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Post recent influences as well as a link to the text, or the thing itself.

Recent influences; Wallace, Eliot, Martin Luther, Goethe, Dante, Gogol, Kafka, Conrad, Stirner, Joyce, Wittgenstein, Ellis, Dick, Dostoevsky, Pynchon, Wei, Nabokov, Gibson, Milton, 1001 Nights, Poe, Keats, Cioran, Whitman, Mann, Deleuze, Hume, Rilke, Aurelius, More, Blake, Kant, Hegel, Nietzsche, & Hardy.

Text; http://yjlae.tumblr.com/

Short Fiction.

I would prefer if someone would provide sincere criticism of at least one section.

>> No.8140158

C+P
Error: Comment too long (93640/3000).

Influences: 4chan

Please critique

>> No.8140182

>>8140158
Qaeque.

>> No.8140302

>>8140100
shiiit i havent masturbated in a week

>> No.8140330

>twinshia !b2E8KBMQGk
>tripfag
HAHAHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAH
i aint reading shit from a attention whore
get out

>> No.8140339
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" he pulling with ever more strength, with she shouting “NO!” with whitetooth angerstare, tights slipped off to have father stumbletights floorfall, he frustratedly launching to feet with Hungarian goatgirl knickerlegged pressing snotface slimily against cloudglass, crysobbing and slobberglassing, father now ripping her by the shoulders and pulling with mighty strength upon, goatgirl handsweatily breaking couch, to have her bloodscrapily slopflop violently in to wall and couchmess, father ripulling her away from said piece of modern art, screamgirl sweatblood screaming “NYOOO!”, "

the fuck is this shite

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>>8140100

>All those (((influences)))
>The only evident influence is Joyce
>An entire wall of shitty Finnegans Wake

Allow me to blow you a big KYS.

>Take the hint

>> No.8140370

>>8140342
Finnegan's wake is incoherent without secondary literature or a professor's brain. There is a perfectly coherent narrative in each piece of short fiction on my blog.

>> No.8140379

>>8140370
shitty FW, not Actual FW quality writing, a shit version.

>> No.8140398

>>8140379
I am not even particularly fond of FW,
more Ulysses and PotA, which is probably what provided me with the afflatus to write what I did.

Ezra Pound was not particularly fond of FW either, if I remember correctly, which lead to him and the Jay falling out.

I wasn't simply trying to re-write FW through short fiction. Until you get your head around that, don't comment upon the text.

>> No.8140858

>>8140100
who is this semen demon

>> No.8140869

>>8140342

This, lel.

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>>8140100

>> No.8140894

>>8140858
Willow Shields.

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>>8140871
Qaeque.