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10213464

Anonymous Tue Oct 31 22:40:11 2017 No.10213464 [Reply] [Original]

>Reading first draft of my novel
>tfw it's too pernicious and lacks transcendence

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 04:25:57 2017 No.10214082 >the book has a nice eyefeel

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 04:28:44 2017 No.10214085 File: 18 KB, 374x452, 1503022372076.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10213464 >expecting a first draft to be good >using the words pernicious and transcendence

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 14:30:05 2017 No.10215316 File: 199 KB, 1200x1200, CfsWpV3UAAAI0ZK.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10214085 >Some loquacious banal platitude spouting uranian is perturbed by my incandescent parlance on this here bouree enthusiast's forum

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 15:02:08 2017 No.10215418 File: 85 KB, 1200x675, C6kVJtzW0AEbiXT.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>10213464 >pernicious

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 20:25:36 2017 No.10216495 >>10213464 well memed

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 20:28:39 2017 No.10216502 >>10213464 >lacks transcendence needs more geometry

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 20:32:13 2017 No.10216510 >>10215316 lold

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 20:34:33 2017 No.10216517 File: 32 KB, 400x400, cryhapwoj.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >tfw your orphan protagonist is just too precocious

>>	Anonymous Wed Nov 1 22:29:39 2017 No.10216901 >>10216517 I hope your story doesn't go where I think it's going.