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618583 No.618583 [Reply] [Original]

Tell me what you think of my poetry guys ^^

APRIL is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Winter kept us warm, covering
Earth in forgetful snow, feeding
A little life with dried tubers.
Summer surprised us, coming over the Starnbergersee
With a shower of rain; we stopped in the colonnade,
And went on in sunlight, into the Hofgarten,
And drank coffee, and talked for an hour.
Bin gar keine Russin, stamm' aus Litauen, echt deutsch.
And when we were children, staying at the archduke's,
My cousin's, he took me out on a sled,
And I was frightened. He said, Marie,
Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.
In the mountains, there you feel free.
I read, much of the night, and go south in the winter.

>> No.618587
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618587

Good, but needs some editing. I can help you out if you like!.

>> No.618590

Your poem sucks. This isn't deviantart GTFO

>> No.618596

>>618583
>>618587
Samefag!

>> No.618594

>>618587
Thanks man! Wanna meet in Paris sometime?

>>618590
;~;

>> No.618597
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618597

>>618583
Your poem makes me RAGE! Eat this!

By the road to the contagious hospital
under the surge of the blue
mottled clouds driven from the
northeast-a cold wind. Beyond, the
waste of broad, muddy fields
brown with dried weeds, standing and fallen

patches of standing water
the scattering of tall trees

All along the road the reddish
purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy
stuff of bushes and small trees
with dead, brown leaves under them
leafless vines-

Lifeless in appearance, sluggish
dazed spring approaches-

They enter the new world naked,
cold, uncertain of all
save that they enter. All about them
the cold, familiar wind-

Now the grass, tomorrow
the stiff curl of wildcarrot leaf
One by one objects are defined-
It quickens: clarity, outline of leaf


But now the stark dignity of
entrance-Still, the profound change
has come upon them: rooted, they
grip down and begin to awaken

>> No.618603
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618603

>>618587
>>618594

Wait, what? Shut up Ezra, my poem actually made sense before your blue pencil raped it! Remember how I did the police in different voices? DO YOU REMEMBER?

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618615

>>618583
>>618587
>>618597
Sup guys, read my new novel?

>> No.618624

>>618594

Oh sorry Mr. Eliot. I didn't mean to make you cry, but seriously post your garbage on deviantart 30 yo VIRGIN.

>> No.618628
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618628

>>618615
Hey, need some help writing the new one? Cos you're going blind?
OLD MAN.

>> No.618637

>>618594
Yeah bro that'd be cool.
Can you read Italian? Got some stuff I wrote that you might like if you can!

>> No.618649
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618649

Cool read bro. Details later. BRB shotgun.

>> No.618665
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618665

>>618615
Srsly bro, come back to Ireland, I'll produce your play and everything this time!
Srsly.

>> No.618669
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618669

>>618665

GTFO! Stop writing and poems about me.

>> No.618673
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618673

>>618669
That fella hasslin' you again love?

>> No.618685
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618685

>>618665

Stop proposing to me you pedo!

>>618673

Reported you to FBI for touching me...Hope you like being raped in prison.

>> No.618701
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618701

Stop mucking my thread up with drama you guys!

>> No.618705
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618705

>>618583
Tennis without a net, motherfucker.
>>618587
You can suck my metered cock, Pound.

>> No.618710

>618587
hey guise
can i
associate
with you
(even
though
i'm
anti-
w
a
r
?)

>> No.618718
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618718

What is this modernist faggotry?

Fucking faggots can't even write in sonnet.

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618715

>>618705

STFU Frost! That shits genius! BRB Chicago poems.

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618725

>>618705
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I had to listen to your shit Frost.
Bitches don't know about my wonder at nature's beauty.

>> No.618728
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618728

>>618718

Modernists. Oh dear -- our shit is l33t.

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618731

>>618718
http://www.blackbird.vcu.edu/v5n2/poetry/plath_s/typescript-final.htm

But Mr. Percy... I... I... wrote a sonnet. ;_;

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618733

>>618731

Go back to the kitchen and make me a sandwich!

>> No.618734
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618734

Bitches don't know 'bout my disregard for the conventions of grammar and syntax.

>> No.618735
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618735

>>618731
Well, guess what, head in oven, bitch.

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618746

>>618734

Stop stealing my shit!

>> No.618743 [DELETED] 

>>618718
Modernist poetry is unrealistic, dreamy eyed bullshit. U mad.

>> No.618749 [DELETED] 

>>618743

Percy Shelley = Romanticism
Eliot = Modernism

U Mad at yourself?

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618751

>>618735
I have to remind you, that 'tis true,
that you mistreated your wife too,

>> No.618754
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618754

>>618718
Romantic poetry is pretentious, unrealistic bullshit. U mad.

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618756

>>618731
>>618751
I don't know about you guys, but I'd stick my dick into both of them.

>> No.618759
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618759

>>618756
So would I brother, so would I. See, modernists and traditional poets can get along.

Now back to getting drunk.

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618765

Fuck all you guys, I'm LEAVEing

>> No.618768
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618768

>>618759
Dawww, now that I say, is a good end,
so perhaps all poets can be friends?

>> No.618771
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618771

All you lads need to chill the fuck out. Sit down by a canal somewhere or some shit.

>> No.618798

Can modernists and romantics ever be friends? ;_;

>> No.618801

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