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I think it's good. Includes:
>An autistic schizophrenic protagonist in modern day times
>A made up introduction from my non existent waifu [maybe skip this section.]
>Two different pen names from an honest mistake
>A mini parody of the first book of Plato's Republic
>A brief analysis of memes and 4chan culture
>A rewrite of the bane scene
>Spelling errors
>Living ants yet dead dogs
and much more.
Free version. For you.
>https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bICo9gU4nXXervDQGk0fK4dUzDy8xlUn/view?usp=sharing

>> No.18579470

>>18579467
Who fucking cares?

>> No.18579494

>>18579470
I don't know. I thought you might because I care about you a deep level that YOU just ain't ready for.

>> No.18579713

>>18579467
>*burp* on the cover
...and so, it was over before it even began

>> No.18579855

sounds like you tried to write a meme book, why's that? Dont you have real things to write about?

>> No.18579863

Sounds fun. I'll definitely check it out when I get home. Good job, op!

>> No.18579895

>>18579467
jfc I hate this anglo obsession with muh quirky avant-garde so much

>> No.18579917
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18579917

>>18579467
whoa! that sounds right up my alley dude. I love analysis of memes and 4chan culture and non existent waifus

>> No.18579923

>>18579467
>autistic schizophrenic

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/18578904/
>Autistic-spectrum conditions and psychotic-spectrum conditions (mainly schizophrenia, bipolar disorder, and major depression) represent two major suites of disorders of human cognition, affect, and behavior that involve altered development and function of the social brain. We describe evidence that a large set of phenotypic traits exhibit diametrically opposite phenotypes in autistic-spectrum versus psychotic-spectrum conditions, with a focus on schizophrenia. This suite of traits is inter-correlated, in that autism involves a general pattern of constrained overgrowth, whereas schizophrenia involves undergrowth. These disorders also exhibit diametric patterns for traits related to social brain development, including aspects of gaze, agency, social cognition, local versus global processing, language, and behavior. Social cognition is thus underdeveloped in autistic-spectrum conditions and hyper-developed on the psychotic spectrum.;>We propose and evaluate a novel hypothesis that may help to explain these diametric phenotypes: that the development of these two sets of conditions is mediated in part by alterations of genomic imprinting. Evidence regarding the genetic, physiological, neurological, and psychological underpinnings of psychotic-spectrum conditions supports the hypothesis that the etiologies of these conditions involve biases towards increased relative effects from imprinted genes with maternal expression, which engender a general pattern of undergrowth. By contrast, autistic-spectrum conditions appear to involve increased relative bias towards effects of paternally expressed genes, which mediate overgrowth. This hypothesis provides a simple yet comprehensive theory, grounded in evolutionary biology and genetics, for understanding the causes and phenotypes of autistic-spectrum and psychotic-spectrum conditions.

>> No.18579939

Dearly beloved, are you listening?
I can't remember a word that you were saying...
Are we demented or am I disturbed?
The space that's in between insane and insecure
(Uuh... uuuh... uuuh... uuh...)
Oh therapy, can you please fill the void?
Am I retarded or am I just overjoyed?

>> No.18579947

Not bad but really not something I am interested in anymore, I am too old for this quirky nonsense. I'd rather read about something real and powerful that makes me feel feelings I want to feel like love and happiness and ecstasy. This kind of thing only ever evokes feelings of regret and emptiness and the almost specular reality your story depicts makes me feel bad for you and despise you OP. Please write something real and honest and sincere.

>> No.18580537

>>18579467
>"Oh god." The cashire said. "Please. Fucking. Take these and leave."
This made me want to leave this board.
The word "quirky" taken in the negative way it should be taken captures how horrible this shit is.
OP, I hope you're under 20.

>> No.18580557

>>18579917
this but unironically