poem criticism

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poem criticism Anonymous Tue Sep 24 01:56:28 2019 No.13874342 [Reply] [Original]

hey, /lit/
can i get some constructive criticism on my poem? or just call me a fag or something lmao

Anonymous Tue Sep 24 09:59:26 2019 No.13876353
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>>13874342
Mira Gonzalez-tier basic bitch crybaby shit.
sad thing is you are ost likely male which also makes this incredibly gay.

also
>phoneposting
>uncropped screenshot
>icloud
sage

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 24 10:05:00 2019 No.13876383 I didn't read it and I don't care to. I have read two good poems in my life and even they were kind of gay. You should write in prose. I will not call you a fag, for you are a straight man.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 24 10:07:39 2019 No.13876395 >>13874342 >means no long want to die Proof read your shit anon. Anyway, having trouble with the scansion, what is your intended metre like?

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