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14697673

Anonymous Mon Feb 10 09:43:51 2020 No.14697673 [Reply] [Original]

what do you think of this poem I wrote?

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 10 09:45:17 2020 No.14697679 >>14697673 I hate "or something".

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 09:47:27 2020 No.14697686 >>14697679 Admittedly, I added that bit only about a minute before posting it. I've been slowly tweaking this poem over the past few days, so it's still subject to change. Thanks for your feedback.

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 10:07:43 2020 No.14697750 bump

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 10 10:12:16 2020 No.14697765 >>14697673 I don't get it

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 11:54:09 2020 No.14698194 File: 78 KB, 594x738, Screen Shot 2020-02-10 at 11.53.10 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'll post some more. Tell me which you like.

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 11:55:25 2020 No.14698202 File: 101 KB, 614x628, Screen Shot 2020-02-10 at 11.54.13 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>14698194

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 12:05:01 2020 No.14698233 File: 69 KB, 730x546, Screen Shot 2020-02-10 at 12.04.41 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>14698202

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 10 12:13:29 2020 No.14698267 Nigga where the rhyme at

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 10 12:16:08 2020 No.14698279 File: 47 KB, 645x729, brainlet-5a6217dcbd1c3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>14697673 >>14698194 >>14698202 >>14698233 absolute shit. it's "poetry" like this that really reminds you mass literacy was a mistake.

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 12:24:35 2020 No.14698320 >>14698279 Aight, thanks for the feedback, man. Very helpful!

>>	OP Mon Feb 10 13:06:00 2020 No.14698545 File: 132 KB, 734x1026, 5FE9DBD3-77F2-41B6-A7A9-1F57614C5273.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] and here is another poem