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Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:07:20 2010 No.448064 [DELETED]

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Not sure if this should go here, but it's related to writing, so here goes. I'm writing a fictional story, and I need some ideas.

There's this ninja academy in the middle of the jungle, where kids are taught ninja stuff. This intermediate class has almost finished their training to move to the next highest step. The part I'm missing is the actual test, which involves the class heading outside of the jungle, and is split up into 3 trials: Wisdom, courage, and strength(triforce similarities purely coincidental kthx)... basically, I can't think of what those 3 trials would be.

Could /lit/ possibly give me some suggestions?

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>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:10:20 2010 No.448071 >ninja academy >kids taught ninja stuff wow, do go on

>>	thefreestman !!kUzvz9L2Fnq Fri Mar 19 08:11:23 2010 No.448074 can you introduce aliens? or mutants? i could hel pyou there

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:13:24 2010 No.448077 >>448071 S'cuse the redundancy. I stayed up all night trying to think of something for it. >>448074 Aliens, no. Maybe mutants, but it really depends.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:14:59 2010 No.448080 Wisdom- Booby Trapped pathway, using mind skills to get through it. Courage- the power to gives ones life for the others is courage, maybe some test that does this? Strength- ROCK MONSTER!

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:15:19 2010 No.448084 how about instead of the cliche for trials you make it a cliche for them to all fight each other to death battle royale style

>>	thefreestman !!kUzvz9L2Fnq Fri Mar 19 08:15:39 2010 No.448085 >>448064 wisdom- overwhelming odds, do they know they ought to sneak away rather than fight courage- will they rescue a fallen comrade or some bullshit strength- ROCK MONSTER FTW even though this will be shitty story, i want copy

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:16:04 2010 No.448086 ROCK MONSTERRRR

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:17:19 2010 No.448091 >>448084 That wouldn't yield many mooks at one's disposal, now would it? >>448080 I'll think about them. They're simple, but sometimes simple works.

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:19:18 2010 No.448096 >>448080 >>448085 >>448086 All signs on the strength trial being a rock monster boss battle. I guess that'll work.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:19:29 2010 No.448097 >>448085 these are all lame and seemingly have no relation to any work a ninja would actually do

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:22:34 2010 No.448104 >>448097 As long as the ninjas aren't wearing orange jumpsuits, I'll consider them as options.

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:22:50 2010 No.448101 >>448097 As long as they're not wearing orange jumpsuits, I'll consider them as options.

>>	thefreestman !!kUzvz9L2Fnq Fri Mar 19 08:22:50 2010 No.448102 >>448097 fuck yes it would. no ninja would ever risk his ass for a "comrade", he'd peace the fuck out

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:24:25 2010 No.448109 >>448102 they're fuckin' kids think shogun ninjas then, it makes sense that way

>>	thefreestman !!kUzvz9L2Fnq Fri Mar 19 08:25:00 2010 No.448110 >>448109 kids could understand that shit, arya stark did

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:25:10 2010 No.448111 >>448080

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:39:15 2010 No.448155 >>448110 bitch had to grow up fast, these kids are probably pampered or something..givem a break

Anonymous Fri Mar 19 08:44:40 2010 No.448167

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>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:45:35 2010 No.448171 >>448155 Well they're not 100% cold-blooded killers, they do have a sense of camaraderie. But I do want them to be trained to make decisions based on what's better for the mission.

>>	OP Fri Mar 19 08:46:50 2010 No.448173 >>448155 Well they're not 100% cold-blooded killers, they do have a sense of camaraderie. But I do want them to be trained to make decisions based on what's better for the mission at hand.

>>	thefreestman !!kUzvz9L2Fnq Fri Mar 19 08:47:05 2010 No.448177 >>448173 these are ninjas man. give me an example of "ninja camaraderie"

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