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4965069 No.4965069[DELETED]  [Reply] [Original]

How is my writing /lit/?

>> No.4965073

You are literally illiterate.

>> No.4965076

>>4965073
Sorry that was harsh. To be fair, I didn't read it.

>> No.4965085

>>4965076
autism

>> No.4965117

coming from a conservative standing point, the character seems to be the epitome of the religious right wing. you shoved in there every cliche.

it's too obvious, too blatant. satire at its worst. try to ease into the character, don't just rush a few meaningless paragraphs to forcefully establish the character

>> No.4965123

>>4965069
Is that Atlas Shrugged?

>> No.4965133

>>4965123
yes, Rand was a huge Miley Cyrus fan and referenced her, at least once, in all of her work.