Short Story Critiques

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Short Story Critiques Anonymous Fri Jul 1 00:01:39 2016 No.8227598 [Reply] [Original]

Hello /lit/ I have posted many stories here before. Some with good reception and others with lots of criticism.

This is a thread for short stories, I will read and critique any posted here. I have posted one I am working on for a competition as well.

Thanks /lit/

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 1 00:02:04 2016 No.8227601 File: 137 KB, 1373x789, TheGem.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>8227598 Here is the story

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 1 00:13:57 2016 No.8227651 >>8227598 bump

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 1 02:10:11 2016 No.8227998 >>8227598 Its pretty good. You need to finish it though.

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