/lit/ - Literature

Oh yeah? You do? How's this for a critique? Sounds like a fucking fine idea that should be implemented immediately.

>endless wall of text
>instead of threads that max out with minimal critique
I don't see how this would work. Mainly because you'd have to scroll past every critique thread to where you last left off, and because even though these threads are popular enough to max out, they are generally not proportionate in critique to walls of text and those giving critique usually give up when the proportion makes them unable to catch up. If you want your work to be somewhere forever, you can pretend the archive is the front page.

>>5740067

Taking this probable sarcasm at face-value.

>>5740100
4chan is just not made for it

>>5740059
Writing my "500 word short story" to meet the criteria of my assesment for entering my professional writing degree.

it had to start with; “Take me with you”, she said. “I’ll try harder, I promise”

....

“Take me with you”, she said. “I’ll try harder, I promise”
He let go of her hands and took a step backward, her fingers fanned open and her arms reached out for him like a lost child, she had been the victim of sick desperation.
“really Sarah, It was lovely to meet you, but I don’t know you, I came here for a drink after work, I had never intended on meeting anyone, Im sorry, I must return to my wife and children, I’ll bid you good night”
He crawled into the back of the taxi and shut the door, Sarah’s face had turned a transparent white.
The taxi pulled out into the foggy night, its headlights tearing open the asphyxiating darkness.

>>5742424
>telling too much
>overdescriptive