Critique my poetry; woke up and old thread died edition

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Critique my poetry; woke up and old thread died edition Anonymous Wed Aug 25 21:46:01 2021 No.18920494 [Reply] [Original]

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> of divine nostalgia, I sing
> Which regain'd artistic creation
> and conferr'd upon us such a good thing
> as humanity's great restoration

> but to understand why it was good
> a clear contrast of eras is needed
> For unless what shall be sung, though it should
> For the fool will go on un-believed

> All the peoples of modern-day earth
> To hither and thither turn'd their heads
> and they notic'd a literary dearth
> which had caus'd all of them to have said

> " In those most holy days before this age
> " The word was sacred, and writer was saint;
> " No one profane was allow'd near a page
> " And thusly every page was free from taint
> " Now from words, we are aloof as ever
> " And can no longer claim the same;
> " Shall we know another artist never?
> " Or will one once be restor'd again?

> Civilization was to be sunder'd
> to questions unanswer'd, discontent grew
> till heavenly eyes had there wander'd
> and those eyes divine would see us through!

> For muses from their celestial place
> look'd down to see our sad situation
> To solve our difficulty by their grace
> would be their heavenly intervention

> And so by inspiration from above
> They brought forth to us in an act of love
> A man come from antipodean land
> and he, a modern scholar-gentleman,
> Was natural philosopher re-birth'd
> and to he will bow all man on earth
> For he is a literary master
> To whom all authors will look hereafter
> And the men of Earth will sing praises
> And from all their voices will be raised
> " Hark, the muses have brought a sage
> " Illustrious man and glorious age!
> " Rejoice! Rejoice! Our era has a voice!
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