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It’s said William McGonagall is the worst poet, but is this poem really that bad considering how bad the art form has degenerated in the modern time? Post bad poetry and talk about poets considered bad.

It was biting cold, and the falling snow,
Which filled a poor little match girl’s heart with woe,
Who was bareheaded and barefooted, as she went along the street,
Crying, “Who’ll buy my matches? for I want pennies to buy some meat!”

When she left home she had slippers on;
But, alas! poor child, now they were gone.
For she lost both of them while hurrying across the street,
Out of the way of two carriages which were near by her feet.

So the little girl went on, while the snow fell thick and fast;
And the child’s heart felt cold and downcast,
For nobody had bought any matches that day,
Which filled her little mind with grief and dismay.

Alas! she was hungry and shivering with cold;
So in a corner between two houses she made bold
To take shelter from the violent storm.
Poor little waif! wishing to herself she’d never been born.

And she grew colder and colder, and feared to go home
For fear of her father beating her; and she felt woe-begone
Because she could carry home no pennies to buy bread,
And to go home without pennies she was in dread.

The large flakes of snow covered her ringlets of fair hair;
While the passers-by for her had no care,
As they hurried along to their homes at a quick pace,
While the cold wind blew in the match girl’s face.

As night wore on her hands were numb with cold,
And no longer her strength could her uphold,
When an idea into her little head came:
She’d strike a match and warm her hands at the flame.

And she lighted the match, and it burned brightly,
And it helped to fill her heart with glee;
And she thought she was sitting at a stove very grand;
But, alas! she was found dead, with a match in her hand!

Her body was found half-covered with snow,
And as the people gazed thereon their hearts were full of woe;
And many present let fall a burning tear
Because she was found dead on the last night of the year,

In that mighty city of London, wherein is plenty of gold—
But, alas! their charity towards street waifs is rather cold.
But I hope the match girl’s in Heaven, beside her Saviour dear,
A bright reward for all the hardships she suffered here

I don’t think it’s that bad of a poem, he’s not Shakespeare but he’s also not the worst I’ve read.

>> No.17340541

>>17340493
Dunno about bad poetry but you'll notice that McGonagall's main flaw is that he was all about the rhyme. Rhyme is not what makes the verse, it is merely the payoff, it only works at the end of a well-built verse. And what is a well-built verse?

A verse that is properly cut, and with rythm. So it's really about internal divisions, weight and counterweights inside the verse. There's the structure imposed by a chosen rule, and then there is the personal acumen of the poem tuning the specifics that are not covered by the rules, and which are the area where personal talent shines.

That's why writing poetry is not about finding rhymes or even following a particular set of rules. It's about having (or choosing) interesting, fertile rules, sticking to them, and learning to take advantage of what the rules don't say, of the leeway they leave you.

Prose poetry is the opposite, trying to recover implicit rules from writing practice. In both cases its important to understand what formal rules are for, and just as well to dwell upon what they are not for.

>> No.17340546

>>17340541
*personal acumen of the poet
My bad.

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Eh, mine is probably worse on average, my long poems suffer from worse Bathos I feel. But there’s definitely worse published/successful poets.

She’s a dead horse but see pic related

>> No.17340651

>>17340605
Rupi Kaur makes me so mad. There are millions of 15 year old girls who write like her, but somehow the establishment is pretending she's some misunderstood genius. It's infuriating.

She's the poetry equivalent of Lilly Singh

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQce9C6fT90

>> No.17340964

>>17340493
McGonagall really exemplifies a number of horrendous pre-20th-century poetic vices, and combines them with the attitude that as long as a line rhymes it must be poetic.

So many of his poems read like:

>blah blah blah blah blah blah SAY
>blah blah blah blah blah blah BAY
>blah blah blah blah blah blah LAY
>blah blah blah blah blah blah MAY

So you have this combination of horribly obvious, almost singsong rhymes, along with a meter that's mangled almost out of all recognition: the excessive obviousness of the one accentuates the obscurity of the other. McGonagall's poetry is, above all things, unintentional, which is probably the worst thing poetry can be.

And let's not forget the time he rhymed "buttresses" with "confesses."