/lit/ - Literature

Dear diary
A creepy fat guy tried to pierce my nips today.
I punched him in the balls.
I think he didn't think that through.

Why?

>>1299125
A warm tongue slid over the pale nipple. Power Girl could feel the warm breath of Terra against her tender skin as her fingers caressed the raven black hair, "Now I found this piece of kryptonite while rooting around under Mount Rushmore. It's going to make it so the needle can pierce your skin." Strong pink lips lingered a few moments more until the stiff nipple was taut in her mouth.
"Three." Power Girl took a deep breath at the sickening rush of the kryptonite radiation flowed through her, her heart was already starting to flutter but she couldn't tell if it was from her feelings for Terra or the strange, green rock. "Two" Terra's smile was bright as the crescent moon and her eyes twinkled like two devilish stars just before red hot pain lanced through her body. PG shrieked but stayed stock still.
"OMG, you didn't say one!"
"I know," she chuckled. "I didn't want you to mess things up. Now let's get onto the other one." She reached up and wiped Power Girl's cheek with her pinky finger. "Oh do come on! It wasn't that bad!"

>>1299183
Before long both nipples were adorned with two beautiful golden rings. PG laughed and looked at herself in the mirror, hands cupping those generous portions and flicking the jewelry feeling the sensation shoot through to her clit.
"They do look nice, Kara." Atlee felt herself feeling a bit slick from the experience and sucked on each finger that held the piercing needle. "How do they feel?"
Kara blushed and giggled, "You would know that..." Terra tossed her mane and sighed, "You know what I mean, doofus."
"Ohmygodtheyfeelawesomeitslikeadirectlinestraighttomycliteverytimeiplaywiththeringsandwhydidnti
dothissoonerohgodohgodohgodineverfeltthisgood" squealed the Girl of Tomorrow.
"We're not done." A thin golden chain jingled and dangled from her fingers. "Gotta keep you in line."

>>1299196
I'm at work. I'd really rather not have a massive erection at the office.

>>1299196
She took her time threading the chain through each ring. Sweat beaded on PG's forehead because she felt each link on the chain bump against the ring sending a familiar feeling downstairs making her tummy feel very warm and glowy. All the while Terra kept up a good patter telling her partner how she's a good slave, a dirty little slut and how she was going to take advantage of her situation. A swift tug on both breasts told Kara that she was now under Terra's sway.
"Good slave" punctuating her statement with a yank. Wounded nipples stiffened painfully and PG tried to keep herself from cumming right there.
"Call me ma'am." Terra slipped out of her tight outfit, small breasts with dark nipples like a German Shepherd who recently whelped some pups paled in comparison with the Kryptonian ideal before her. The small tuft of dark hair between her thighs made Power Girl catch her breath.
"Y-yes ma'am."
Terra smiled. "I have a surprise for you." She stood with her legs apart and a giant penis which would require an extra heart and pair of lungs suddenly revealed itself.

>>1299237

We are at an impasse.

>>small breasts with dark nipples like a German Shepherd who recently whelped some pups

Keep her in line for the live of god! Whip her straight!

>her face when

Prose bump

>>1299183
Please do more.

bump

no more? ;_;

>>1299566
What piercing is this for?

>A warm tongue slid over the pale nipple. Power Girl could feel the warm breath of Terra against her tender skin as her fingers caressed the raven black hair,

Fucking seriously? You use warm twice in a row, there is nothing but telling, and you use possibly the most canned phrases possible.

0/10, please see me after class.

>>1301358
Will you be giving examples of how it's done? ;)

>>1301384
No.

Well SOMEbody needs to continue with this, or start from scratch!

Bump

>>1301950

Power Girl, whose superhuman powers were nullified for some reason, strained uselessly against the iron shackles that held her limbs immobile. Hard, metal edges dug painfully into her flesh. She restlessly shifted her weight between her wrists and ankles.

Her captor, a nondescript girl of average height with shoulder-length brown hair, finished searching through her box of tools and turned around to face Power Girl. Between her thumb and forefinger she held a needle, fully eight inches in length, its surface tarnished with rust. She grinned as she approached Power Girl, whose protests came in the form of incoherent murmurs due to the strips of duct tape covering her mouth. Her muffled cries grew in fervor as the girl took the nipple of Power Girl's left breast in between her thumb and forefinger, bringing the tip of the needle to rest against the soft, sensitive flesh.

>>1302474

The girl squeezed the nipple between her fingers awhile, turning it this way and that, causing the skin to swell and redden slightly. With a sudden thrust, she drove the needle through the soft tissue of Power Girl's areola, eliciting a strangled cry from her as waves of pain radiated outwards from the wound. The edges of the rusted needle rasped against freshly-exposed subcutaneous layers; the surrounding areas started to become inflamed almost immediately, and the sudden stab of pain began to abate to a dull, steady, inescapable throbbing.

The girl withdrew the needle from the newly-formed piercing, bringing it to her lips and extending the pink tip of her tongue to lick the blood from the implement. Blood oozed from Power Girl's savaged nipple in a gory perversion of lactation. Still overcome by the agony of the first ordeal, she tried unsucessfuly to scream as the girl forced the needle through her second nipple. Now lubricated with blood and saliva, its passage was slightly more facile, however this did precious little to attenuate the hot stab of pain. Tears welled up in Power Girl's eyes, trickling down her cheeks as she thrashed her head from side to side, consumed with the agony of her ordeal.

>>1302474

The girl squeezed the nipple between her fingers awhile, turning it this way and that, causing the skin to swell and redden slightly. With a sudden thrust, she drove the needle through the soft tissue of Power Girl's areola, eliciting a strangled cry from her as waves of pain radiated outwards from the wound. The edges of the rusted needle rasped against freshly-exposed subcutaneous layers; the surrounding areas started to become inflamed almost immediately. The sudden stab of pain began to abate to a dull, steady, inescapable throbbing, harsh bursts pulsating in time with her heartbeat.

The girl withdrew the needle from the newly-formed piercing, bringing it to her lips and extending the pink tip of her tongue to lick the blood from the implement. Blood oozed from Power Girl's savaged nipple in a gory perversion of lactation. She tried unsucessfuly to scream as the girl forced the needle through her second nipple. Now lubricated with blood and saliva, its passage was slightly more facile, however this did precious little to attenuate the hot stab of pain. Tears welled up in Power Girl's eyes, trickling down her cheeks as she thrashed her head from side to side, consumed with the agony of her ordeal.

>>1302501

The girl left to search for something else, affording Power Girl a few minutes to attempt to regain her composure. Whilst the initial shock of the impalement had passed, her pierced flesh felt aflame with a persistent, severe soreness. She was almost becoming able to cope with the residual pain when the girl returned, a pair of silver rings held in her hand.

The girl depressed a point on the circumference of one of the rings, causing a segment to hinge inwards. The now-exposed internal edge of the ring was slightly tapered to a blunt, conical point, and it was this part that the girl offered up to the freshly-pierced nipple of Power Girl's left breast. She gently, yet insistently, forced the ring through the new wound. Being wider than the needle used to form the hole, it distended the flesh as it passed through, widening the passage and causing additional bursts of pain as the skin's internal structure was disrupted by the object's passage.

The girl repeated the process with the opposing nipple, snapping the hinged segment of each loop's circumference back into place. As a finishing touch, she threaded a length of chain between each of the rings that now adorned Power Girl's breasts.

Tiring of tormenting her captive superheroine, the girl left her victim chained in her basement and went out to get some ice cream. This she ate whilst walking barefoot along the shore of a nearby beach, enjoying the feeling of the wet sand between her toes.

>>1302521
At what point is she made into a slave? Soon, I hope?

>>1302574

Oh my goodness, someone actually read it? :o

>>1302584
Well the descriptions of the needle going through her nipple, which swells and becomes taught is pretty fucking hot, IMO. Personally I'd like to see more things be done with her.

Have to go ahead and bump this for content.

>>1302584
Are you the writer sir or madam?

>>1302842

Of the latter part, yes... to be honest I am surprised at >>1302592 because I thought what I was writing was extremely dry and unappealing.

>>1302903
I found it tantalizing, bur that may be coupled with my attraction to the character. Care to continue? Got any plans for her to be broken?

>>1302912

I... don't know. If I'm bored tomorrow afternoon I could be persuaded to write more. Not sure what would happen next.

Imagine being the one that gets to caress her breasts and determine the size of the gauge to go through her and how sharp it ought to be.

Well, there'd have to be some kind of kryptonite involved, right?

>>1303111
I suppose so. Some people say red sunlight would weaken her enough to make it possible, too. Would make her weak enough to submit to it as well maybe.

These are hilarious.

>>1299196
>Kara
I CANNOT read any further, that's my mum's name.

>>1303187
Ugh, isn't that the worst when that happens? She also goes by Karen, if it helps.

>>1303206
I guess I could just visualize this hot girl I know whose name is also Kara.

>>1303217
Does she have massive tits and a need to be subdued?

>>1303222
She does now!

>>1303231
What else is to be done with her? Have a pic you don't mind sharing?

I'll take that for a no...

ITT: overdescription
It's like I'm really reading Tolkien!

>>1303504
Her nipples aren't rocky enough.

>>1303504

I notice you're in no particular hurry to use your superior skill and re-write it as an example.

>>1303504
It's like you've never read erotica!

>>1302521

Power Girl had languished in the darkened room for a few hours during her captor's absence. Her arms and legs ached terribly from her prolonged restraint, shackled to the vertical metal frame. The blood had congealed into a brown residue around her piercings; the pain had settled to a constant, low ache. The skin around her mouth was starting to feel strange. The duct-tape had been stuck there for a while now.

Presently her tormentor, the brown-haired girl, returned, carrying a rucksack over one shoulder. She set it down on the ground. Its contents shifted.

"I brought some toys for us to play with," she said, grinning salaciously.

The girl upended the bag, emptying its contents onto the floor. Power Girl eyed the equipment apprehensively. Among the jumble of implements was some kind of harness: buckling leather bands joined together at the base of a ten-inch long protrusion, roughly the same shape and size as a cucumber. Its surface was black and smooth, with small bumps and ribs every so often. In addition to that device, there was a short leather strap with a red rubber ball set halfway along its length.

The girl had also brought a length of steel tube, terminated at either end with a hinged cuff. She fastened the first loop around Power Girl's ankle before undoing the manacle that held her to the frame, careful not to allow her any freedom of movement during the process. Following this she clamped the second loop around Power Girl's opposing ankle. She grunted as her arms bore her entire weight, her feet now freed from the frame, locked four feet apart by the metal bar.

>>1304536

>>1304536

The girl worked the tip of her finger beneath the edge of the strip of duct tape covering Power Girl's mouth. Power Girl cringed, anticipating what was coming next, although no amount of forewarning could lessen the stinging sensation as the girl peeled the tape away, leaving reddened skin in its wake. Power Girl gasped, and the first lungful of air she took felt wonderful, having been gagged for so long.

"I think tape just looks a bit amateurish, you know?" the brown-haired girl explained. "So I thought we should try something different."

Power Girl took the opportunity to yell a few angry curse words at her, although she stopped and clenched her jaw tightly as the girl held the ball gag up to her mouth. Power Girl shook her head defiantly.
"Yes," her captor said.
Power Girl shook her head once more.

The girl ran her hand over Power Girl's bared torso, fluttering her fingertips across her ribs before tickling her at full force. Power Girl tried to restrain herself, but it was too much, and she let out shuddering laugh, tempered by frustration. The girl shoved the ball gag into her mouth, buckling the strap behind her head. Power Girl scowled at her, trying to push the gag out of her mouth with her tongue to no avail. Her lips worked restlessly around the rubber ball strapped into her mouth. A small drop of drool formed on her lower lip and drooped down onto her breasts, leaving a sticky trail.

>>1304549

"All right. Time to break you in."

Once more being careful to apply the new restraints before unfastening the others, the girl locked a cuff around Power Girl's wrist. She fussed around with the other restraints, maneuvering her captive's limbs into position until Power Girl's wrists were bound in front of her. Finally freed from the metal frame, she stood, wobbling slightly due to the spread-legged posture she was forced to adopt.

The girl placed her hands on Power Girl's shoulders, slowly pushing her down to a kneeling position on the floor. Then she hooked her index finger around the chain that hung between Power Girl's pierced nipples, and she was forced to bend over forwards as the chain was pulled downards, the metal rings tugging against flesh that was still sore. Power Girl had to bring her wrists in front of her to rest on the ground and stop herself from toppling forwards.

Having pulled Power Girl into a flat kneeling position, her back horizontal, the girl took a padlock and hooked it through a conveniently-placed loop set into the floor. She took the chain in her hand, and secured it to the floor with the padlock. Power Girl's arms quivered as she held herself in that awkward position - any attempt to rise up caused the rings through her nipples to be tugged painfully.

She raised her head to look in front of her, and saw that the girl was donning the other piece of equipment. Straps cinched into place around her thighs. The smooth, black prosthesis stood proud on her crotch. She paced around behind Power Girl, who was suddenly feeling terribly exposed.

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oh man, I've got a lecture to go to, I might finish this later

hell this is some great stuff, I hope that guy comes back to finish it

>>1304573
As do I, my friend. As do I.

i'm going to bump this thread

because i can

Must be one long lecture.

P-P-P-P-Power Bump!!

>>1306390

I did finish my lecture. But I wasn't sure how much demand there was to continue :s

>>1304558

Power Girl's arms were already trembling as they awkwardly bore her weight. Unable to fully straighten them due to the chain binding her to the floor, she shifted about uncomfortably, finally having to settle for resting on her elbows, with her butt raised in the air. She was unable to turn her head enough to get a good look behind her, but she knew the girl was there. Power Girl's thighs tensed as she felt the girl's finger brush in between her legs, across that sensitive area that was now completely exposed. The girl stroked back and forth, middle and index fingers either side of the cleft.

"We neeed a little lubrication. To make you more receptive for what's coming next," she explained. The girl paused to withdraw her fingers, bringing them close to Power Girl's face. She ran her fingertips along Power Girl's lip, who was powerless to stop herself drooling as she mouthed uncomfortably around her ball gag. The girl collected a liberal amount of the saliva on her fingers before returning to lavish her attentions on Power Girl's cunt. There was a soft squishing sound as she pressed her now-moistened fingers inside.

>>1307732

She slid her fingers around in little circles, occasionally hooking the tip of her index finger to run along the inner edges. Several times she paused to bring her hand up to her lips, extending her tongue to deposit more saliva, although she eventually opted for a more direct approach and bent down to draw her tongue over the entirety of Power Girl's moistening genitals with one long, broad lick. Power Girl could only moan in frustration as her thighs tingled - to feel pleasure from this, it was as if her own body was betraying her.

Eventually, the girl was satisfied with the preparations. Power Girl's labia had become pink and tender, and quite wet as its own juices added to the mix. The girl positioned herself carefully behind Power Girl, grasping her by the thighs and positioning her implement carefully. Power Girl gasped as she felt the blunt, rounded tip come to rest against her, poised and ready.

>>1307745
...There's more coming, right? PG hasn't quite been broken yet. I'd love to hear her admit she is a slave and dote on her master.

>>1305038
>>1305383
>>1306390
>>1306623
>>1307968

I don't know about everyone else, but as far as I can tell this thread consists of one anon writing a story while just one other anon reads it.

And that just seems, I don't know, a bit weird?