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3420924 No.3420924 [Reply] [Original]

Hey /lit/ I got a story to tell you all.

>Sitting in the bus, tired.
>Bus stays still on a bus stop, "such tranquility" you think. >It's cold, the weather outside is gray and depressing.
>It rains lightly, with raindrops falling across the window.
>You follow them with your eyes, smile slightly because it reminds you of your childhood.
>Your childhood, when you still had fun, didn't have to fear responsibility and stress about your social life.
>You hear the doors open, someones coming.
>It's a short girl in a hoodie, with shoulder length hair gently resting on her chest from under her hood, with illuminating grayish brown eyes.
>She turns around, starts looking for an empty seat.
>She notices you, you notice her.
>Each of you take a quick glance at each other as if time has stopped.
>The simplistic duplexity of it all, feeling perhaps compassion, lust, love even?
>You again notice her graytish brown eyes looking tired, her shabby outlook and that quick makeup she put on this morning.
>She, too must be going home from work or whatever duties she might have.
>You look into each other, even though the time was small, it was enough for you to feel deep affection, and acknowledging that she felt something similar.
>She sits somewhere behind you, politely.
>You smile and think, "If I just stood up and went to sit next to her.."
>But you dont, you look outside again, and follow the rain as it goes down the window to its end.
>That cold raindrop which fell from so high, only to hit a wall and travel it's way down to the end.
>Alone.

>Just like you.

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3420940

Bump

>> No.3420971

What do you want?

>> No.3420977

>>3420924
>Your childhood [...] didn't have to fear responsibility and stress about your social life.
Also, how the fuck do you follow raindrops with your eyes?

>> No.3420982

>>3420977
He can slow time.

>> No.3420989

>>3420977
Follow them as they trickle down the windows.

Duuuuuuuhhhhhhh.

>> No.3420995

>>3420977
how are you this inexperienced with life? you can follow a raindrop on a window.

>> No.3420999

>>3420995
That's called a windowdrop.

>> No.3421005

>>3420999
Don't make shit up faggot. Just admit you're retarded, take a bow, and leave.

>> No.3421016

>grayish brown eyes

>> No.3421027

>Just like you
>and yet, unlike you in important ways
>It follows it's natural inclination, to slide down the window and join those that have gone before it
>Whereas you resist your urges and sit like a faggot next to an empty seat
>and the world rolls on
>relentlessly through the stupefying darkness
>as though it, too, were a solitary raindrop
>or a fag on a bus with no gf....

>> No.3421036

>>3421016
lol i know right, like what the fuck does that even look like. its like saying "bluish yellow"

>> No.3421049

>girl randomly makes eye contact with you while trying to find a seat on the bus
>you don't know her
>she sits behind you
>your first thought is, "Hey I should get out of the seat I'm in already and move to the one behind me where she is because that totally won't look weird."

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3421058

>>3421036
>>3421016

its the color of a deer u faggots.

>> No.3421078

>>3421058
then why didn't he just say reindeer colored eyes.

checkmate

grayish brown confirmed for not a real thing.

>> No.3421089

>really dark
>make random eye contact with girl who's probably 16-18 but looks younger
>scared she thinks you're a rapist
>accidently make eye contact again
>shitshit she definitely thinks i'm a rapist
>thank god she got off at a different stop

>> No.3421090

>>3420924
>Your childhood, when you still had fun, didn't have to fear responsibility and stress about your social life.

Of course your childhood didn't have to fear responsibility and stress about your social life. A childhood is an abstract concept and can't feel emotions.

>> No.3421105

>>3420924
The use of commas in this is atrocious.

>> No.3421108

>Smile slightly
>Duplexity
Your the shittiest writer I've seen in a while, you moreon. You deserve to be depresed.
>>3420977
>He hasn't watched Wanted.
Just like curving the bullet, you moron.

>> No.3421121

>>3421108

>moreon
haha

>> No.3421127

>>3421108
I hope you're being ironic.

>> No.3421171

It's beautiful, OP.

Keep suffering, please :)..

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3421193

>>3420924
>The simplistic duplexity of it all, feeling perhaps compassion, lust, love even?

>> No.3421199

>>3421108
>chastising others for not liking crappy movies

>> No.3421204

>>3420982
THE WOOOOOORLD.

>> No.3421211

>>3420924
>raaaaape

>> No.3421291

>>3421049

Life is too short to worry about "what looks weird".

>> No.3421305

>>3421127
Ov Courz Im Jus Jokin, u Faget

>> No.3421314

>>3421090

You have reading comprehension problems if you think his childhood was the subject of that sentence.

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3421317

Hahahaha I come back from work after posting this and I see this. I haven't laughed this hard in awhile.

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3421329

I really hope this thread was intended for comedic effect.

>> No.3421332

>>3421329

For OP it at least was lol

>> No.3421376

>>3421291
Too bad everyone's so preoccupied with their shitty lives to notice that.Me included.

>> No.3421416
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3421416

>4chan: that feel when no gf

I swear to god this entire website is now /r9k/, even kc and ylilauta are better now

good god will you niggers shut the FUCK up about "buu huu I don't has a girlfriend"

go the hell outside then and stop posting what is literally worse than actual spam

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3421447

>>3420924
That feel. I know it.

Also, grow a fucking pair.

Even though I'm in the same boat as you there are a few instances where I'll Really want a girl and so I summon balls from out of the air and go talk to her. Usually I'll fail but once in a while something might happen.

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3421498

>>3421447
Thanks for the prep talk you scrotum sorcerer.

For that your reward is a bag of dicks.

>> No.3421525

We need a /tfw/ board.

>> No.3421551

>>3421416
blame modern society maaaann
Theyre like, keeping the skinny white intellectual male oppressed and stuff

>> No.3421593

>>3421551
If someone complains about no girlfriend, they're not an intellectual.
I realize your post was meant to be ironic but I felt those adjectives weren't.