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So my fellow writers, how do you try to avoid stereotypes or cliche'd characters?

The character I've been working on for a while is a cheery young twenty-something necromancer. He's not sad, overly morbid, or macabre, he's just really good at necromancy.
Is it a cliche if I deliberately try to NOT make it a cliche? So it would be some kind of ....reverse cliche?

>> No.480969

everything is cliche

>> No.480974

all of my characters are dyslexic blind people
they are also ocelots
and none of them speak

>> No.480976

You can't write. Take me seriously. YOU CAN'T WRITE. FUCKKKKK OFFFF.

>> No.480977

whether or not you do not write something as cliche, someone is going to find a way to categorize it...

>> No.480981

You're already losing if you're writing about a necromancer. WTF?

>> No.480983

so... no serious answers?

Or is that my answer, that worrying about writing a cliche'd character serves no purpose and doesn't deserve to be taken seriously? I should just write my characters the way I like and damn the rest? Sounds good, thanks /lit/!

>> No.480984

>>480981
and what do you write about hm?

>> No.480985

>>480981

Seriously. Who the fuck describes a character as a necromancer? Whatthefuckamireading.jpg

>> No.480986

It wouldn't be a cliche but it wouldn't be good characterization either. You can have a character who behaves in a cliche fashion but the character itself is not a cliche.

For example, a knight who saves maidens but only does it because he's kind of a pervert and wouldn't get pussy otherwise.

So you can have a morbid necromancer who is actually very fleshed out and interesting. You can also have a shitty, cheery necromancer character who isn't a "cliche" but has as many dimensions as a picture of my balls and half the personality.

>> No.480988

>>480985
How is it any different than describing a person who practices medicine as a doctor? It's his skillset, his job, and the function he performs for the majority of his day. How else should I describe him?

>> No.480993

>Is it a cliche if I deliberately try to NOT make it a cliche?

No, it just makes for a shit character.

>> No.480996

>>480986
But that doesn't mean that, with the appropriate amount of work, I can't write a character that is a cheery happy master of strapping together flesh and bone who is well characterized and fleshed out, right?

>> No.481001

Every single character you care to write will be categorised in some way or another. That's because everyone ever falls under a certain type. I don't think that makes them cliches. There's no reason to assemble a clusterfuck of characteristics and assign them to one person who couldn't feasibly have them all. It draws from the realism of the character.
So yes, I think inverse cliches do exist and are pretty damaging when the reader's like "well this guy is some kind of fucked up patchwork of multiple characters".

>> No.481002

>>480996
but that'd detract from the colness, unless he is totally insane

>> No.480999

>>480988

So the majority of his day is involved with witchcraft? Sounds like a weak character with a lame occupation.

>> No.481009

>>480996
Exactly. I'm just saying that there are two sides to the cliche coin. The crappy cliche character and the crappy character who isn't a cliche (but is just as poorly thought out).

>> No.481013

>>480999
Change literally one word of that and you've just insulted The Name of the Rose. Cheap shot, I know, but a focused character isn't necessarily a bad thing.

>> No.481037

>>481013

>implying I give a shit about insulting The Name of The Rose.

I mean, a focused character is one thing. But a focused character involving sorcery and witchcraft? I hate to bring up Stephen King but even "Carrie" had more elements than just the supernatural.

>> No.481041

>>481002
I imagine him not unlike a mortician who has a very happy disposition. We aren't always able to choose where our talents lie, and whether or not they match our emotional disposition.

>> No.481046

>>481037
I apologize for not giving you a full complete rundown of the elements of my character, I was trying to be brief so that it wasn't tl;dr. As I understand, people who go on and on about their ZOMG so cool! characters aren't appreciated. I'm merely asking for advice on one facet.

>> No.481056

>>481046

Whatever. Guess I got carried away. But I was merely trying to actually answer your question. Maybe you should be writing this character's story instead of talking to assholes like me online about it.

>> No.481068

>>481041
So he's like every coroner on network TV crime shows?

>> No.481069

>>481056
I understand where you're coming from.

And I am writing, but one of the pieces of advice I hear is that it always helps to talk to other people involved in writing or literature to get different ideas. And I totally recognize that just having a guy who's a wizard is pretty sparse as far as characterization. I've been writing for a few days just getting to know this character, looking at his childhood, his likes/dislikes, all that fun characterization jazz. So no need to apologize (I'm assuming the 'whatever' is you're way of apologizing)

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481077

>>480968
> necromancer

>> No.481080

>>481069

There was no outright apology. I don't write or read fantasy so why would I go to the trouble of apologizing to someone who does. I was just interested in talking about character development; don't give a sit if they are a wizard or a fuckin' deep space explorer.

>> No.481081

>>481068
I hadn't considered that particular genre before, perhaps there are some similarities there. But he's more active than a person just going through dead bodies, he's actually going out there into the world and doing things.

>> No.481086

>>481080
>implying that no relevant experience in the field excludes you from apologies when you act like a dick