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This thread is for erotic literature, both writing and reading it. It is not for manga or comics. Keep it to the written word only.

>read anything good lately?
>written anything good lately?

>> No.17842839

>>17842833
All erotic 'literature' should be censored or banned.

>> No.17842845

COOM THREAD

DELET

>> No.17842863

>>17842839
Brainlet take. Embracing good erotic literature is fine. Romance novels can feature eroticism. If you prefer think of this as a containment thread.

>> No.17842955

How do I find some good erotica? Most of the stuff sold online is some bdsm fantasy wrote by women and stories on sites like literotica are often laughably short.

>> No.17842971

>>17842833
Look man, it's not necessarily I am an erotic writer or it is an erotic story but I will take any opportunity to plug for my work
https://pastebin.com/UXF7prTi

>> No.17842972
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>>17842863
>Embracing good erotic literature is fine

>> No.17842974

>>17842955
If you have the money you can commission it. For about $40 you can get 2k worth of a story written (3 pages ish). So you're looking at $120 for 6k words for a story tailor made for your tastes.

That or just find discords and subreddits that might fill your niche fetish.

>> No.17842979
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17842979

Sister without rival,
most beautiful of all,
she looks like the star-goddess, rising
at the start of the good New Year.
Perfect and bright, shining skin,
seductive in her eyes when she glances,
sweet in her lips when she speaks,
and never a word too many.
Slender neck, shining body,
her hair is true lapis,
her arm gathers gold,
her fingers are like lotus flowers,
ample behind, tight waist,
her thighs extend her beauty,
shapely in stride when she steps on the earth.
She has stolen my heart with her embrace,
She has made the neck of every man
turn round at the sight of her.
Whoever embraces her is happy,
he is like the head of lovers,
and she is seen going outside
like That Goddess, the One Goddess.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ntnBuQAvFjA

>> No.17842981

I wonder who could behind this thread :^)

>> No.17842984

>>17842972
OP here. Erotic lit is no more destructive a pass time than video games.

>> No.17842985

>>17842971
It only gets "erotic" towards the end, and even than my language is vague enough so it is more well written rather than coombrained. The bulk of the story is spent inside the main characters head as he walks around a strange landscape.

>> No.17842991
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>> No.17843000

>>17842984
>Erotic lit is no more destructive a pass time than video games
both should be banned.

>> No.17843003

I'm reading the five volume Victorian classic, My Secret Life by Walter.

The last thing I read and was blown away by was Hideo Okuda's Lala Pipo. Probably the realest depiction of humanity I've ever read.

>> No.17843010

>>17842974
how does one go about becoming an erotic writer for pay, it seems like the dream job

>> No.17843020

>>17842833
>>17842971
Here is a poem I wrote a day ago (posted it already but it has been modified) I am originally ranting about MK Ultra but than it turns into a love song for a beautiful woman

Over the ocean oh so far away, those crystal pictures plays
Olden gong, frozen songs
Lands in lame, modern games
Seems right, temper my mind light

Even if six wars fought, “devils” once Kings naught
Our home now rusty, the web now dusty
And the Earth, brings vile birth
From it I try to night, I try to smite,

Oh but however I know pain, can’t escape the Butterfly chain
All is a tool, to turn one a fool
To grow the vile, Babel pile
None to enjoy, I must destroy

The iron maze the giant Town, to the top break the Crown
Break reflection, end subjection
Lynch mage, turn them to deaths cage
Empty of joy, sick world be my toy

And so I am shot alas I am dead, I open my eyes and there I lie
Not in Tartarus lot, but upon a cot
No blood, just a sweat like flood
I hear sparrow cree, I watch sway tree

I breathe and ache signs my life is mine, yet so far from fine
Alone, a pain even earthen beauty can’t cone
But then snaps dream, and with it false seems
And next to me, you my only tea

I cry but your olive flesh is soft, my tears soak into that cloth
Lightly round your nose, lips like rose
Cheeks like dusk, dark eyes like husk
Simple sea mind, long hair like wooden rind

I know your fill, like your body I know your will
Unlike the Jesters, you do not fester
Your dreams pure, your passion a cure
I will not find, within false kinds

For you are all of God’s Disc that is happy, all of that is is uncompromisingly good

>> No.17843022

>>17843010
>set up paypal
>go to /aco/ and advertise your services
>see how other writers advertise their work there
>copy them
>connect with anons via discord
>find out what they want
>agree to a price
>write in instalments/get paid in instalments
>profit

>> No.17843024

>>17843000
Video games and are made by Freemasons, but I write my own stuff

>> No.17843029

>>17843003
>>17843003
Why the realist?

>> No.17843032

>>17842839
>Song of Songs should be censored or banned
go away

>> No.17843038

>>17842991
Do girls ever dress up as trannies?

>> No.17843045

>>17843029
because it was free from moralizing and sentimentality, no sensuality either.

>> No.17843135

>>17842833
pretty lass

>> No.17843188
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17843188

I've been writing Pokemon tickle fetish erotica.

>> No.17843195

>>17843188
As someone who does commission writing I fucking hate pokefags. I always send them away.

>> No.17843212

>>17843010
First, write well. Second, write enough that you have a distinct style in people's minds and do certain fetishes enough that people know how you do those. That's about it because, at this point, people should be coming to you and asking you if you take commissions. After that you can go and get creative - try YCH stories, patreon, etc.

Also, don't do any of this. If you want to get paid writing unpublishable trash online, you'll have a much easier time doing it on royalroad or something and shilling a patreon for your serial. Erotica seems to appeal exclusively to very old people with awful taste - cuckolding is the most popular genre by far - and very young people who can't pay. Every time I've done a commission I've felt a little bit of my soul leave my body, and I enjoy writing it normally as a hobby.

>> No.17843229

>>17843195
Redpill me on them. I've only just written a few things for the Pokechads so far. I don't mind the Pokemon so much because they seem less grotesquely "furry" than other furry stuff (no mega-detailed snouts and claws and shit). They're just blobs. Is the autism worse or something

>> No.17843235

>>17842984
so you admit it's destructive

>> No.17843239

>>17843235
Yes. But I also play video games. So it is destructive, but let's be real, what is fun is fun.

>> No.17843248

>>17843229
Personal preference that I can't and won't write any canon fiction. No Zelda or Poke characters, or Evangelion characters, etc. The usual suspects. I find myself getting major writer's block when trying to write in already established worlds. And, on top of that, writing smut for these characters.

>> No.17843275

>>17843239
What shall it profit a man to have fun but lose his soul?

>> No.17843357

>>17843275
I never could take people who cry out about masturbating, vidya, anime etc. on 4chan seriously.

>> No.17843401

she is extremely attractive, sweet and feminine unlike the thots normally posted here

>> No.17843409

>read anything good lately?
I enjoyed reading Fanny Hill. It has some really steamy stuff. Would recommend

>> No.17843427

>>17843275
Christ is king, I ain't disputing that. Me playing vidya and reading erotica doesn't make Christ any less King.

>> No.17843434

>>17843427
John 14:15
>If you love me, you will keep my commandments.

>> No.17843439

>>17843427
Thanks for proving the argument of deicide right

>> No.17843446

>>17843188
I do some Pokemon hypnosis fetish erotica. Based.

>>17843195
>>17843229
For me, I turn away most Pokemon commissions because they want me to write about Ash specifically, which is very weird because he is ten.

>> No.17843472

>>17843446
Do they want to see Ash hypnotised by Kaa lol

>> No.17843804

>>17842833
After reading Mishima, i am starting to love erotic literature. I recently picked up a copy of "erotic haiku" edited by Sato for 16 bucks! It's usually like 40. Anyway, i love it so far. There are a few clunkers of course, but here are two of my favorites:

so urgent
your kisses
my hands

there are more sexy ones, and more sweet ones, but I always prefer the ones with yugen.

His undoing just three of her buttons

>> No.17844029

>>17843401
Yeah who is she

>> No.17844031

>>17842991
I want to read this, is it real?

>> No.17844090

>>17844031
Yeah

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08ZNMQR37/ref=sr_1_4?dchild=1&keywords=gender+bender&qid=1616435054&s=digital-text&sr=1-4

Let me know if the link works.

>> No.17844211

I have an account on bdsmlr.com where I posted like three or four stories. They're about bimbofication or normal girls unwillingly turned into sex objects.
the profile is called the-one-who-cums or you can search for literotica or drug induced bimbo or slutty streamer.
Check it out if any of you are into that sort of stuff. I'm most proud of my "Hacked Bimbo" story.

>> No.17844261

>>17844211
Link one here.

>> No.17844266

I wrote about 50k words in different short stories and put them up on amazon and made a whopping seven dollars.

>> No.17844284

>>17844266
Sub-Genre?

>> No.17844297
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Erotic literature seems to suffer from the same problem that plagues most of the horror genre—it's usually too heavy handed. I can't think of too many examples where something was sufficiently erotic but also not so explicit that it doesn't seem clunky. For me, really only Lady Chatterley's Lover comes to mind.

>> No.17844320
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Lovely book

>> No.17844325

>>17844284
Tried scifi, didn’t work. Tried gym rats, went okay. College dude fucking every woman he ran across was the one people actually liked so much they left reviews.

>> No.17844344

>>17842833
>ctrl F "Black Future"
> Phrase not found
You disappoint me, /lit/

>> No.17844351

>>17844261
Like how do you mean? I think you need to make an account in order to view them, you could just use a throwaway email and password which is all you need.
Other than that, I'm not too tech savvy and the stories are too long to copy and paste here.

>> No.17844367

>>17844297
It's about as nuanced as superhero comics.

>> No.17844394

>>17842833
I wrote a guy 5 pages worth of "pee desperation" softcore erotica in return for a diary of his girlfriend's bathroom trips. When, how often, how badly she needed it, etc. Only pee though, as she's a girl.

>> No.17844405

Where do I post stories with minors?

>> No.17844428

>>17844405
In hell where you belong.

>> No.17844437

>>17844405
ASSTR

>> No.17844486

>>17844090
Found it, thanks. I hope the brother and “sister” have sex

>> No.17844523

>>17844486
Noted.

>> No.17844741

Hindu lit gets pretty saucy, Gitagovinda of Jayadeva and the Birth of Kumara by Kalidasa get my recs

>> No.17844752

>>17844741
yes yes bunta redeem that google play card ooh yes~ redeeem~ redeeeeeem~

>> No.17844920

>>17844752
Bruh I wish I was getting paid to shill Poo-mythology, I'm just mentioning some poems I read in an Eastern Religions class in university

>> No.17845046

>>17844344
>this is your brain on americanism
can burgers go five minutes without thinking about black cocks?

>> No.17845069
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17845069

I only read the finest NTR in the lands.

>> No.17845255

>>17845069
Those knees! I wish I could be more like her

>> No.17845274

>>17845069
Russian girls are so human.

>> No.17845925

>>17844320
Don't listen to anon. It's a retarded little story.

>> No.17846009

>>17845046
I'm latinx

>> No.17846029

>>17846009
Chicano, se nota.

>> No.17846067

>>17842833
name of semen demon?

>> No.17846205

>>17842833
All erotic literature is absolute trash. It all reads like a 12 year old boy making up sexual anecdotes to his friends at school

>> No.17846429

Any romance type stuff written from a man's perspective, and written well? I'm lonely

>> No.17847060

>>17844523
Did you write the story? I think it’s a good start, I definitely want to see Stephanie get ravaged by Ryan, and eventually her/his brother.

>> No.17847078

>>17846205
Unironically get better paragraphs on wow moonguard than you do in erotic lit books.

>> No.17847083

>>17847060
Yeah I did. And yeah I've got a number of ways the story could play out. Would you mind leaving a review? It'd help me sell more copies (and then be more motivated to spend time writing the next instalments).

Was there anything you particularly liked in the first issue?

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>>17842833

>> No.17847371
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17847371

I have a 290k-word WH40k epic fapfic that I'd like to strip of any copyright violations and rewrite from 2nd person present tense to 3rd person past tense, but contemplating the time and effort involved has so far stopped me from starting. I'm also not sure where to post it since there's not a chance in hell it would be allowed on the kindle store. Are there other sites that do decent sales that are ok with tons of rape in stories? It got decent reviews from anons:

>Well heres the problem as to why it doesnt get love.

>The cuck shit is worse than anything ive ever seen, people that cant do cuck shit just fucking die to this, which is a mega tragedy cause its super well written, im degenerate enough that futa on male is in my pantheon of garbage so its like the apex theoretical smut and i could not handle this story physically. Literally i didnt fap for nearly 3 days after reaching a certain point in the story when i nearly puked from emotional damage.

>I would not even vaguely toss aside that stories cuck tag like that, its not “ooga booga me steal girlfriend” garbage that you see all the time and just brush off, its fucking intricate which for people that cant fo cuck shit is WAY worse.

>Dont get me wrong i really wish i could deal with the story, it was phenomenal as far as i could get but fuck it basically scarred me man.

>Id reccomend it to anyone who can tank it but i dont make that call so lightly.

>TL;DR: its too well written for its own good, beware of cucks.

>> No.17847381

>>17847371
I don't know how they check for things like rape, maybe keywords?

You'd probably be better off starting a patreon and uploading in instalments.

>> No.17847454

>>17847083
I'll take a look at leaving a review but I haven't done that on amazon before, so I can't promise anything. Some things I liked:
The living room scene with Cane on top of his newly transformed sibling.
The hourly "shivers", I could see that being interesting when things get sexy
The football player just instinctively flirting, I hope to see more of him
The mystery around what Stephan's original prank was.

>> No.17847496

>>17847454
I thought it would be funnier to hint at the prank that happened before. So much funnier to throw in 'fireworks and chimpanzees' and have the reader guess what the fuck happened.

>> No.17847748

>>17842839
>All erotic 'literature' should be censored or banned.
Stop being such a /pol/

>> No.17847789
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17847789

Um, guys? I know we always say that only women only read YA, but have you guys read this stuff? Pic related was actually... explicit. And it was made all the more powerful by the act of reading all the rest of it...

>> No.17848000

>>17847789
Looks like it's number 5 in a series. Are you telling me I need to read them all? Because I'll fucking do it, anon.

>> No.17848055

>>17842833
Anybody browse sites like Smashwords? A lot of the books look like they're written by schizophrenics but I'm curious if there's anything worthwhile?

>> No.17848076

>>17842833
Years ago I wrote for an erotic fiction fetish forum. It was kinda fun doing it. I kept away from the more fanfiction parts and the weird ass fetishes for the most part. It was cool and I got a small following but one day I just stopped and never submitted any more fiction again. Every once in awhile I'll lurk in some chats and I'll get a rush when people mention my stories and wonder what happened to me.

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>>17848000
trips of courage

>> No.17848973

>>17845925
It's great, you're the retard, anon.

>> No.17849062

>nipple

>> No.17849110

>>17842833
Any good erotic literature?

>> No.17849374

degenerate shit

>> No.17849514

Bros, can recalibrating myself to appreciating erotic lit help me quit cooming to 2D?

>> No.17849551

>>17849514
i spent most of my teenage years cooming to literotica.com, so probably
i find well-written erotica much more stimulating than actual pornography, though

>> No.17849566

what're some classy erotic novel like lady chatterley?

>> No.17850589

Bump

>> No.17851666
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17851666

Will be releasing this soon.

>> No.17851672
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And this one.

>> No.17852164

>>17851666
devil's trips, sign me up for some feet

>> No.17852177

>>17852164
I'll update here when it is reviewed and accepted by Amazon.

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>> No.17852243

>>17843024
>made by Freemasons
based

>> No.17852507

Is there a difference between making arousing content, and erotica?

>> No.17853441

bump

>> No.17853454

>>17852196
I love art like this.

>> No.17853804

>>17843248
>>17843229
>>17843195
>>17843446
>writing smut for a living
easiest job in the world, just use ai dungeon and fill in the blanks

>> No.17854071

Are these too big? She cooed her hands cupping the tips of her breasts a yard beneath her penetrating gaze and they shook in tremulous waves as she undulated them upon her palms but I turned an apathetic gaze toward her junior.

She looked at her sister, enormous melons cupped and rippling from the movements of her experienced hands, and then down at her own barely budding bosom which her small hands enfolded as to draw then out into their own, to become mature as her sister's, and as she played with them so her eyes as if magnetically drawn slowly rose to meet mine as if to say "Please, please, please, choose me."

And I did, though her elder crawled hands and knees toward her to create additional stimulus within her nubile frame, running her dexterous fingers inside the younger's thighs, between the crease of her buttocks, and I approached her, her eyes fixated on my swelling, mouth open this to greet, to invite, to accept within.

>> No.17854082

>>17854071
please stop adding in unneeded words.

>> No.17854372

>>17854071
>barely budding bosom
i lol'ed

>> No.17854437

>>17851666
>>17851672
Make some WMAF stories.

>> No.17854560

>>17843434
where it is said to not read erotic literature, in fact doing so and taking care of his desires that way is much better than eventually look at real women and ending up coveting the wife of someone.
Because THAT is sick and sinful.

>> No.17854767

>>17842833
Is amazon the only viable publishing, or are there publishing companies for erotic works.

>> No.17854802
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17854802

Does lesbian pulp erotica have any literary merits? I have half a mind to order a bunch of these off Abebooks.

>> No.17854915

>>17842839
based, that would make it more taboo and naughty to consume

>> No.17855100
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>>17854802
Oh yeah

>> No.17855733

Oh thank God this thread is here
asstr is fucking down bros
It is down and it's been days since it went down. Basically just burned the library of alexandria. I hope it comes back.
Though to be honest I grew out of it a year or two now. There's 3 or 4 stories I still love and go back to but everything else I just stopped caring about or never cared that much in the first place.

But now they're gone... I posted one here a few months to a year back, but I think it was through paste in which means that copy is also gone. God I love that story.

>> No.17855750

>>17855733
Oh never mind false alarm it's just a dns issue

>> No.17857668

>>17842833
asstr dot org and a bunch of others exist

>> No.17858180

Is this stuff healthier than porn?

>> No.17858194

>>17858180
>guys is this book healthy, i'm afraid

>> No.17858203

>>17858180
yes. but you know what's healthier? having a wife.

>> No.17858245

>>17855750
It's not loading for me, how did you fix it?

>> No.17858257

>>17858203
>having a wife.
foregone conclusion, I am mentally ill and cannot hold a job

>> No.17858340

>>17842955
just write urself, retard. or use ai dungeon

>> No.17858346

>>17858340
ai dungeon is too awkward. requires so much babying to keep it on track and remembering details that you might as well write it yourself

>> No.17858422

>>17858346
>ai dungeon is too awkward. requires so much babying to keep it on track and remembering details

just get good, bro

>> No.17858450

>>17858422
you have to pay out the wazoo to coom with that thing because the devs became jooz all of a sudden

>> No.17858488

I'm writing and publishing on CHYOA. Usually wishfulfilment, vanilla flavored harems.

About to finish this one: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Affection-Multiplier.22075 (First thread is mine. I regret starting it in second person, but when I realized that I was too deep in it to change it)

Now focusing on these two:
https://chyoa.com/story/The-Spirit-of-Lust.26702

https://chyoa.com/story/The-Book-of-Eros-and-The-Curse-of-the-Gifted.34908 (Just started this one)

Say what you want about writing erotica. it's fun.

>>17846429
Those links if you want and don't mind harems.

>> No.17858615

>>17858245
Look on the erotic literature reddit, there is a few threads. one guy has a scraper mirroring it and another has a fix to access the site

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>>17858488
>https://chyoa.com/story/The-Affection-Multiplier.22075
off to a great start

>> No.17858624

>>17858618
Never even knew that shit was a meme when I wrote it. People started comenting on it and I just left it there.

>> No.17859466

>>17858488
>https://chyoa.com/story/The-Spirit-of-Lust.26702
>mc is medium height, blonde haired and green eyed
based super saiyan porno writer

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17859641

What are the best ways to share writing anonymously? every now and then I'll get hormy and write a short story that i would be willing to share with fellow coomers i prefer anonymity

>> No.17859643

anyone got a read where a mom and daughter are forced to make out/have sex?

>> No.17859698

>>17859641
Depends on your fetish. There are specific sites depending on what you like.

>> No.17859889

>>17842955
storiesonline
ao3
the now defunct asstr (domain killed by google, but the server is up)
aryion for your gore vore needs

>> No.17860042

>>17859643
It was an usual day at school when becky came home that day. She was angry about some boy, already bored with the math homework she knew she had to do later in the evening. "hi mom" she said absent-mindedly as she was already going upstairs to take a shower. Her young body was very tight and smooth and her bosom was quite perky. As she was starting to shower, she heard a loud bang coming from downstairs. Quite afraid but very curious to know what was happening, she threw as small towel on her wet body and went into the living room. There she found her mother on her knees by the couch, held at gunpoint by a big man wearing a balaclava. "YES ! Perfect ! Look at your slutty mom sucking by hard fat cock" said the strange man in a thick russian accent. The look of shame in Becky's mother was too much for Becky to handle, so she looked down, quivering in cold. Heather kept on sucking the fat hard cock in order to try and divert attention from the man so that he would not attack her daughter. But alas, ideas suddenly flew in the russian's head, at the sight of the nearly naked body of Becky. "Come here little girl, I will not harm you" he said. She was reluctant but also in the back of her mind strangely aroused. Heather sucked harder and harder in the hopes of pumping the cum and ideas out the man, but alas, too late. "Down on your knees little girl, and put that towel away" he said. She slowly put the towel away and got on her knees next to her mom. Seeing her mom's lips tightly wrapped around this hard fat cock was almost like a torture because now she was fully flowing with desire for this exotic man from the east. "now kiss" he said. At first they did not obey thinking it would be quite disgusting but then the man really threw is gun around which was quite scary. Their lips met lightly at first, but then, feeling the taste of the fat cock on her mother's lips, Becky went all in on her mom, fully turning her tongue to get as much of the taste as possible. "herrmmggmg" erupted the man as he kept wanking his dick a few inches from the shameful red faces of Heather and Becky abandoning themselves to a luscious kiss. Big fat spurts of hot cum came out of the man's cock and directly landed on their faces still making out, making quite a mess of the whole situation. Becky was absolutely delighted by this divine feeling. The man kept cumming and cumming, covering their whole faces with sticky white goo. A lot of it was dripping on Becky's firm body and Heather's clothes and carpet. "Aaaaaah that sure felt nice" said the man in a not russian accent this time. "Dad???!!" Becky exclaimed out of sheer horror. But deep down she regretted nothing, and kinda wanted to keep making out a bit... to be continued

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>>17860042
nice

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>>17842833
this demon wants to eat my soul

>> No.17860635

>>17860042
>an usual
AI or ESL?

>> No.17860649

>>17859889
>(domain killed by google, but the server is up)
What the hell is going on with all these sites?

>> No.17860663

>>17859641
Fuck it, I'll try 0bin. Here's my fag story for queers.

This story is written for homos who want to read about a trap getting face fucked. Straights keep moving.

https://0bin.net/paste/PR5ZvT17#VQEddErJFy53da58JRn5JY0cCDlq-/B0B0eET/x8Ygn

>> No.17860682

I LIKE HENTAI!
BIG ANIME TIDDIES!
SHIWASU NO OKINA!

>> No.17861114

That japanese erotic lit chapter in "If on a winter's night a traveler", what is it based on?
I've read a lot of Kawabata, but he doesn't really get erotic enough.

>> No.17861172

>>17858488
Okay I finished reading Spirit of Lust. Pretty good so far, great pacing. Though I won't lie, I skimmed a few parts. Would like to read my blowjob scenes though, those are my favorite.

>> No.17861227

>>17861172
Thanks. Didn't think anyone would actually read any of that. Would you mind telling me why you skimmed those parts? Too much introspection interrupting the pacing of scenes or something like that?

>> No.17861230

>>17861172
*"read more", not "read my"

>> No.17861314

>>17861227
Yes, some of the introspection seemed redundant. We get it, the character is feeling torn and experiencing inner conflict about how to proceed. That is well established. I don't need a reminder of it, or such a long one, after every sex scene. So I tend to skip those sentences. Also, the amount of line breaks is sometimes good for pacing, but I think it's overdone and ends up making the story awkward to read. It's better than walls of text though.

This is all just my opinion. My overall impression is that it was fun to read. Thanks for sharing. I'll check out the other stories. I noticed in The Affection Multiplier you said that it was a story less focused on the sex scenes. How would you compare the coom:narrative ratio of The Affection Multiplier vs. the ratio of Spirit of Lust?

>> No.17861388

>>17861314
Comparatively, TSoL has far more coom scenes in its start. TAM is mostly about a dude really wanting to build a harem of girlfriends, not cumdumps, so it's a lot more character focused with sex marking changes in relationships mostly, though with a few sex scenes for the sake of it. It started as an excuse to write quick porn, but the more I thought about the story, the more I wanted to do with its characters. It's also ending soon, clocking at around 425K words.

>> No.17861469

>>17861388
I see. Have you used CHYOA for a while? What are the best/your favorite stories or branches on there?

>> No.17861495

>>17861469
I've been using it for two years now and most of what's there is trash with a few exeptions. Living in your Sister's Shadow is good if you're into incest. Bosom Buddies is one of my favorites. Not much else comes to mind.

>> No.17861517

>>17861495
>I've been using it for two years now and most of what's there is trash with a few exeptions.
Lol. Okay. Cheers m8, good luck with your writing career

>> No.17861850

>>17847496
>>17847454
Samefag

>> No.17861913

I like Arthur Saxon's stories. He's got a very distinctive and very very deviant style (he even goes into gross shit like scat with some stories).

>>17855733
It goes down all the time, just gotta wait for it to come back. I save offline versions of my favourite author's stories.

>>17844090
>wants 3 bucks
Yeah nah.

>> No.17861922

>>17861913
It's sold 28 copies so far at that price so I can't complain. Haven't even shilled it properly yet.

>> No.17861927

>>17861922
Nice Anon. It's not really the price just that it has a cost at all. I'll give you 0 bucks if you pastebin it.

>> No.17861946

>>17861927
Nah. I actually might've done that but I could lose anons who would pay if they could get it for free.

>> No.17861959

>>17861946
Do you have any examples of your writing up anywhere?

>> No.17861964

>>17861959
You can sample it on amazon.

>> No.17861967

https://ebbooks.itch.io/chews1

This one hit a few of my favorite tropes but for a CYOA it doesn’t really diverge much.

>> No.17862265

>>17844320
>Lovely book
This, but unironically.

>> No.17862864

>>17842833
she is beautiful

>> No.17862921

>>17845069
Are those marks on her knee from kneeling for BJs? Sorry if it was obvious to you sex-havers.

>> No.17863075

>>17858488
Wow, AM is the biggest story on the site! Didn't know you posted here. Keep up the good work.

I like this short story:
https://mcstories.com/DocileLimerick/DocileLimerick.html
Limerick wrote a bunch more like it, and I like those too.

The Preacher Man by hammingbird7 (or whatever his name is) is really close to being a masterpiece.
And I've started to read erogamer and I like it.
https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/the-erogamer-original-complete.5465/

>> No.17863176

>>17862921
Yeah or getting fucked while on all fours. Don't worry about it, sluts are a diamond dozen. Sex is unironically overrated. Fucking some braindead meat puppet will teach you nothing, it's a waste of time. I don't regret all the partners I had before my wife but I recognize them as contributing nothing to me.

>> No.17863325

>>17863075
Thank you. I come to /lit/ every once in a while mostly to vent on WWOYM threads and lurk the writing general.

>> No.17863341

>>17842833
Why would anyone want to read erotic literature? That's torture.

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>>17860042
Based.

>> No.17863467

>>17863341
this, a real patrician composes erotica, for himself.

>> No.17863773

>>17847129
Remember a couple months ago when that retard went on a rant about how this image is anatomically disproportionate

>> No.17863783

>>17859641
Pastebin, you idiot. You don't even have to make an account on the site, you can write a random Pastebin and publish it. It won't be searchable, but your browser will save the link and you can post it, and people who have the link via the message board will be able to access it.

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I just reverse image searched this. Fuck you OP

>> No.17864181

>>17842974
I already have a woman-writingslave. Should I tell her to write me erotic stories? What if her husband writes them and they laugh at me while I fuck her?

>> No.17864186

>>17863176
>diamond dozen
Anon I...

>> No.17864656

>>17863850
is "she" a tranny?

>> No.17864948

>>17863850
Name?

>> No.17865004

>>17864656
It's just from a stock photo site. I think anons brain has been conditioned to expect porn.

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>> No.17865242

>>17842833
She is cute. Who is she?

>> No.17865244

>>17865242
>she

>> No.17865247

>>17865244
Is it a he?

>> No.17865260

>>17854082
The faggot said, to himself