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Please don't bully. I am a highschool girl and I am 17.

Novel begins with a highschooler fleeing home with her biker boyfriend and his 5 friends just before university. They are going in an adventure which is in reality a pratical reimagination of their childhood dreams ahead of fear of growing up (going to college, going to work, etc).

Things turn out bad when boyfriend has a fight with another biker (his best friend) because he is jealous of the protagonist. Boyfriend loses control and ends up stabbing his best friend.

Everyone is terrified and they decide to bury the best friend with his motorcycle in a crossroad and then come back to their home city. But throughout the trip, bad things start happening at every stop: they run out of gas, they get lost, roads disappear, people lose their temper, more violence.

They all die one by one (killed by the Devil because of the crossroad thing) but protagonist survives to tell the story.

What do you guys think?

>> No.9066244

>>9066243
>I am 17

>> No.9066253

>>9066244
But what is your opinion???

>> No.9066261

>>9066253

It is truly fantastic. I can't even think of the words to describe it. That's how good it is.

>> No.9066270

>>9066243
would read because i ride bikes and it sounds really good
please draft

>> No.9066286

>>9066243
The plot is pretty boring. You would need an amazing prose to make it interesting. But then again :
>I am 17.

>> No.9066287

>stay gold, shitposters

what did she mean by this?

>> No.9066331

>>9066261
Thanks~~.

>>9066270
I also ride bikes. My dad and my brother are bikers too.

>>9066286
I'll try. I've been to the places that the novel will take place in. Some are really beautiful.

>> No.9066342

OP secretly wants hot biker bois to fight over her: the novella

>> No.9066356
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9066356

>>9066342
OP secretly wants to kill his jewish landlord: the novella

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>>9066342
OP secretly wants to invade city with the help of divine waifus: the novel

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>>9066342
OP secretly wants to make sense without trying: the novella

>> No.9066375
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>>9066342
OP is secretly autistic: the novella

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>>9066342
OP's secretly always wanted to hunt whales but never had the balls: the novella

>> No.9068010

bump