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I have an idea for a short fantasy story about a young female knight battling a demon of gluttony that has taken over a town and kidnapped all the women. Any ideas or suggestions?

>> No.19096998

>>19096992
Why would a food demon steal wahmen

>> No.19097002

>>19096998
he sends them all to the kitchen

>> No.19097004

>>19096992
>female knight
Stopped reading.

>> No.19097023

>>19097004
Fuck off Mr educated. What would you call it?

>> No.19097040

>>19096992
I suggest you stop watching cringe fantasy anime

>> No.19097115

>>19096998
Metaphor for the obesity epidemic? Or fat fetish jerkoff smut.

>> No.19097136

>>19097002
Underrated kek

>> No.19097147

>>19096992
Open it with a scene of the demon raping one of the woman.

>> No.19097422

>>19096992
>Women
>Knight

Why anon. She will never fuck you

>> No.19097443

>>19097422
She will if I write myself as a character in the story and have her fuck him.

>> No.19097467

>>19097023
I would have a male knight.

>> No.19097483

>>19097467
not into male weight gain

>> No.19097485

>>19096992
>female knight
Unless at some point she gets ORCED.com, you lost me

>> No.19097487

>>19097443
it will be cringe

>> No.19097526

>>19096992
>Any ideas or suggestions?
When submitting to publishers, include a cover letter in 72 pt font that says. "I AM A DISABLED QUEER NEGRO TRANSBIAN MUSLIMA"

If you understand anything about current publishing you know that's legitimately the only thing that matters. It won't sell, but you'll get a crappy little deal.

>> No.19097537

>>19096992
I mean, first of all, drop the "female" shit. Knights are male. You aren't writing a manga.

>> No.19097548

>>19097537
yes i am

>> No.19097563

>>19097537
>Noo you can't have a fantastical thing in a fantasy story!!!

>> No.19097988

>>19097563
Less that you can’t and more that you shouldn’t, it will make your story worse.

>> No.19098116

>>19097988
>wull, I won’t read it, so it’s bad.
>penis rulez!

>> No.19098188

>>19097004
>>19097422
>>19097485
>>19097537
Have sex

>> No.19098222

>>19096992
isn't that basically the plot of Claymore?

>> No.19099122
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>>19097563
>ITS FANTASY SO THERE IS NO CONCEPT OF REALISM AT ALL
holy fucking plebbitor, kys.

>> No.19099141

>>19096992
Is it thinspo?

>> No.19099335

>>19098222
Mindless yoma will outright kill not kidnap humans.

>> No.19099349

>>19099122
Seethe

>> No.19099451

>>19099122
>woman has magical armor that amplifies her strenth
wow problem solved

>> No.19099504

don't

>> No.19099520

>>19098222
>lesbian berserk
yeah

>> No.19099536

>>19099520
You remember that they were really on an island and it was such a dramatic twist.

>> No.19099642

>>19099536
everyone does, of course..
WOE ME, WOE ME, WOVE ME. is what i remember

>> No.19099755

>>19099642
Ending credits was pretty nice too