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Anonymous Sun Feb 3 16:34:14 2013 No.3431704 [Reply] [Original]

This is something I wrote some days ago , what does /lit/ think ?

The man who lost his soul.

To my sister who does not know to desire.

In some old house , in some old land
In some forgotten by god's hand,
Place. There was this dried out man
Who lived life inside his frying pan.

Olives , Tomatoes , Cheese and such
Friends he did not have much
For he spent his hours, days
In this italian cuisine haze
He was lost , could not come back
Between shelves of salt and pepper
And the smell of vino prosecco
He somehow dissappeard .
Could not come back.

Home at 9 . Wake up at 7.
Have a break at 4:11
Put some socks on , whipe some tears.
Dreaming of those teenage years.
Dreaming of that Adrienne ,
Who once kissed you with disgust
But must I tell you , really must !
That moment will I forever remember
For it is in my heart to keep.
No one will ever reach.

One tought and he decided:
His soul could not be forever blinded:
"Better shall it be sold than kept without a purpose"
He wanted his time back ,
He wanted all the lies.
He wanted summers on boats
He wanted winter days , eating apple pies.
Growing a beard, shaving it off.
Riding the bike , could'nt get enough
Of what he was once , of what he once had.
A whole big lazy nothing .
At least it was something.

What the dark beholds could never be hidden by light.
The Devil - his customer. The time- this very night.
"I will put it in my pocket. There my soul will be safe
Till' tonight when I'll place it in Dark Lord's grave"
With fear and love and everything between,
He waited by the grave of someone named "Dean".
"The Devil will see me , his eyes are keen ! "

He waited long hours , he was dreaming in dispair.
He could not believe he will be seeing that old pair
Of combat boots. He will feel the leather.
The smell . The black paint he will see aswell.
As if it were then. Twenty five years ago.
Right then and there he will be tomorrow.

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