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>”They rode on and the sun in the east flushed pale streaks of light and then a deeper run of color like blood seeping up in sudden reaches flaring planewise and where the earth drained up into the sky at the edge of creation the top of the sun rose out of nothing like the head of a great red phallus until it cleared the unseen rim and sat squat and pulsing and malevolent behind them.”
>flushed pale streaks of light
Error: mental image NOT fucking found
>blood seeping up in sudden reaches
Uhhh
>flaring planewise and where the earth drained up into the sky at the edge of creation the top of the sun rose out of nothing
Am I being given a flight path for an air show by a fucking retard? WHICH FUCKING WAY IS IT ALL GOING
>sat squat and pulsing and malevolent behind them
What what WHAT YOU JUST SAID THE SUN IS A PENIS and now it’s “malevolent”?

This is the worst prose I’ve ever fucking read. It’s all the fuck over the place, I can barely visualize what he’s babbling about only by great pains I can’t stand it bros what the FUCK was he thinking when he wrote this

>> No.23471615

>>23471384
very vivid imagery, had no problem picturing this. maybe just go back to watching the wendigoon video. i'm sure it has a lot of images for you since you obviously need them spoodfed, fucking retard lmfao

>> No.23471620

>>23471615
agreed, this wasn't exactly hard to visualize and was well-written

>> No.23471690

>>23471615
>spoodfed
Who's the retard?

Also it's the cool opinion to hate this book now anyways, so don't worry about it.

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>>23471690
don't even hate the book, it's in a class all in its own. if you're getting filtered this hard by a setting scene, you should go seethe over a book more your speed. the very hungry caterpillar is a good starting point for someone like you.

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It's another OP is retarded thread

>> No.23471766

>>23471384
The sun is a malevolent penis - Cormac McSharty

>> No.23471788
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23471788

>>23471384

>> No.23471842

It's Faulkner-level word salad. Nobody actually thinks it's good, they just pretend like it is because it makes them feel special.

>> No.23471887

>>23471384
Lads, do women prefer a malevolent or benevolent penis?

>> No.23471907

>>23471788
>ESL
I always imagine these types of posters to be American teenagers.

>> No.23471940

>>23471842
>Faulkner bad!

lol learn English

>> No.23471943

>>23471907
You have to be a mental midget to be filtered this hard by mccarthy, either that or you just don't know English

>> No.23472215

>>23471940
He's dead. You can quit riding his meat.

>> No.23472235

>>23471384

"Images" and "visualization" are irrelevant at any rate.

>> No.23472292

>>23471887
>caring about what women prefer
icky

>> No.23472315

>>23471615
based

>> No.23472324

>>23471384
this shit sounds like an ai-generated text if the prompt was "peak purple prose"

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>>23471615
>.i'm

>> No.23472705

Seethe anon. He is pale and thin, he wears a thin and ragged Evangelion shirt. He stokes his penis. Outside lie dark turned fields with rags effay and darker 7-11s beyond that harbor yet a few last tendies. His folk are known for jerkers of cock and drinkers of cum but in truth his father has been dissatisfied with him. He lies in monster energy, he quotes from boards whose names are now lost. The anon crouches by the computer and watches him.

Night of your birth. Thirty-three. Dubs. The autist they were called. Shaka how the wall did fall. I looked for BCC, holes in the heavens. The nigger stove.

The mother dead, raped by pakis, did incubate in her own bosom the creature who would carry her off. The father never pays his bills, the anon is NEET. He has a sister in this world that looks down at him like he is garbage. He watches, pale and unwashed. He can neither read nor write and in him broods already a taste for mindless politics. All shitpost present in that visage, the anon the father of the bant.

>> No.23472722

>>23472215

Your a retard dude

>> No.23472795

>>23471690
4chan turns against itself in an endless revolution of based and cringe

>> No.23472800

>>23471766
>similies
>Symbolism
>what are these?
Yeah, he should've just said "the sun rose"
Fucking literalists

>> No.23472850

>>23471690
>acts like and illiterate dumbass
>oh but you made minor spelling error so YOU'RE the retard and I'M the based chad wojak

go back to twitter, homo

>> No.23472859

>>23471384
Under the bisected moon’s last light, the perfidifious cut grass of morning stinging the olfactories, I read your post. I spat and rode on.

>> No.23472862

>>23472850
>and illiterate
>made minor

>> No.23472911

>>23472862
I'm drunk rn I get a pass. and "you made minor spelling error" was intentional to portray the fact that OP is retarded

>> No.23473303

>>23471384
mental midget, but I'm replying to obvious bait. sage, nigger.