretend to be a reclusive black man.

[Anonymous No.10250217]

Is this an excerpt from your book, OP?
>Alas, poor nigger! I knew him, nigger, a fellow of infinite niggardry, of most excellent fancy, nigger. He hath borne me, like a nigger, on his nigger a thousand times, and now, how abhorred in my niggerlike imagination it is! My nigger rises at it. Here hung those nigger lips that I have kissed I know not how oft, nigger. —Where be your niggers now, nigger? Your niggers? Your nigger songs? Your niggers of merriment that were wont to set the table on a nigger? Not one nigger now to mock your own grinniggering? Quite chapfallen? Now get you to my nigger's nigger and tell her, let her paint a nigger thicc, to this nigger she must come. Make her laugh at that nigger.—Prithee, nigger, tell me one thing. Nigger nigger nigger.

[Anonymous No.10250247]

>>10249499
The Hand Speaks!

[Anonymous No.10250258]

>>10250077
Tone it down a little bit

[Anonymous No.10250268]

>>10249621
this is the best /lit/ original content I've seen, fantastic job

[Anonymous No.10250276]

>>10249418
If 1/5 of all your words are the same word then maybe your writing is weak and repetitive

[Anonymous No.10250285]

>>10250085
he doesn't want to be repetitive

[Anonymous No.10250298]

>>10249418
The issue of voluntary suppression of speech by way of monetary coercion is the nigger in the woodpile of the first amendment.

[Anonymous No.10250300]

>>10249621
>no "oily smarts"
bye bitch

[Anonymous No.10250303]

>>10249418
>Racists saying nigger that much not having a 250 iq

[Anonymous No.10250324]

>>10249621
>niggernotions
just one piece of gold from this masterpiece. put me in the screencap

[Anonymous No.10250326]

>>10250189
>>10250177
Nigger Nigger Nigger Nigger
I don't have a problem with the word itself, any noun repeated that much would be too much is what I'm saying

[Anonymous No.10250337]

>>10250326
thats the kind of niggernotion you'd expect from a nigger

[Anonymous No.10250354]

>tfw OP writes like Oscar Wilde/Mark Twain
https://iwl.me/

[Anonymous No.10250357]

>>10250337
niggers

[Anonymous No.10250384]

>>10249621
Where can I pre-order your book

[Anonymous No.10250391]

Posting in an epic thread

[Anonymous No.10250440]

>>10250077

I'm not even joking: self-publish this text. Put it out there. Some anons will help you spread the word. People will hear about it, be disgusted, and then some Derrida-type academic will write an essay defending it, particularly your use of compound words (with, of course, the n-word attached to the beginning)

[Anonymous No.10250457]

>>10250440
This, anon. Do this.

[Anonymous No.10250468]

Man, I could see academics reading ALL kinds of shit into this. But yeah OP, definitely pretend to be black.

[Anonymous No.10250473]

>>10249418
Pls self publish m8, I'd pay $100 for a signed first print copy.

[Anonymous No.10250516]

>>10249418
Going for the book version of https://genius.com/Gangsta-rap-nigga-nigga-nigga-lyrics ?

[Anonymous No.10250518]

>>10249621
haha nigger XD

[Anonymous No.10250529]

>>10249621
Terrific. I'm thinking a blacked out sequel to Legacy of Totalitarianism in a Tundra. Maybe something like Legacy of an Olive Pit in an Oil Slick or something.

I would read your novel anon.

[Anonymous No.10250608]

>>10249621
On the one hand, I think you need to mix it up with various forms of nigger. On the other hand, simplicity in a motif is something to strive for, for a unique aesthetic in its' own right.

[Anonymous No.10250617]

>>10249621
Sperg-tastic

[Anonymous No.10250651]

No way, a passage please, there is just no way
Roughly 1 out of every 5 words

[Anonymous No.10250656]

>>10249418
>at what point does using the word "nigger" become artistically unacceptable?
Never . Why would a word ever become unacceptable artistically? As it is with any word of phrase over use should be avoided to improve quality of the work, but if you can't write a racist character without using nigger every sentence then you can't write a racist character.

Plain and simple

[Anonymous No.10250666]

>tfw in school
>have to read a paragraph from a short story outloud, its my turn
>the passage countains the words "nigger", twice
>fear of what classmates will think but want to show sexy milf english teacher my bravery
>drop the nigger with the hardest r imaginable for emphasis
>whole class applauds me
>tfw best feeling of entire life

[Anonymous No.10250697]

>>10250651
Read the thread, nigger.

[Anonymous No.10250701]

>>10250651
Most niggerish post I've seen all day

[Anonymous No.10250721]

>section posted is only 12% nigger
>entire book is 22% nigger
>there must be sections significantly more nigger than the posted section

[Anonymous No.10250728]

OP I've had this tab open all day, post more you nigger.

[Anonymous No.10250753]

[Anonymous No.10250782]

>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

>Is this too much?

[Anonymous No.10250786]

>>10250077

This reads like Ginsburg or something. I am impressed.

It's also good as an insight into the mind of a /pol/ user.

[Anonymous No.10250787]

>>10250666

[Anonymous No.10250790]

>>10249418
It becomes artistically unacceptable at 2/5ths nigger

[Anonymous No.10250795]

>>10249472

This is beyond genius. I died.

[Anonymous No.10250818]

>>10250790
>>10249418
You're in the clear op

[Anonymous No.10250828]

>>10249621

I'm an (admittedly Hispanic) /pol/lack and I've gotten so used to nigger that this sounds like my actual thought processcess: like I think "No, I can do that niggershit later." I use the term 'niggershit' to describe just about anything on a regular basis. Or "Get out of my way nigger" or "Why's she speaking to that nigger". At the smallest of inconveniences I internally scream "Motherfucking nigger!". Internet is slow? "Motherfucking nigger!" A solicitor calls me? "Motherfucking nigger!" and so on. Just today a Healthcare representative nigger bitch (see?) was talking too long and I kept thinking "Hurry the fuck up, nigress; I hope you get raped by a niggers." X 10. This excerpt isn't as far-fetched as it may seem.

[Anonymous No.10250829]

>>10249621

I love your usage of 'niggardly'

[Anonymous No.10250832]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

I know this is bullshit but can some autist here analyse whether this is syntactically possible lmao

[Anonymous No.10250842]

>>10250440
idk, it's nowhere near being ready to publish but I'd love to give it to you guys if it was. as you can see I still have a lot of grammatical mistakes and editing takes me forever

>>10250651
>>10250721
well, I have portions like pic related where I play with the typography using "nigger" and so that pads it a bit

>>10250728
thanks friend here's more but this is the last I'm going to post

>>10250786
I'm not /pol/ I'm just past the point of caring

[Anonymous No.10250848]

>>10250842
HOLY FUCK

[Anonymous No.10250853]

>>10250842
You're a fucking wild man OP

[Anonymous No.10250862]

>>10249621
this is unprintable. but is genius.
we need more of this kind of originality.

[Anonymous No.10250863]

>>10250842
jesus fucking christ OP

[Anonymous No.10250877]

>>10250862
>unprintable
Yet here it is, printed before all the world.
What a time to be alive.

[Anonymous No.10250889]

>>10250842
I can't even be mad. Do those count as two more niggers?

[Anonymous No.10250894]

>>10250828
that is not a good thing my ethnic friend

>>10250832
it is with compound words, look at some of the texts posted itt they're pretty close

[Anonymous No.10250899]

>>10249426
Why is this not a banner

[Anonymous No.10250900]

>>10250842
The word count doesn't even include the big "nigger" made out of smaller "nigger". So there's even more than 11,986 of them n-words.

[Anonymous No.10250921]

>tfw you realize all the time wasted on this board was not in vain
>tfw you realize nothing will ever surpass this shining paragon of peak /lit/ performance

[Anonymous No.10250960]

Best shitpost I've ever had the pleasure of finding myself. Please, keep 4chan great. Let me know when I can buy the book. This thread is immortal.

[Anonymous No.10250974]

">nigger"

[Anonymous No.10251016]

>>10249621
HOLY FUCK THIS IS GOOD

[Caulfield No.10251051]

>>10250842
This is pure fucking gold holy nigger shit

[Anonymous No.10251066]

>>10249472
T. Steve the drunk

[Anonymous No.10251075]

>>10251066
>there are tasteless faggots that like 'swedgin: the one man costume show' on my patrician board

[Anonymous No.10251091]

>>10250842
nigger you a genius

[Anonymous No.10251110]

>>10249621
>imagine being the intern at penguin who has to summarise this submission for his boss

[Anonymous No.10251137]

>>10249648
ahah same, praise kek shadilay ahah

[Anonymous No.10251184]

Since the dawn of history the negro has owned the continent of Africa - rich beyond the dream of a poet's fancy, crunching acres of diamonds beneath his bare black feet. Yet he never picked one up from the dust until a white man showed to him its glittering light. His land swarmed with powerful and docile animals, yet he never dreamed a harness, cart, or sled. A hunter be necessity, he never made an axe, spear, or arrowhead worth preserving beyond the moment of its use. He lived as an ox, content to graze for an hour. In a land of stone and timber he never sawed a foot of lumber, carved a block, or built a house save of broken sticks and mud. With league on league of ocean strand and miles of inland seas, for four thousand years he watched their surface ripple under the wind, heard the thunder of the surf on his beach, the howl of the storm over his head, gazed on the dim blue horizon calling him to worlds that lie beyond, and yet he never dreamed a sail.

[Anonymous No.10251194]

>>10251184
Why should any man work to escape utopia?

[Anonymous No.10251248]

You're doing God's work, OP.

[Anonymous No.10251254]

Submit it to NaNoWriMo.

[Anonymous No.10251273]

>>10249621
>at night the niggers come out, brave in the absence of light

[Anonymous No.10251294]

holy fudges put me in the screencap

[Anonymous No.10251352]

Please publish this in some form

[Anonymous No.10251390]

>>10249472
That's actually not bad in terms of style, the content is awful though.

Post more.

[Anonymous No.10251414]

>>10249621

Write for me the best prose in the world, or I'll eat your sou-

[Anonymous No.10251415]

>>10249418
some of you guys are alright

[Anonymous No.10251425]

>>10249418
>>10249621
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.
HAHAHAHAHAHAAA
this is b8 right? :D

[Anonymous No.10251431]

>>10249621
OP I want to be the first to read your masterpiece!

[Anonymous No.10251439]

>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

[Anonymous No.10251470]

tfw you read the initial manuscript of a modern masterpiece of literature on 4chan.

You are /lit/erally the next Dostoevsky/ Nietzsche / any other amazing writers who's writing have changed human society forever.

God bless op.

I can not wait to read the 'Legacy of the Nigger'

[Anonymous No.10251476]

>>10251470

[Anonymous No.10251479]

I love you man
publish this

[Anonymous No.10251574]

Wouldproudlydisplayonshelf/10
Considering my former biology teacher self published his abysmal fantasy erotica you got to get this out. If you don't want to carry the financial burden go to kickstarter.

[Anonymous No.10251627]

>>10250790
hmmm you were close to making a 3/5ths compromise joke

[Anonymous No.10251679]

>>10251075
>yfw Deadwood is the closest /tv/ will ever get to /lit/
>(and also when you will never be David Milch snorting cocaine and gambling while taking classes at Yale and TA-ing for Robert Penn Warren)

I honestly love Deadwood though.

[Anonymous No.10251710]

>>10249621
Fuck off quentin

[Anonymous No.10251729]

OP, the only potential issue I see with your excerpts - which are some of the best things to come out of /lit/ in a long, long time - is your occasional use of the word niggardly. It's not clearly inappropriate in your uses, but etymologically it's unrelated to nigger. Phonetically it sounds similar (and therefore its use has been the cause of controversy now and then), but it's a fine enough word that doesn't need to be (nigger)tarred with association with the (nigger)word nigger.

[Anonymous No.10251733]

Got have a solid nigger-to-rest ratio in your work but don't overdo it

[Anonymous No.10251741]

>>10251679
>Deadwood is the closest /tv/ will ever get to /lit/

[Anonymous No.10251751]

>>10251741
I mean, I guess Kieślowski's Dekalog is closer, but it was done as a one-off and not an ongoing multi-season series that had to meet commercial network demands.

[Anonymous No.10251787]

>>10249418
>>10249621
>>10250077
>>10250842

I am genuinely impressed OP, this book needs to be brought to the light of day. I can't imagine there is a single publishing company that would publish your book, but if you were to self-publish then I would happily buy this book. You are clearly a fucked up individual, but you may also be a genius.

[Anonymous No.10251793]

Nursultan Golonbekov
Arkady Swinorylov
Iskander Hachovskii
Lyosha Dobrolubow

[Anonymous No.10251805]

>>10251751
>likes derivative melodramatic trash with flat characters and wooden acting
>kneejerks to babby's first criterion when cockslapped
All that's left is to namedrop Godard or Bunuel and you're all set for being a quintessential /tv/ pseud.

[Anonymous No.10251818]

>>10251805
OK kind niggeranon. thank you for showing me the niggererror of my niggerways.

[Anonymous No.10251821]

>>10251110
"Well you see, it's, uh... Well the headline is that this is most important work on American race relations since the dawn Langston Hughs. The long story is a bit more complex...."

[Anonymous No.10251823]

>>10249621
Is the viewpoint character a nigger?

[Anonymous No.10251831]

>>10251710
Quintin masturbates to the niggerest of niggerfeet while wishing he could compose niggerverse of this calibre.

[Anonymous No.10251833]

Isaak Noviy
Bladyn Khoroshiy
Sergay Gun'ko
Leonid Bergolts
Pynya Karamazov
Lyoshenka Kyshtymsky
Abu Namazov

[Anonymous No.10251876]

>>10251833
bunch of niggers

[Anonymous No.10251888]

[Anonymous No.10251901]

>>10251888
Please include this >>10249972 post

[Anonymous No.10251905]

Self-publish, anons will deliver help

[Anonymous No.10251923]

>>10251901
Fine.

[Anonymous No.10251944]

>>10250900
it also doesn't count negress, which he writes negress sometimes instead of nigeress

[Anonymous No.10251952]

>>10250842
beautiful

[Anonymous No.10251955]

>>10250842
you are a fantastic writer, you should edit it first though

[Anonymous No.10251961]

>>10251944
>he writes negress instead of nigeress
That probably stems from him not being illiterate.

[Anonymous No.10251970]

Full list of niggers from this thread

Gunno Padalsky
Gavnar Samoiloff
Reonid Sadkov
Aruslam Jidkiy
Artur Dan'ko
Ebolay Samolnikov
Egor Gaidar
Vasily Pupin
Isay Solzhenitsyn
Sergei Kara-Murza
Analom Bedromsky
Sergay Chabyshev
Semyon Gniloy
Alexey Podorozhnik
Eduar Golozhopov
Arkady Severnii
Pynya Piterskii
Ogr Gremeliy
Havi Nashiev
Leonid Nureev
Alexandr Olshansky
Boris Gryzlov
Eban Okunev
Isaak Noviy
Bladyn Khoroshiy
Sergay Gun'ko
Leonid Bergolts
Pynya Karamazov
Lyoshenka Kyshtymsky
Abu Namazov
Nursultan Golonbekov
Arkady Swinorylov
Iskander Hachovskii
Lyosha Dobrolubow
Juri Mamleev
Alexandr Smokovsky
Dimitri Yascherov
Nikolay Dudko
Petuh Opucshenny
Petr Golozubov
Arkadiy Mamantov
Grinya Sopleebov
Perdun Stariy
Kirill Rokopsky
Davyd Korolko
Nikolay Hkyovyi
Marat Tuporyliy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qTv7VX5n2l4

[Anonymous No.10251999]

>>10249621
Excellent use of 'niggardly' and 'kikes'

[Anonymous No.10252018]

>>10251961
No, negress is used frequently as well, so I think it's fair. in fact, i'd say it's more common than nigeress, I feel like nigeress could be seen as trying to cheat the word count a little, even (except when he makes it clear that he's saying nigger-ess, I liked that).

[Anonymous No.10252025]

Junger is niggar? Why him photo on the open post?

[Anonymous No.10252029]

>>10252025
He's a jew.

[Anonymous No.10252037]

>>10251999
Lold

[Anonymous No.10252043]

>>10250899
This. Let that be a banner, because that is gold, shitpost or not.

[Anonymous No.10252055]

>>10249418
>I just did a search for nigger in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results.

[Anonymous No.10252182]

Put me in the screencap this truly is a modern masterpiece

[Anonymous No.10252188]

>>10250753
Godspeed anon

[Anonymous No.10252369]

>>10251923
Why are you including this

>>10249524
>>10249527
>>10249531


it's not the OP

[Anonymous No.10252369,2]

>>10252369,1
Jesus christ

[Anonymous No.10252369,3]

>>10252369,1
Bots are getting way too smart, unlike niggers.

[Anonymous No.10252369,4]

OP please seek mental help

[Anonymous No.10252369,5]

>>10252369,4
please seek another nigger dick in your asshole you nigger loving white guilt normalfag

[Anonymous No.10252369,6]

If OP has returned to this archive, could you please post a download to your full novella, or even have it be a book TLOTIAT style, I’d buy it OP

[Anonymous No.10252369,7]

nigger

[Anonymous No.10252369,8]

Attention all wh*te motherfuckers in this thread. Your women are infatuated with the Alpha Black male and the fortitude of his magnificent BBC, your genetics have completely atrophied to the point that you can't even win a fist fight against anybody, and the Black Race's skills have only gotten stronger through hardship and cultural strength. If it isn't completely clear to you yet, wh*te boy, the race war that lasted centuries is over and you have lost it completely. It was a good fight bro and you lasted long and hard but in the end the victor was obvious from the start. We were taking control of all your women through rap and good looks, while you were jerking off to underage anime ladies. Well, say sionara to your culture, wh*te bread, because it no longer exists in this new era. The Alpha Black male now owns everything that you used to own by rule of might. Every time you see an Alpha Black male in the street, make sure and bow down to him so that he does not smite you with his unstoppable BBC. Show respect to every African Master that you talk to online or in the real world, if you know what's good for you. Accepting your new place as a peasant for the Alpha Black Male that puts you to work is your only option of survival. Don't want to listen? Then you're going to get F'd up for real.

[Anonymous No.10252369,9]

any updated on this?

[Anonymous No.10252369,10]

I NEED MORE, niggerman, please post more excerpts.

[Anonymous No.10252369,11]

If OP is reading this, you need to give us the rest.

[Anonymous No.10252369,12]

niggeranon, you are a talented individual and your writing reminds me of Faulkner and parts of Ulysses. I hope you finish this even if you only wrote the sections you screenshotted to prank /lit/. You are a very good writer.

[Anonymous No.10252369,13]

still thinking about this, hope it gets finished

[Anonymous No.10252369,14]

please finish op

[Anonymous No.10252369,15]

please finish

[Anonymous No.10252369,16]

OP pls

[Anonymous No.10252369,17]

going on a pilgrimage to the holy threads

[Anonymous No.10252369,18]

>>10252369,17
Based pilgrimage maker

[Anonymous No.10252369,19]

FUCKING GOLDEN

[Anonymous No.10252369,20]

gem up

[Anonymous No.10252369,21]

>>10249418
To this holy resting round I do venture.