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14173563 No.14173563 [Reply] [Original]

We can sometimes mAke our own work and have our friends here critique it, I consider myself a quick witted writer who hits on topics.

Here is the excerpt of my work:

“You are all bark and no bite. God damn it, John! You’re a pine tree that wants to be a pit bull terrier!”
Let me know what you think and maybe post some of yours =-)

>> No.14173573

>>14173563
Cute dog.

>> No.14173576

>>14173573
John is? He’s not really a dog it was a metaphor

>> No.14173588

>>14173563
You are a midgets
Dwarf - a comics last laugh.
Give a big round of applause
For Mommas Boy.
The first of July -
"She was a hooker
God damn it"

>> No.14173607

>>14173588
Go away, Taleb poster

>> No.14173832

Would you read a memoir from a literal who if it their life was interesting enough? I have shit to tell.

>> No.14173851

>>14173832
Yes. If the style was compelling. With a good premise and title the content hardly matters.

>> No.14173873

>>14173832
Yes!

>> No.14173991

I wrote this joke:

A man walks past a fellow who is in the process of throwing his belongings off of the deck of his ship and onto the dock below. The man stops and asks what the hurry is. The fellow with the ship stops for a moment, and then asks the man if he would like to buy a ship. He offers him an unusually good deal, and the ship exchanges hands. The man climbs aboard, and exclaims: 'this ship is fantastic, there aren't even any rats on board!'. The ship promptly sinks and the man perishes. The End.

Did you like it?

>> No.14174115

>>14173576
Oh I didn't even read what you wrote. I was commenting on the picture.

>> No.14174128

>>14173563
I walk, it was far out, and I lead me a great opening field. Was beautiful
but time is to go, so I must go.

>> No.14174311

>>14174115
You did read it or you apoudltn say that about John

>> No.14175342

Personally I like the duck.

>> No.14175475

This I posit: that, were we capable of traversing moments in a manner of space's similitude, we would find ourselves occupied foremost and wholly by posteriori a priori second-guessing. That is, in other terms, without knowledge of the future, that which has come to pass would, once more, take its place in the continuum of happenings. Then, it is clear that the contents of a travelers backpack is enough for us to syllogistically deduce, nay, reduce, the possibilities of any man's capacity to affect change in the world. To wit, the Transportation Security Administration (TSA) is alone in its capacity to decide the future.

>> No.14177019

bump

>> No.14177030

>>14173563
trees don't bark retard

>> No.14177163

>>14173563
"heh, my peanus weanus"

What do you think?