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The poem that destroyed /lit/

>> No.20317236

>feminist
>still says "goddess"
FUCKING SLUT PIG

>> No.20317239

Damn that's awful. I have women an astonishing amount

>> No.20317245

>>20317239
hate not have lol

>> No.20317246

Rate my poem:

Sawing off the pavement
Repenting their past lives
Might I be the only payment left
To be left behind
Clay and pigment footsteps
Rush it boiling clean
Our bull let in linguistics
That only we can breathe

I got a prayer that'll make you theirs now
Beneath sepulchers
Raise your entrails as an offer
I gotta prayer that'll make you theirs now
Beneath sepulchers
Raise your entrails as an offer

Fondling with pitchforks
In a cattle prodded sea
Signaling the sedatives
To emaciate their queen
Bowing in constriction
Anytime you leave
We snuffed ourselves an angel
And cut her by the wings

I got a prayer that'll make you theirs now
Beneath sepultures
Raise your entrails as an offer
I got a prayer that'll make you theirs now
Beneath sepultures
Raise your entrails as an offer

In my sight
I was born
To bring death at the footsteps of your home
Tonight
I have sewn
All the hair and crooked nails
That you all have worn
While your wife
Sits at home
I plant the vermin
Because she needs it so

How long must we fold by hand?
The nuns are burning wheels again
Dent of mattress to make it bare
Come clean with the anecdote
After all we came undone
Pale of sluts with host at fault
One day we won't pay your debt
Our centipedes will get theirs yet

Poachers in your home
Poachers in your home
Poachers in your home
Poachers in your home

>> No.20317249

>>20317239
Lucky bastard. I only have one woman

>> No.20317251

>>20317246
The "I got a" doesn't flow very nicely. Not only when in the context of this poem, but I just generally dislike that phrase

>> No.20317262

>>20317239
mf leave some bitches for the rest

>> No.20317263

Women have zero creative thought. They are just vessels to be filled by whatever male created ideology currently dominates the noosphere.

>> No.20317267

It should be illegal for women to read.

>> No.20317268

Go burn sage and babble about astrology you stupid cunt.

>> No.20317474

A.h? Adolf Hitler?

>> No.20317768

>>20317221
At least she is honest about women ruining the world.

>> No.20317885

Since this thread is pointless, would any anons be willing to read a poem I finished earlier?

>> No.20318022

Brap O my slampig
But brap not sweetly into the night
Neither saccharine nor fruity smell
Do not brap
O my sow
an innocent passing of gas
You have brapped far too often
that brap which would please men

Brap O my slampig
a brap that will topple kingdoms
with its pungency
The braps which
singlehandedly
ended the world
by brapping
in a weak mans nose
Brap a brap
whose power
does not lie
in crudeness
but in the power of
all the eggs I made you eat

O my slampig
Brap disgustingly
The Bravest
and Brappiest Brap

>> No.20318030

>>20317885
yeah if its a shortie

>> No.20318033
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20318033

>>20317221
>poem about women written by a woman
>all it does is whine that men get all the attention
>while it rips off poems written by men

>> No.20318038

this is pretty good

must be alicia hollanger
or alyson hartgrave
or artemis handerholderhuntress
or aretha hardyboys
or arrestia homosexuales
or avondale harksbell
or aroundaway hatchetwound
or angina halitosis
or arrestafield hefernen
or arrington hexagon

>> No.20318040

>>20318033
they think art is a game or something

>> No.20318053
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>>20317221
God I fucking hate w*men

>> No.20318065

>>20318030
Nah sorry, it’s about 150 lines.

>> No.20318294

>>20317239
I have women zero. plz gib sum 2 me

>> No.20318305

>ITT: seething incels

>> No.20318329

Women poetry b like: I have holes BRAP

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20318350

stupid tier
>arguing with women

smart tier
>reminding women that their peak is 5 years at most and everything after that is downhill

>> No.20318761

>>20317221


Can't we just admire
everything instead of hope
that fragments of the world
might shine for someone
as they point at the remains
of us to their lovers

as if we are the stars.

>> No.20319029

>>20317221
Why would anyone voluntarily read any work of literature by a woman?

>> No.20319304

>>20317221
i hate
women so much
it’s unreal

love
from kazakhstan