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Rate my opening line Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:58:06 2017 No.9369331 [Reply] [Original]

The rent is to high living here between reasons to live.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:01:21 2017 No.9369349 If this isn't a poem trash it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:02:16 2017 No.9369355 >>9369331 >to high

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:08:32 2017 No.9369381 >>9369331 incomprehensible/10

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:13:27 2017 No.9369401 Hey guys can you rate my poem The Rent Is to high, Living here between Reasons to live?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:20:03 2017 No.9369437 >>9369331 garbage

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:21:03 2017 No.9369439 >>9369437 Why?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:22:11 2017 No.9369444 >>9369401 You ruined it. It's shit, you're dumb. Also unfunny.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:22:16 2017 No.9369446 Rate my opening line riverrun, past Eve and Adams, from swerve of shore to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth, Castle and Environs.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:23:41 2017 No.9369452 >>9369446 Never read anything more pretentious in my life.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:39:14 2017 No.9369544 File: 99 KB, 798x798, smilelaugh.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>9369331 Rate my opening line: Are you a computer? Because I want to turn you on.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:53:16 2017 No.9369606 >>9369331 Rate my opening line: >In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:55:13 2017 No.9369617 >>9369452 kek, thanks jung

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:03:19 2017 No.9369657 Ambiguity is something which can be considered in many ways. Some think of it in a certain fashion while others think of it in a completely different fashion. Still others consider it differently.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:11:17 2017 No.9369713 >>9369331 Here's maybe a clearer arrangement: >The rent here is too high, living between reasons to live. I like it btw >>9369606 All-time best

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:20:09 2017 No.9369742 >>9369713 Thanks nigger

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:51:40 2017 No.9369864 Rate Mine: The night was cold and dark with a slight breeze lightly blowing the leaves underfoot. On a front porch sat an elderly man, he went by no name to most people.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 11:59:56 2017 No.9371869 >>9369864 Loose the first sentence.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 12:07:39 2017 No.9371903 Rate mine: Fi widda murderah hi gon gun com uppa wid fi inna dih nigga ha he an ho he come up like dis he huss.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 12:09:25 2017 No.9371911 >>9369331 i feel like one of us is having a stroke. quick, OP, do you smell burning feathers?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 12:18:39 2017 No.9371947 It was a dark and stormy night. I like peanuts

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 12:57:53 2017 No.9372100 Blaaaaaargh! Bits of sick were drowning in the canal.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 13:42:34 2017 No.9372282 >>9369452 Kek tanks Warthon.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 15:48:06 2017 No.9372810 >>9369864 Learn to use commas correctly. And I doubt that the leaves underfoot were blowing unless you have extremely light footsteps.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 15:53:09 2017 No.9372829 >>9369331 ?????/10