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Sunset found her squatting in the grass, groaning. Every stool was looser than the one before, and smelled fouler. By the time the moon came up she was shitting brown water. The more she drank, the more she shat, but the more she shat, the thirstier she grew, and her thirst sent her crawling to the stream to suck up more water. When she closed her eyes at last, Dany did not know whether she would be strong enough to open them again.

>> No.14954059

>>14954047
Before I read the series, I saw this memed on /lit/ and thought there was a character called Sunset who walked in on the blonde dragon lady having diarrhea.

>> No.14954080

>>14954059
Wait, Sunset isn't a character?

>> No.14954125

>realism, how dare he!!!

>> No.14954129

Which episode is this

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>>14954129
The show skipped past it for some reason.

>> No.14954148

Never read his books before but how is his prose? Is the paragraph above how he writes in general

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14954154

>It's another fecal-related chapter

BASED

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>>14954148

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>>14954154

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>>14954161
Truly a great writer.

>> No.14954205

>>14954047
>Sunset found
stopped here

>> No.14954212

>>14954159
ESL here is it bad or good. I mean it's no Dorian Grey prose but it seems fine like some old man is telling you a story by a hearth while you cross your legs, sip hot chocolate, and hear the crackle and pops of the fire in the background

>> No.14954219

>>14954047
So what is his excuse for not writing the next book now that he is in coronavirus quarantine?

>> No.14954229

>>14954212
It's sufficient for the integrity of the storytelling framework.

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>>14954154

>> No.14954281

>>14954212
his wiriting is very very accesable. but it's better than let say harry potter

>> No.14954288 [DELETED] 

>>14954047
>Sunset found him kneeing in the bedroom, sucking. Every dick was bigger than the one before, and smelled fouler. By the time the moon came up he was covered in semen. The more he sucked, the more he posted, but the more she posted, the thirstier he grew for cum, and his thirst sent her crawling to the stream to suck more dicks. When she closed his eyes at last, OP did not know whether she would be strong enough to open them again.

>> No.14954298

>>14954047
>Sunset found him kneeing in the bedroom, sucking. Every dick was bigger than the one before, and smelled fouler. By the time the moon came up he was covered in semen. The more he sucked, the more he posted, but the more she posted, the thirstier he grew for cum, and his thirst sent her crawling to the stream to suck more dicks. When he closed his eyes at last, OP did not know whether she would be strong enough to open them again.

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>>14954298
>Sunset found him kneeing

>> No.14954317

>>14954047
I'm a shut-in NEET and I could write better than this.

>> No.14954329

>>14954317
So why don't you?

>> No.14954331

>>14954317
do it faggot

>> No.14954337

>>14954329
>>14954331
Why should I write when there have been countless writers whether white, asian, black, male, female, or gay who have covered every single possible topic with grace. I'd rather just soak in their work.

>> No.14954345

>>14954337
Talk without action is the domain of cowards and the deluded.

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>>14954154

>> No.14954595

/lit/ can shit on him all they want, he's a great author and I can't wait for the next book.

t. man who's currently reader Homer

>> No.14954642

>>14954212
It's alright, not as classy as say Tolkien, but prose is not his specialty, plot-weaving, suspense and slacking off are.