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971233 No.971233 [Reply] [Original]

I just tried writing something that came to head today while walking, curious if its any good

<br> What if science is magic<br>
<br>The magic of science is Mathematic <br>
<br>The math is the language of the history in the universe <br>
<br> The present is unrealistic<br>
<br>The flow of space and time seem persistent<br>
<br> The rhythm of times flow by threads of physics physical strings<br>
<br> The arts of music, poetry, and paintings<br>
<br>This is life such a wonderful thing<br>

>> No.971238

It ain't.

>> No.971237

you will never be as good as jesse lacey

>> No.971262

I think its okay

>> No.971273

<br>It<br>
<br>is<br>
<br>utter<br>
<br>shit<br>
<br>.<br>
<br>huehuehuehue<br>

>> No.971274

what's all this br stuff about
like inception?
BBBBRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

>> No.971286

>>971274 trying to make a border i made a mistake. I love how much people are hating it

>> No.971293

<HEAD>
<SCRIPT language="JavaScript">
<!--
function get_random()
{
var ranNum= Math.floor(Math.random()*5);
return ranNum;
}

function gLink()
{
var wLink=get_random();

var link=new Array(5)
link[0]="http://www.google.com";
link[1]="http://www.msn.com";
link[2]="http://www.yahoo.com";
link[3]="http://www.ebay.com";
link[4]="http://www.cnn.com";

window.location = (link[wLink]);
}
//-->
</SCRIPT>
</HEAD>

<BODY>
<FORM name="gotolink">
<INPUT TYPE="button" value="Go to random link!" onClick="gLink()">
</FORM>
</BODY>

>> No.971318
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971318

I enjoyed your piece, thanks for posting it.

Also, your pic reminded me of this pic, OP.

>> No.971363

>>971318
Than you i appreciate it, its this first time i have ever tried to write something like this

>> No.971366

br? br?

u gibe moni

>> No.971380

>>971318
>>971233

Where are these from?

>> No.971396

>>971380
OP's pic is the cover of an album by the band Brand New

>> No.971405

DEJA ENTENDU

>> No.971411

When I saw you posted a Brand New album cover, I instantly prejudged your writing, and could henceforth no longer take anything you posted seriously.

>> No.971413

<marquee> OP is a faggot </marquee>

>> No.971416

>>971363

You've got talent man.

>>971380

I don't know where my pic is from, I lifted it from a thread on /mu/ though.

>> No.971419

You took the fascinating universe and the mesmerizing complexities of living within it...
... and made it boring as shit.
This is anti-poetry.

>> No.971441

>>971419
no problem man and thank you

>> No.971453

>>971380
i took it off from /mu/ i guess its a brand new cover never heard of them