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15986939 No.15986939 [Reply] [Original]

Why is this poem so powerful? I'm literally sitting here shaking after having read it. This is truly the best poem i have ever read in my entire life.

>> No.15986947

>>15986939
Nael is a retard and so are you for liking his shit poem

>> No.15986969

>>15986939
It's so good.
My cock.
He destroyed my pants.
yes.
YES.
My cock is out.
And it's not going back in soon.

>> No.15986977

>>15986947
He’s 6 anon

>> No.15986986

>>15986947
idk anon.
This poem invokes in me the same intense moving of my entire being that I experience when I listen to Beethoven's Heiliger Dankgesang from his opus 132 String Quartet. A deep cleansing and freshness like I'm a rock being doused by a mighty cold and fresh waterfall of sensation. Simple, raw, elegant.
This poem is really something special. I have to agree with OP.

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15987014

>>15986969
>6969

>> No.15987042
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15987042

>mfw some 6 year old writes better poetry than all of /lit/ together.

>> No.15987126

>>15986939

The sad part is when Nael goes on to try to be a writer and descends into suicidal alcoholism in his twenties when he realizes that he peaked at 6.

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>>15987126
>tfw you peaked at age 6
the sad part is that its probably true. I wanna see more of Nael's works? Anyone got more?

>> No.15987171

>>15987126
>>15987160
But what a peak it is.