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>>7321430
This thing is a cringeworthy circlejerk

>>7322148
holy shit... cringeworthy? whoa... that's pretty harsh man

>>7321430
Doc-Anon (Bottleman) here. I'll keep an eye on the dump.

>>7322496
Okay then, it sucks.

>>7323335

>>7323107
thanks. last i checked it there was just a pic of a shemale
>>7323335
owie

>>7321430
So, in fear that our bipolar NEET upsurge might be tailing - would anyone still be interested in working on the final chapters collaboratively? Or getting the whole thread involved in forming a plan for it, or just generally drafting things as a group for the finale?

Also, to the anon whose work I edited - I will continue yours later. I was global banned for shitposting about /pol/ on /his/ and just got back from an exam.

>>7321430
Quality over quantity. Endure the critic, that not everything is good enough.

>>7323966
Is this about Ansreng's edits? They're pretty inconsistent. There's so many I don't think NJJ has had time to put them all to vote, but I'm dropping nay's anyway.

tbqh I prefered the original Gewehr Foucalt story where he's also an eternal virgin

On the deletion of the Hypervision story: leave it for now, I'm going to do a major rewrite cutting all the Kenny/Larry/Ray bits and just leave Hypervision stuff. Make it much shorter.

>>7324194
(Y)

edited down the Banal story (subway guy on pg 380)

>>7324065

NJ J (Bottleman) here. Everything in the marginalia are suspect to anyone's vote, I don't have to go around and comment on each and every one. Ansreng will be tolerated for now, but as I have suspicions of his intention, my vote counters his suggestions where necessary.

This is your final day to vote. I make it very clear that it is preferable to make use of this democratic system of sorts. Pic related is from the thread that started it all, and Anon's point cannot be stressed enough.

>>7324735
do suggestions that haven't been put to vote and haven't been responded to get accepted?

>>7324735

Ansreng here. It took me several hours to go through the whole book. I just want to help the Hypersphere to become as enjoyable as it deserves, even if it means hurting someones feelings by potentially taking out his story.
My intentions are honest.

this is absolute fucking garbage

kill yourself my man

>>7324895
please tone down the hatred

Bottleanon, you can delete the Hypervision story from the final doc, I have an edited version done in the dump doc. It went from 15 to 9 pages, I'm gonna let it sit in case it should be pared down further

>>7324719
link?

>>7324856
Your intentions are honest, but having you be one of the first readers to bust our book's virgintiy, it kind of feels like having a rape survivor in the family now.

>>7324764
I think those suggestions should either be voiced in the thread by the editor if they're fairly substantial, or put down to XXJ to make the final executive decision (after all, he too should have one vote).

>>7325071
I will review the dump doc, once your piece is ready I will promptly replace it then.

>>7321430
Can we get more people voting? I think we can use more scrutiny.

>>7325679
seconded. the doc-anon said he's closing it tonight

>>7324719
That story probably belongs in the 'slice of life adventures' section btw

>>7324719
Why am I not seeing it in the final doc?

>>7321430
bump, doc is still open

Ansreng a good

>>7321430
this cover is fantastic!

>>7327555
nice trips

Everyone, please get your votes in, every extra eye is a better book in some way.

>>7327693
Where do I vote?

>>7327782
In the document, there are comments next to each proposed section. "Yea" is favorable of the decision whereas "nay" is, well, the opposite. There instances where a third option is delineated. I'll keep the doc open till the end of the 6th, as I'm up to the nape with exams.

>>7327785
The final doc or the dump doc?

Rundown of suggested major cuts/changes and current votes. Tried to include the very small stuff when there are no votes/not enough.

Part 1
>pg1, tfw no high test gf w/ saddlebag hips pic
Majority votes say move it to somewhere else in the book and replace it with another illustration. (In the style of the other opening illustrations?)
>pg1, The hypersphere is a big fucking place kid
All the curse words have been blanked out. MOtivation: "Swearing is wrong". 2 nays.
>pg2-3, Tyrell/Skeezy-Stee paragraph
Originally described from Tyrell's POV, it was replaced with a version with the same events from Skeezy-Stee's POV. Anon came in and put the original back in, ending with a footnote with the entire Skeezy-Stee version. Motivation: prefers the Tyrell version. One vote for Tyrell version, one vote for Skeezy-Stee version, one vote for Tyrell version with Skeezy-Stee version footnote.
>pg8, Exit... by Arthur Rimjaub
Deletion. 3n
>pg10, Chapter 7 Prologue
Deletion. No votes.
>pg10, Chapter 8 Hardcore
Deletion. 3 nays, 2 yeas.
>pg10, Chapter X (Slavoj story)
New intro. 1 yea.
>pg15, Chapter X (not ten, X) (Mega City 4)
1. New line after the original ending (COWABUNGA!). 3 nays.
2. New ending. Deletion. Motivation: Conflicts with mood, preference for original. 1 vote against deletion, 2 votes for deletion, 3 votes for moving the new ending up to a different "chapter".

PART 2
>pg18, Subchapter 1 (Puerile King intro)
1. Deletion of image. 1 yea.
2. Partial deletion of specific line. Check for yourself.
>pg19-20, Chapter 5 (guy likes little sister Isis)
Deletion. 2 nays, 2 yeas.
>pg22, Storey so far
Deletion. 1y, 2n.
>pg22, Donald Trump intro
Deletion of opening lines. 1n.
>pg23, Wilkenssburg exc.
Deletion. 2n.
>pg23-24, Shakyamuni paragraph
Del. 2n.
>pg25, Fanfiction interlude
Del. 1n, 1y.
>pg26, Sagacious King intro
D. 2n.
>pg26, random isn't funny the musical
D. 2n.
>pg27, Trump and Emma (9th room does not exist)
D. Motivation: "Too much Trump, he wont be timeless to read". 1n, 1y to deleting all but the last two lines.
>pg29-30, Pubescent King's diary (PK drinks aging potion)
D. "Not too interesting". 1n.
>pg-31-33, convo + Nixon and his son
D. "Suggesting delete, this was a bit of goofing off, doesn't hold up". No votes.
>pg33, convo continued
D. 2y.
>pg24, Chapter IX thank you
Partial deletion. "memes :D". No votes.
>pg37, Luger Foucalt story
Deletion. "not funny enough, delete or put it later in the book", "Give some hint for law rights n shit so we don't get sued" (part of title is 'By Philip K. Dick'). 2n.
>pg41, God save the king
1n, 1y.
>pg42, The Diary of Phoebe Caulfield
Suggestion to trim it down. "Not too bad to delete it, but too long. Shorter pls". 2n to deletion, 1n to trimming down.
>pg46, The Reason for Bottles
D. 1n, 1y.
>pg48, short poem (wolves)
D. 1n.
>pg49-50, Emma Zizek diary
D. 1n.
>pg50, Because i could not stop for hypersphere
D. 1n. 1y to partial deletion, go look.

>>7327854
>pg58, Depressed fonts
D. No votes.
>pg64, Transexualism deez nuts
D. 1n.
>pg79-82, Divisible Thirds and "kill me senpai" (Timmy Tingler)
D. "too long and not funny enough." 2n.
>pg86, Berryman Logical Imaging Technique (body, not title)
D. 1n.
>pg87-88, moonspeak/asians
D. 2n.
>pg92, Bottles Christmas tree
D. 1n.
>pg93-94, Nigel, Slim, Masketta, Bane?
D. 1y, 1n.
>pg94-95, Dear Diary
D. 1n, 1y to partial deletion (only the last bit).
>pg96, YOU DIDN'T BUILT THAT
D. 1n, 1y to deleting flag
>pg97, strip the paint
D. No votes
>pg104, collect blood/hella pain interlude
D. 2n
>pg111, Gas the jews illustration
D. 1n
>pg119, LUGER FOUCALT IS A CRICKET [...] (at a party)
ADD NEW STORY. 2y.
>pg121, Trump nursery rhyme
D. 1y, 1 suggestion to put REDACTED over it.
>pg123, Second Age of Hypersphere, edits
Deletions. No votes. Check.
>pg128, Hyperspherical Poetry
D. 2y with suggestions to keep footnotes.
>pg133, wrapping up bottles for Christmas
D. No votes

PART 3
>pg136, Poureth out of foolishness
D. 1n
>pg156, Shape of a bottle interlude
D. 1n
>pg159-160, On the Sidewalk/everychapter/nonchapter
D. 1n
>pg160-161, Killer Queen B
D. 1y to partial deletion
>pg161, Alphabet of Ass
D. No votes
>pg161, Varroa Mite
D. 1n
>pg164-65, Bloom and Vidal
Partial deletion. 1n, 1y
>pg166-67, lots of words
D. 1n, 1y
>pg168, It is collapsing
D. 1n

Less detail now. Big cuts (basically all have 1-2 votes, inconclusive results):
>177, Zizek-Trump emails
>183, Last of the Mexicans
>201, Cryptology
>211, More Buckley and Vidal
>243, Greek philosopher drugdealers
>251, Dear Rousseau
>252, little tommy pynchon
>254, Reply by Email
>256, Extraodrinary Life of Henry Darger
>269, Game of Thrones Bane
>274, Refugee Crisis More Like Refugee ISIS
>276, Trump Tech Positively Positive Psychotherapy
>281, Johnnie
>283, Once upon a time
>286, Ballad of Gewehr Foucalt
>306, Spikey spheres
>310-2, Instagram, Logic and Truth
>318, Six incredible pictures of rich men in Space Dubai
>319, Poem
>329, Johanna Wilkenssburg
>332, Hypervision (pre rewrite)
>370, controversial samurai story

>>7327852
never mind, i'm dumb

>>7327854
I was thinking for the >tfw no high test gf w/ saddlebag hips, we could use the rejected cover illustrations as either a single picture, or one as a faded backdrop for the first page.

Put the Trump bit in the dump section. Would be grateful for any help, I think the opening is weak.

>>7321430
B
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>>7327967
This is an interesting suggestion.

>>7327854
>>7327858
Bottleman here, thank you for this.

>>7328305
P
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>>7327995
Edited it. Tried to tighten it up a bit, honestly very few cuts. It's good, I don't know why someone would suggest it be deleted.

>>7329129
Thanks a bunch anon, appreciate it.

Doc is closing soon.

>>7321430
BUMP

>>7321430
le fuck's this?

just got back after a few months absence, glad to see OC is still being churned out. when can i expect this on lulu?

>>7321430
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIdoWxLOs7tVlO8MHISFAm1stJ7FEta-fL0dBe88J1g/edit?pli=1

I was thinking about closing the doc yesterday but there's always a minimum of four people in it, and I would never try to disappoint them.

>>7331342
Never mind. The document is closed, all submissions either go to [name related] or the dump document.

Reminder: The Death Orgy Ending is still to be collaborative written by us. That will be fun.

Also what about the idea of making someones asshole the entrance to the 10th room?

>>7331347
I mailed you my votes m8

>>7332187
Thanks, understand that others have sent me their votes so please don't be surprised to find excerpts you vent to remain deleted or otherwise. I've already begun tallying votes and changing submissions.

>>7332282
totes fine by me, just wanted sure that democracy had it's just course!

wow this is being taken seriously
is the plan to publish in paperback?

>>7332282
anything probably on the chopping block so far?

>>7332411
Some people are in favor of Ansreng's deletions, including me at some instances. Some people went overboard and voted for deletions of entire pages without justification, those I had to disregard.

>>7321430
BUMP

>>7331447
Not to keen on an asshole being the 10th room, perfered the idea that you reached it by realizing you no longer exist.

Is someone already making a list of all characters being alive for the end?

>>7321430

>>7321430
ok now what

Samurai story edit added, it's at the bottom of the original

>>7336128
This is significantly carved out hollow. I refuse to add it until I have verification from Aaron (IIR the name correctly) in the dump document.

>>7335459
We need to finish the final chapter.

Everyone add the prior characters who you would like to appear at the death orgy:

-Donald Trump
-HitMemaw (alive but IIRC Bottleman was going to kill her [please do correct this])
-Timmy Tingler
-Mypecuther's foreskin
-Ben Bil Afleki
-Sam Murphy
-The Hyperniggers, performing live
-Puerile King, Johannes and the rest of his court (unless a separate chapter was made for them)

I'm sure I'm missing tons but basically, now the meat of the book is finalized, I think we should use this thread to outline the draft for the Death Orgy, what exactly we want the book to culminate in (I was thinking a comedic whimsical tone, with a sort of hyper-capitalized absurdist fuelled bacchic backdrop going on in a massively ostentatiously and totally lit up space-cavern )

I already wrote a part of the death orgy weeks ago.

- GodPaladin63: dead
- Amon: dead
- Koprulu: dead
- Kerrigan: dead
- Riko (Anime meme scholar)
- Mine (Anime meme scholar)

>>7337822
The Hyperniggers live, i can't wait to read this.

>>7337822
>>7337851
Is the gonna happen in the dump doc? when can i wor kon it with you guys?

>>7338451
Can OP open a new document for this?

>>7337822
>>7337851
>>7338451
>>7338460
NJ J here. I'll open a document for the Orgy, sure.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AnRcYxfBIcVv7NRgIgvVtq1wSSudoIs39qurTi_IW-M/edit?usp=sharing

Please finish this by the 15th.

>>7338473
Can you add the death orgy part of GodPaladin63 to the doc? It's already written in the main doc.

>>7338841
Done.

>>7338473
Excellent, I would add however, that a three day editing process similar to what we had before would be pretty useful.

I would also suggest a sort of schizoid simultaneous multi-narrator/s as the main voice for the piece, something akin to a Wrestlemania commentary with mental illness .

Extra Death Orgy thread open:

>>7338914

>>7339107
W-what is this.

>>7323800
that was me hahaaa

>>7339920
l-o-l

Should the "middle-part of the end" with GodPaladin/korprulu/etc be moved down and made part of the death orgy chapter, or should that stay where it is now in the middle of Part 5? I like it there as a setup for what's to come later on

By the way, the character referred to as "koprulu"/Kerrigan's boyfriend is actually named Jim (RAYNOR). (KOPRULU) is the name of the sector where they live. And Kerrigan's name is actually (KERRIGAN).

>>7341499
Can you change it?
And pls write stuff about the death orgy in it's thread: >>7338914

>>7341710
I changed it. But honestly, I don't see the need for a separate thread. I'd rather post here

>>7341803
CORRECT.

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Cast of characters

>PART 1
Bignose
Tyrone
Tyrell the Crater, Skeezy Stee
Skeletons
Nietzsche, the executives
Bruce/Caitlyn Jenner, Damian Fetterlove
Detective Jones, Siree Bob
David Foster Wallace
Slavoj
Mega City 4
>PART 2
Hypercube
Puerile King the Prince/Little King/Pubescent King/Prudent King
Johannes Wilkenssburg
the ad hominem captain
Donald Trump
Wacky Dan the Wojamba Man, LSD
Sagacious King
Emma Zizek/Trump
D. Nuffin
Inspector Friedrich Dawkins, Detective Thomas Jefferson, God, Freedom
Moon-men
King Excel-Sama, Princess PowerP-chan
Luger Foucalt
Bottleman
Phoebe Caulfield, Holden Caulfield
Cowboys
Giants
Bryce the Coward
George Newman, mystery professor Dr. Fanshen
Ben bin Al-Aflecki, Mucca bin J-lo, Chairman E. Bowler
Black Ayyster Cult, hollow shapes Ayy Lmao
Harold D. Munch, Jake & Jane & their kidnapped baby
Rape victim lock, rapist key, corrupt judge door, prosecutor door
Sappho the schoolgirl
Red Spider Mite
Hulk Hogan, Nick Denton
>PART 3
Ayy Lmao
Riko and Maki
Bryce the Second, the Spawn of the Coward
Edward the Confessor, Oxford Girl
Author of the Divisible Thirds, Arely J. Quiroz
Timmy Tingler
Moonruners/oriental supremacists
Jim RAYNOR, Kerrigan, Arcturus MENGSK, Amon AMON
Sam Hyde
Captain America, Harold Bloom, Osama bin Laden, Ryan Seacrest
Wucie Bruce/Caitlyn, Geibacca
Scene Change
Sam Murphy
sonicfan06, blitzmyclitz69, generousbuisnessjewISRL/That's Right Good Goy Just Like That
Prof. Ozymandias Mansnake
Bertrand Russell, Grothendieck
Leopold the Ant, the Ants

>>7344310
>PART 4
Chuck “the Gay Kek” Pahlaniuk
Noam Chomsky, Howard Zinn, Christopher Hitchens
Dr. Fanshen
Aelius
Wojamba-li
A. Bair Black Ayyster Cult branch manager
Aelius Maximus
Dick Michigan, Mack Carlson, Puss Galavantee
Unlicensed Kerouac
nonchapter/everychapter bum
Agony Aunt
William F. Buckley, Gore Vidal, Oscar Wilde
Ms. Amanita Tally, Mr. Massey/Dr. Hijo Maize
1D poet Izzybizzy Wedobap
Pablo Azteka the last Space-Mexican/Fido
Mypecuthers, the Patricianoid
Emma Sexton, Bern the usurper
HitMemaw
>PART 5
David Easton Wallace, Bret Foster Ellis
HoneyBunny2, BedroomPunishment
Aristotle, Pythagoras, Apollo
/lit/ Allen Ginsberg
O', Al
Fred Fedor/GodPaladin63, Meruru-chan
Grootch, Augusta, Martino
DARPA Team SkunkTwerks, HyperDNguyen, Bob/Subject 00128
Kolsti
Ghandi, KolstiDNGuyen, Skullybot48, Peter the school shooter
A Savage
tommy pynchon
Adaulfen, Roku
thomas.howard
Polka, Tim
Jake Huffcut
LazyTown Loli/Stephanie, Twinshia, Magnús Scheving, Prussian Blue
Daenerys, Qaggaz, Jorah
Sascha, You
Cat Tony, Jim Dog, various animals
Audio Recording guys: K and P (God?)
Bourgeois Bad Bitch
Johnnie
Phuc Hitchins
Pisspot Pepe
Gewehr Foucalt, Lt. Dick Quaker, Wyn-Mira Leni Soklovsky
Captain Squirrel, various space animals
Six Hundred Million And Don't You Forget It, Adolf H.
Catherine
Roleplay purist
Spikey sphere mathematician
Bill Murray (Groundhog Day 2070)
Dubai PR
Guy in noncis bathroom
"the point" man
Kenny, Larry, Ray, Hypervision, Richard Burton
Romantic regrets journal guy
Quagga the kid, Danny
Zers
Ben Skeleton, Didrik Zizek
Literature Authors
Tommy (diereutics)
Julie and Tom and Lindsey (talk panel)
Ebba Zizek, Bride of Bryce the Third
Wistengof, "Carles" Manila, Al-Ma'sud Bolyai, Wilkenssburg, "Lord of the Undersea" Stormont-Clouqheon, Grothendieck, of Alexandria, Pancake Chiley, Anony & Mous (about the author)
Seiko, Koji, Kambei (samurai tale)
Subway guy
Alabaster the wizard
+ new chapter characters

Given that dying brings you into the rooms + the anything goes nature of hypersphere, anybody on this list can be dead or alive and/or present in the tenth room

>>7344310
>>7344314
Fuck me, whod'a thunk we can do some shit like this. I need a flowchart.

>>7344310
Ok, the Puerile King needs to eat a lot of them in one bite.

>>7344423
>>7344484
We've got some writing to do, everyone check out the doc, even put some edits in (can edits be done in red to show the author?), I think we've got a fairly sound premise for a finale, which is really what this book needs to give some sense of point to the novel.

Opinions? >>7341495
>>7344484
Agreed. Johannes declares his love at the gala, Puerile King regains his mojo (or is so pissed off by Johannes he throws a fit) and returns to worldeating, is asked to eat the aliens but instead eats the tenth room, devouring the cast and ending the story. Ambiguous if this saved the world, destroyed the hypersphere, both, etc.

>>7344314
It's Hillary Clinto-chan and it's a waifu.

The intro for the Death Orgy is written, you can add your scenes now directly after.
Already some nice stuff written.

>>7341495
It's already in the death orgy chapter, it can be deleted in part 5.

>>7344310
>>7344314
FOUR DAYS LEFT

We just have to make sure we don't edit the Kolsti passage.

>>7346537
Kolsti didn't write it, remember? Plus
>Kolsti
Fuck off already.

>>7346634
I thought we all agreed he wrote it?

>>7346537
why not?

So is the finale a two-parter, death orgy / royal gala? Extreme debauchery and insanity / love story?

>>7338473
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AnRcYxfBIcVv7NRgIgvVtq1wSSudoIs39qurTi_IW-M/edit?usp=sharing
We need as many people working on this as possible.

>>7346669
GO AWAY
YOU WILL NEVER BE TAO LIN

>>7347485
Here's my idea for how the final chapter should work out:
-OPENING: SPACE CAVERN AND THEN A SPONTANEOUS APPEARANCE OF THE FUCK COLOSSEUM, ALL THE PRIOR CHARACTERS AND MISC. OTHERS ARE ORDERED TO FUCK TO THE DEATH, THIS IS COVERED IN BOTH PROSE, SCREENPLAY AND THE MANIC NARRATIVES OF MULTIPLE SLEAZY COMMENTATORS
-THIS PROGRESSES UNTIL MOST HAVE BEEN (sic) "FUCKED TO DEATH" IN A BAACHIC FASHION
-DONALD TRUMP THEN RETURNS AFTER BEING REVIVED BY A WONDERING STIRNER MEME, HAS GAINED THE POWERS OF A GOD FROM HIS JOURNEY IN NON-EXISTENCE (explains why he was briefly a galactic emperor before disappearing and fucking up his timeline) UNVEILS SOME DASTARDLY PLOT (possibly: explains the 10th room was a creation of his/AYYLMAOS/some other plot detail we should iron out)
-JOHANNES (who could be watching from above with the Puerile King, so as to allow for a lone survivor in the death orgy or engaged in the fuckfest) PROCLAIMS LOVE FOR PUERILE KING, PUERILE KING IS FURIOUS, EATS ENTIRE BOOK.

Comments, suggestions? Just trying to work out some kind of structure to it, if we want a proper climax.

>>7347504
>implying tao lin isn't here right now

>>7347512
I like it. Right now the 10th room was created by Leopold the Ant to service Timmy Tingler (a world for online-addicted desensitized perverts, essentially). The Figurants who excommunicated Leopold have been established to be high society business types, and in the recent Alabaster chapter they were established to have a problem with the executives' plan because it'll mess up their economy. Meanwhile, the executives fucked up Timmy to the point he was at when he met Leopold, and it's been established the execs service the aliens.

So you could reveal Trump uses his weird higher existence and connections to get in with the Figurants (or manipulate them), engineering Leopold's exile, leading to the creation of the 10th room, which Trump intends to take over to control everyone in the hypersphere. The aliens could want the 10th room for the same reason, since people in the hypersphere are the only ones who could stop them. So then the battleground turns into a huge clash between the two villains. Perhaps people start taking sides. And yeah, then the Puerile King story comes in and ends the whole thing.

The royal gala is in the netherrealm, which we could say is separate from the 10th room right now, allowing us to do the death orgy chap and then move on to another thing. Besides PK and Johannes, other characters in the netherrealm are Wucie and Geibacca, and Fanshen and Memaw.

>>7347585
Damn, totally blanked on the Figurants, yeah that would be perfect, Trump gets in with the executives, reveals his plan to control the hypersphere and the aliens (what was their MO again, using hypervision to sell wojamba or break reality?) could do battle, with a short separate chapter, or sub-chapter for the royal gala.

Because this chapter is going to be so loopy with all the different authors, I'd suggest we adjust a slight surreal tone for it, rather than just plainly describe things and have them constantly contradict, we follow a rough dream-like thread and build on that.

>>7347731
>Trump gets in with the executives
with the Figurants, you mean? Executives serve the ayy lmao

Yeah, that sounds good. Death orgy could look like
1 - Coliseum, balls-out everything and the kitchen sink weirdness
2 - Trump returns (interlude?), reveal of his plot
3 - Aliens arrive, battle, everything turns to shit

and then on to the puerile gala.

Good question about the ayy lmao. IIRC the basics of it is, they want to shape the world according to their manifesto at the beginning of part 3.

The executives serve them, founding the Black Ayyster Cult to bring existing conspiracies into the fold (such as the entertainment industry, eg Ben bin Al-Afleck). The aliens get ahold of records about the tenth room, sold to them by the Space-Jews (presumably info on how to create rooms/worlds, I guess info about how the Ants do their thing). They use this to develop methods of manipulating reality so they can reshape it. However, they need time to perfect the method, but they only have this window of time to do it (while the Puerile King is away from hyperspace, where they reside, and not a threat to them since he stopped devouring).

So the executives launch Hypervision and use some sort of first room feedback loop to trap all the viewers in a Groundhog Day-style loop, giving the aliens all the time in the world. They also get governments around the world to ease up on wojamba prohibition, which lets the Space-Jews sell it around the universe. This basically puts the world(s) in a state of sedition, locked in front of Hypervision and vulnerable to manipulation via broadcast propaganda. Some real tinfoil shit, this story.

The opening of the tenth room and their understanding its nature so some extent allows them to enter the hypersphere for the first time (remember, originally it was said going through all the rooms was the path from hypersphere to hyperspace). So now they can enter the scene with their full might, where previously they had to act through the executives/Cult via messages and visions. Other motivations: to consolidate control of the 10th room, since it might be a shortcut for them to use their technology on an existing 10th room instead of creating one -- and to take over the room because the people in the hypersphere are the most likely to stop him (especially if the netherrealm and the Puerile King is in there, perhaps they see this as their chance to eliminate their biggest threat).

Fucking hell

>>7347883
>shitpostinghell 4chan
>still the best stories i've ever read

>>7347883
>people came up with this whole thing anonymously and any retard could have fucked it up

the end is cumming!!!!

>>7347518
>implying 90% of /lit/ isn't a meme rivalry between Tao and Kolsti arguing over who will ultimately be the biggest memr

>>7347498
bumping for this.

jump

THREE DAYS LEFT

thump

So what's going on with the samurai story?

Do we have a critical introduction?

>>7353090
No, you should write it.

>>7353094
If we're willing to make things make sense by retitling it "TLOTAT Presents: Hypersphere" we can use Kolsti's exegesis from the dormant Kolsti novel.

>>7353098
Nah, Hypersphere is Hypersphere. We're at nearly 400 pages and wrapping up, obviously we don't need to pick off the bones of other projects.

Write something new, something of your own!

Comfy Death Orgy Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AnRcYxfBIcVv7NRgIgvVtq1wSSudoIs39qurTi_IW-M/edit

NJ J here, I was thinking this over and decided to put this to consult. Should I convert all Arial to Prima Serif Bold (assuming this is the font, pic related)? If so, how can this be accomplished. Google Docs has a limited array of fonts and doesn't accept transcriptions from other programs, I don't know of a decent add-on for GD. Ideas?

We could scratch out the idea too, I'm just offering it out.

>>7353416
Why, is Arial too ugly? I have no issue with converting Arial (it's a bit too standard), but I think you can only find them manually. But yeah, Prima Serif Bold is not available in GD, maybe go with another one? And maybe not a bolded font, if this is for whole stories written in Arial.

PT Serif looks the most like your selection, Serif Caption is a bit closer to bolder, Droid Serif looks similar but plainer.

NJ, could you put the Final doc in View Mode? So you don't have to log in to check it

>>7353604
Why haven't I thought of this? Will do.

>>7353605
Try this link.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIdoWxLOs7tVlO8MHISFAm1stJ7FEta-fL0dBe88J1g/edit?usp=sharing

>>7353610
Perfect, thanks.

Ben Al-Aflecki has entered the death orgy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AnRcYxfBIcVv7NRgIgvVtq1wSSudoIs39qurTi_IW-M/edit

>>7353775
heh

Reminder that this will never

EVER

Reach the level of Tundra

>>7355895
Levels are a marxist-jew social construct.

>>7356012
Marxist-Jew social construct is a spook.

>>7355895
What's Tundra?

>>7356753
Oh boy.

NJ here, the Death Orgy ends in less than 7 hours. This is official.

>>7357259
Can we not keep the chapter going, or at least have some kind of editing phase? Rushing out the final chapter seems unwise.

but I didn't finish

>>7357329
:((((

>>7357329
I'm gonna keep writing. It's sort of removed from the rest of the book so there's no harm and it's not finished yet.

>>7358518
:)))

>>7359779
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>>7321430
bump

Publish it already, I want to give someone my money

>>7362014
Final chapter is still WIP anon.

Don't worry we got the outline. I'm planning on dropping some Trump, but I'm getting a visa to India today.

Out of interest, did Tundra take nearly this long?

>>7362067
Miami was done in a day

I can do the publishing for this if you've got a properly specced front/spine/back cover

>>7344314
I do like lazytown... but why I am listed here?

>>7362361
>“Ole womin,” says the black loli nobody even cares about, “Where you gwan! Didndu nuffin! Haha!”
>“Shh,” hisses Stephanie, “Twinshia…”
>Twinshia bites her biggole black mumbo lip mumma mumma didndu didndu nuffin…

do you search your trip on warosu?

>>7321430
The legacy of totalitarianism in a tundra was better

>>7321430
How often do y'all plan on writing these stories together. This seems really fun but I'm too far behind and lost to know what's happening.

>>7362804
Well... you're a tad too late. Once the Death Orgy (otherwise known as "Colour our Parisian Barricades the Thing of Frowns") comes to completion, the whole doc will be reprocessed and produced in a single .pdf for publishing (Insha'allah).

>>7362860
dont forget the royal gala. >>7362804, just read up/skim and add to it. you can write in the death orgy or add/finish previous stories and leave them in the dump doc.

>>7362804
/lit/ seems to churn these things out all the time, just a bit more quietly: there's philosophical treatise, other group docs made for National Write a Fucking Book You Moron November and all kinds of stuff.

Wouldn't mind seeing a 50pg googledoc cookbook/travel guide.

>>7363110
> there's philosophical treatise
Got a link? I'm curious as to what a treatise written by /lit/ would look like

>>7363456
Tried to find it, realized it was a .pdf and was posted in a dead thread.

Ask around, people might have a link. It was mainly shitposting with bigwords but part 3 was great.

>>7365181
Do you at least remember the name?

>>7365371
Analyiticus Tractatus IIRC

Anyone going to be on the Orgy chapter later? I want to dump some Trump in a bit.

>>7327633
word

>>7365417
I might chime in.

>>7365840
I was actually thinking if any anon wanted to run it through one of the imaging editors that make it seem painted.

I know that immediately feels tacky but I think it has two benefits:
>gets rid of that awkward white crop line between the head and the decals
>fits thematically with the running idea of the hyperspace universe being an artificial and fake creation, rather than one of substance or realness

The only thing is, I have no idea which programme can do it, I've just seen a few of them pop-up mainly in game screenshots but they all look stunning if done right.

>>7365417
Dumped my Trump. We need more voices for this chapter, even a five line skit is perfect. Just got to have that shizo variety that gives the scene enough lifeblood to pump away it's audience in high calibre sexual violence.

>>7321430
Bump

>>7367218
Maybe as a back cover, but sharper.

>>7367218
That's too drippy, the one's I've seen can actually mimic it so it looks like it was really painted on oil and canvas with a proper brush. Thanks for the proof of concept though.

>>7367288
Quick bump