/lit/ - Literature

post it and we'll tell you whether to send it

>>5829108
Alright, I have to find real quick. It's not entirely done, I don't know why I said it is. Will you help me with it? I don't really write poetry, or really write at all.

>>5829117
inb4 not your personal _____


Anyway, I'm not too worried about how good it is, but how girls respond to this?

>>5829108
Yeah, man, we'll be nice, just post your eprsonal stuff on line and we'll help with whatever.

Up all night {we would sit up all night}
gazing in her soul
tarnished, but bright,
beautiful indeed.
A whisper
from an angel,
tickled my ear.
My drunken eyes {was drunk most of the time. One night I kept dazing off.}
regained site.


I got nothing else yet, but will soon finish it. plz no h8 m8s

>>5829129
this is one of th best posts ive ever seen

>>5829129
Ight, fuck that.I deleted it. Have any of you ever sent a poem to a girl? If not, then fuck out my thread faggots.

>>5829146
I doubt you'd like help from someone so stupid that he would send a poem to a girl he wants to fuck, so it's better like this.
Post feelings, we promise not lo laugh.

>>5829158
M8, I love her. I'm not just trying to fuck. I've fucked enough girls in my life, I'm beyond that. You'll understand when you grow up.

>>5829167
repost it idiot i didnt even get the chance to read it

Do not write poetry to girls you are not dating.

This is full retard.

>>5829146
>>5829194
btw I'm a girl

>>5829099
poetry don't work on whores

>>5829209
maybe with your pleb writing.

Does writing stuff for girls even work nowadays? Seems like something only a fedoralord would do now

>>5829194
No. >>5829207
Don't care if you're a girl.

>>5829282
Not sure, I never tried. Maybe you're right, but I'm not a fedoralord, lol.

>>5829099
I wrote a sonnet for my high school girlfriend on Valentine's Day. Also the same night I lost my virginity.

Writing a poem for a girl is just like playing her a song on the guitar. As long as its not completely fucking terrible she'll love you for it.

>>5829099
the best way to do it would be to get it published and give her a copy of the publication as a gift, but if she's into poetry then read it aloud to her on a little date. don't just hand her a sweaty, folded piece of notebook paper and hope for the best.

>>5829099
Yes, I did. Kind of a funny/cute one. She loved it. At least that's what she said.

>>5829312
>don't just hand her a sweaty, folded piece of notebook paper and hope for the best.
Yeah.
Use the inside of a candy wrapper.
Not even kidding: it'll blow her mind.

>>5829099
Yep. I was 15 years old and I ended up doing the whole pls respond thing. She confessed to me when I next saw her that it made her really uncomfortable. I sent it on myspace. So thanks for reminding me of that shitshow.

>>5829342
hahaha i lol'd.

best not to do it then, i guess. :/

>>5829129
notice the bread in his collar

>>5829361
God dammit why do you people not know yourselves. Forget any advice on how to do it, whether to hand her it or read it aloud, just fucking ask yourself how do I want to do it (is this poem better read aloud or in text) and can I do it? If you're having troubles working out whether or not you can "get away" with it then you're not cut out for doing this shit. I made friends with this girl at a weekend thing, she was inspiring enough to fall into the position of a kind of temporary muse for me, I wrote a poem about her, sat her down the next morning and read it to her, we both enjoyed the reading of it, then we carried on talking and bonding, closer through the experience of something dear: sharing time amongst someone's creation [from passion]; there are countless people who if they did exactly the same thing I did [factically] it would just turn out dreadful and awkward, but if you're a poetic person (which obviously you are at least a little bit because you want to do this, you want to express not only yourself and your thoughts in this way, but also express that you want 'to express.not only yourself and your thoughts in this way') that's the key, fucking own it, reconcile yourself and develop that, enjoy being poetic.

I almost wrote a girl a sonnet (it was a bit contrived; not that good), but stepped back from the abyss at the last second and wrote her a normal message instead.

>omg anon that was the nicest gift I've ever received
>not many people are as thoughtful as you are
>let me read the book because I really want to discuss it with you [she didn't]

That feel when she will never love me anyway

>>5829452
10/10

>>5829146

>Up all night {we would sit up all night}
>gazing in her soul
>tarnished, but bright,
>beautiful indeed.
>A whisper
>from an angel,
>tickled my ear.
>My drunken eyes {was drunk most of the time. >One night I kept dazing off.}
>regained site.


>I got nothing else yet, but will soon finish it. plz no h8 m8s"


KEKEKEKEKEKEKEK


fuck I hope u were trolling op

>>5829099
I once wrote a poem for a chick's birthday. It was a 78-verses long allegory that optimistically described fragility of most of the stuff that would make her depressed; it was written from the point of view of one of her favourite artists and included some references to mutual contexts of their lives.

she said that she liked it.

>>5829678
lol, how'd you get that, faggot?

I'm not a poet, queer. don't h8

I don't see the point of writing poetry for women in an age when you can have sex with a complete stranger within minutes of meeting them

If you want to write it, go ahead, but keep it in the drawer as a warning to your future self. Writing poetry to 'woo' women is a fucking terrible idea. Just invite her out somewhere fun, don't be a faggot.

ignore patchouli oil drenched faggots like this >>5829452

>>5829726

Just because romance is dying doesn't mean you should condemn those who fight to keep it alive.

>>5829678
is this really bad? I don't even read poetry, so I can't tell. I've only ever read some Poe and Botheius' Consolation.

>help me.

i'm not going to send it to her, but I'll post it online to her blog or some shit.

>>5829757

If you dont read poetry, maybe you should rethink your medium

>>5829757
???


Plz

>>5829757
anon, i'm only here sometimes, so i actually care about you. and it is so, so bad.

>>5829808
damnn. thanks m8

>>5829099
nice cat

Emotional poetry is shit.

>>5829986
my gram has one exactly like it. it's a Siberian Forest cat.

>>5829791
This