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2522927 No.2522927 [Reply] [Original]

Shit
Fuck
These words are cruel.
I love these words.
They tell me who I am,
What I'm supposed to feel.
Without these words, there is no life.
Without this life, these words aren't real
Are they real?

Comments, questions, concerns?

>> No.2522931

/lit/ is a subreddit dedicated to bad user-submitted prose and poetry.

>> No.2522932

By comments questions concerns i bassicaly meant tell me what you think

>> No.2522937

>>2522931
Well obviously any modern poetry isn't going to please someone classically trained in literature so im sorry if I offend you

>> No.2522940

there's no subtlety and the subject matter is superficial with little depth or direction in the analysis of it

>> No.2522943
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2522943

>>2522927
You forgot cunt you
Cunt; don't forget doggerel
Means a garroting

>> No.2522951

sick little passive chair
cum stains and human tissue
hidden there between the cracks
lustful homosexual sex
secrets much to grim to be told
lonely nights passed by beneath the moon
numbers outrage the calling mold
fog hunger
a dream of things unspeakable
will the cock be like the heart
engorged with blood and shining
or will it wither
like a flower
an amaranth that lives forever?

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2522970

>>2522951

>> No.2522972

That is
Not a poem
You've just pressed
Enter
Every now
and then
It
is
not
a poem
at all.
What concerns
me
is
how much
glue you
huff

>> No.2522975

>>2522937
It's not that, you just are terrible at poetry.