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The ONE PIECE edition

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>> No.21340510

You know, in spite of the fact that I'm a native speaker of English, I've never actually thought about the comma.

I sometimes catch myself inserting unnecessary commas into sentences, which at first look alright, then odd when I read over it, then I instinctively remove the comma and read it once more. The sentences still seems strange to my, at least until I actually read it aloud; only then does my decision to remove the comma make sense; and I realize that the sentence was complete without a comma, if that makes any sense.

>> No.21340528

>>21340510
I insert commas whenever I would have had a quick pause in verbal speech, unfortunately this is not always grammatically correct.

>> No.21340552

>>21340186
Once I drew a sequel comic to One Piece. It was pretty good, but I never finished it, obviously. There's no way it would be shorter than at least 3 volumes, even if I cut out as much fat as possible.

Why was I so much more confident in my creativity before?