/lit/ - Literature

>>19555252
>>19555280
this is clearly taken from Wattpad

>>19555252
>>19555280
Prose on par with Hemingway.

>>19555252
>>19555280
didnt you already post this, or was it someone else with a different brother?

>>19555252
Yes. Instead of shamming him only for (you)s actually be a good brother and help him with his passion

>>19555252
You should kill yourself

>>19555298
Yes it is, he won't let me proofread until after he has posted it. I don't really know why.
>>19555306
First thing I thought of, thought he was trolling me because it's just like the other pasta.

>>19555252
the prose is actually quite good

a shame the actual narrative is likely utter rubbish

>>19555252

BLUE EYES WHITE DRAGON!

if you don't support autistic yugioh fanfic writers, who will?

>>19555252
How autistic are we talking?

>>19555252
>My 17 year old autistic brother...


(You)

>>19555252
Is this your brother's work too, anon?

>>19555252
It's good, but it's no Catgirl Misaki the Vampire Hunter

You can be honest without being cruel. Just do that, it won't help him if you don't tell him how to improve

>>19555252
oh man this was funny the first twp times....

>>19555879
still one of my favorite threads to date
>>19555885
this

>>19555252
honestly - it depends. how 'autistic" is he? what can he handle / comprehend? use that as your gage. also, lit is filled with fucked up writing full of 'errors' to depict how people are, from Twain and beyond. use that as a guide as well. get an illustrator and i bet that shit will sell more copies than your book.

this is his shot at getting an autistic ya reader gf why aren't you helping him

>>19555252
This poor kid opened up to you and you've posted it here for attention from strangers. Disgusting. I hope he never finds out and can unironically enjoy writing whatever he wants.

>>19555252
>>19555280
How do you feel about this one then?

>>19556195
The poor kid just got a mild life lesson on an anonymous imageboard instead of a far harsher one IRL.

>>19555252
>>19555280
Sounds like your brother is confessing to being a homosexual. This seems extremely autobiographical, except for some reason he's an anthropomorphic dragon who went to kindergarten, middle school, high school, etc.

>>19556195
It's too late, I've already told him. He deserves to know what OP is doing.

Your brother sounds cute.
Ask him to post his boypussy here please..

>>19555252
>>19555280
>You're a Christian! You're a Christian!

Make him read this:
Alter R. - The Art of Biblical Narrative (2011)
Loubser J.A. - Oral and Manuscript Culture in the Bible. Studies on the Media Texture of the New Testament. Explorative Hermeneutics (2013)
Jousse M. - Memory, Memorization, and Memorizers. The Galilean Oral-Style Tradition and Its Traditionists (2018)
Watkins C. - How to kill a dragon. Aspects of Indo-European poetics (1995)
Foley J.M. - A Companion to Ancient Epic (2005)
Lord A.B. - Epic Singers and Oral Tradition (2018)
Nagy G. - Homeric questions (2005)

>>19556212
>If you can't find Minnesota on a map you must be a total idiot.
Kino

>>19557118
It accurately reflects how alien the experience is coming to terms with being both autistic and homosexual. It's not just any great and terrible monster.