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try to write an erotic passage about feet

others rate you're prose

>> No.5871117

>you're prose

YEA WELL, YOU'RE POETRY, B-BITCH

>> No.5871125

If this thread gets more than 10 replies, /lit/ is officially shit

>> No.5871129

As he kisses my feet a warning races through my mind. My heart is pounding against my ribs. He licks my heel once, and then twice. My heart beats harder as he does it. I’m ready to open my legs apart, ready to jam his head in my wetness, but he senses this and holds both legs together, teasing me. He taps each toe with his finger as our gazes meet.
"Perfect," he whispers with a grin.
There’s a wave of desire building inside of me. I can't stand it anymore. He licks his pinky and begins to slowly penetrate each crevice between each toe. It feels amazing.
"What's this?" he says with shock, "a tiny mole on your foot?"
"Mhmmm" I manage to whimper.

"Disgusting, 2/10, will not bang"
That's the last thing my father said to me before he hung himself.

>> No.5871141

>>5871105
Tongue on toe, one by one. I start with the weakest.Once I'm at the strongest of the lot I am reminded of a phallus and -in shame- decide to slide down under, in order to taste the bittersweet flavor of her soles. The terrain is diverse, ranging from soft and smooth land to grain-like with a hint of salt playfully attacking my nostrils and taste buds;I am near the sea. .

>> No.5871152

>>5871105
well it's not like I expected something else from this board

>> No.5871153
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As he kisses my feet a warning races through my mind. He licks my heel once, and then twice. I bite my lips and moan. I’m ready to open my legs apart, ready to jam his head in my wetness, but he holds my feet together, teasing me. I hear him inhale deeply. "Perfect," he whispers with closed eyes.

There’s a wave of desire building inside of me. I can't stand it anymore. He licks his pinky and begins to slowly penetrate each crevice between each toe. It feels amazing.

"What's this?!" he says with revulsion in his voice, "a tiny mole on your foot?"
"Mhmmm," I manage to whimper.

"Disgusting, 2/10, will not bang!!!"
That's the last thing my father said before he disowned me and kicked me out of the house.

>> No.5871162

Feet. Ooh, yeah.

>> No.5871171

Feet of NEET

Feet of a NEET always a treat
in their discreet rubbing up up up
to your hot crotch
they are clumsy little hairless rabbits
but way hotter
in the hot sun through the window they sweat on you its pretty hot

>> No.5871180

>>5871171
did anyone like my use of RHYME and REPETITION?

>> No.5871190

>>5871171
*applause*
Now me:

Feet, mm mm,
Good enough
To eat, mm.
Smelly feet,
Pretty feet;
Caucasian
Or Asian,
Whichever.
I'll sniff feet
Forever.

>> No.5871196

>>5871190
wow SUPERB
lets perfect this

>feet
>feety feet
>yum yum
>(put them in her bum)

>> No.5871202

yes oh yes
feet oh baby, so sexy
like a sexy baby
nice sexy bones wrapped in sexy skin and sexy muscles
yes yes yes, nice sexy knuckles
i love them so much
feet, that is
ohhhhhh yes

>> No.5871208

>>5871202
GTFO PYNCHAKAMI WALLACE THERES A NEW DOG IN TOWN

>> No.5871210

>>5871208
thank you thank you

>> No.5871211

>>5871125
hooray

>> No.5871216

>>5871208
>implying pynchon didn't post it

>> No.5871237

>>5871216
It is highly implausible that Thomas Ruggles Pynchon, Jr. would be examining, let alone, posting his work on this forum, imbecile.

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>>5871153

>that ending

>> No.5871287

>>5871237
>Thomas Ruggles Pynchon Jr.
>Ruggles
More like fuggles, amirite?

>> No.5871303

Feet/10

>> No.5871318

>>5871287
:DDD