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What do you guys think of this thing I just thought up?

There is a house. Cavernous easter egg house, somehow small and familiar. At the far western wing of this place - A structure. A stained-glass tent, made of metal, 20 feet tall, distorted as if seen through a melted mirror. A sheet of Rainbow glass draped over a rod at its apex, pulled taught. No doors or flaps, a lazily winding triangular tunnel that twists around the corner of unfinished space. You stand at the entrance, multi colored biblical shadows diffusing the light on the floor ahead of your feet. Take a step, don’t fear this new place, this place where you can’t see more than a few paces ahead of you for the curve, but where what you can see holds in its rays the pastel echo of the adventure that you were promised all that long time ago, before the pattern formed, before you were resigned. Your pulse is getting faster. You remember, don’t you?

>> No.9351011

Nice and purple just the way I like it

>> No.9351088

>>9351011
Only quoted posts can be purple retard.

>> No.9351616

iohu

>> No.9351692

Three things.

> Cool imagery. Very visual.

> Cavernous easter egg feels small. Cavernous egg shaped thing. Feels small?

> Easter egg has a far west wing. HOW IT GOT A WING. IT AN EGG THO

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>>9351692
Thanks mate. As far as the easter egg thing goes, I was talking about colors, not size.

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>>9350971
I like it fampai

>> No.9352673

p choice

>> No.9352961

>>9350971
>Cavernous easter egg house, somehow small and familiar.


somehow? no. if you don't understand how, why tell us?

>> No.9352976

im sorry

>> No.9354667

>>9352961
supposed to evoke dreams

>>9352976
I forgive you, my son.

>> No.9355800

k