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3192827 No.3192827 [Reply] [Original]

Can I get some feedback on my essay approach?

>> No.3192832
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>>3192827
what the fuck am i looking at

>> No.3192839
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feedback it into the paper shredder

>> No.3192842

>>3192827
epic
i like it

>> No.3192843
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>> No.3192852

>>3192832
I-it's my assignment. Don't you like it?

I'm not writing the whole thing like that, I just thought it would be more interesting and creative to start like that and then say "This is the level of discussion..." Instead of inserting excerpts.

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>>3192852
>dat font
>greentexting

>> No.3192886

>>3192852
I think it could work. Change the fonts to Ariel for the 4chan one and something else for you and print it on normal paper..

>> No.3192890

There is no joy in /Literature/, for OP has struck out.

>> No.3192904

It's gonna be somewhat opaque to the non-greentext outsider.

>> No.3192918

>>3192827
your post is, indeed, a good post; your essay is, indeed, a good essay; there are numerous points in your essay, indeed, which i would like to explore later, monsieur, as far as i can tell, and mind you, that's me telling so that's a high authority for you, is that your essay bears re-reading. your way of including 4chan posts in it is cutting edge. we are all surprised by this, even some are whispering among themselves about whether they should appear manifestly surprised, taken aback, or to come forward and congratulate you on this magnificent advance in human discourse by saluting you as a sociologist in the vanguard of the vanguard. for my part, if there is a joke in this post's attached image, it is entirely over my head, but i celebrate it regardless, in a spirit of admiration incomprehensible to narrow-minded people. i feel you are an industrious spirit, and that your effect on the board's culture will not be parasitical and unoriginal, or a vain one which through jest validates the worst tendencies amongst us, as the sadducees sought to mislead the good folk away from the holy mysteries gathering and foregathering goodness and revelation in the zodiac of holiness that the esssenes had prepared for the absolute.

Scardinelli, 1765.

>> No.3192929

>>3192827
Arial or Calibri font
I can no longer read short hand whatever you call it this type of font

>> No.3192930

Change shity to shitty. We're not all chavs.

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>>3192886
>>3192929
>Arial
Does this read a little better?

>>3192904
>It's gonna be somewhat opaque to the non-greentext outsider.
I will explain later that the opening to my essay was copied from an 'intellectual debate.'

>> No.3192970

>>3192918
Ha ha, brilliant

>> No.3193385

>>3192945
I preferred the handwriting one.