/lit/ - Literature

she put the peepee in the poopoo

I think James Salter is hard to beat in a Sport and a Pastime. I don't have it here though so I can't post a scene - there's a lot of them. Short but sweet, erotic without being unrealistic imo.

>canadian prize winning literature

"But at her apartment she lies naked on her back, her legs-tan and aerobicized and muscular and worked out-are spread and I'm on my knees giving her head while jerking myself off and in the time since I've started licking and sucking on her pussy she's already come twice and her cunt is tight and hot and wet and i keep it spread open, fingering it with one hand, keeping myself hard with the other. I lift her ass up, wanting to push my tongue into her, but she doesn't want me to and so I raise up my head and reach over to the Portian antique nightstand for the condom that sits in the ashtray from Palio next to the halogen Tensor lamp and the D'Oro pottery urn and I tear the package open with two shiny slick fingers and my teeth, then slip it, easily, onto my cock.
"I want you to fuck me," Courtney moans, pulling her legs back, spreading her vagina even wider, fingering herself, making me suck her fingers, the nails on her hand long and red, and the juice from her cunt, glistening in the light coming from the street-lamps through the Stuart Hall Venetian blinds, tastes pink and sweet and she rubs it over my mouth and lips and tongue before it cools."

>>12657405
What the fuck is that from

>>12657452
>she
nice

>>12658812

Ever write out a plot summary to yourself from beginning to end only to realize it sounds like complete garbage?

Wrote mine out and realized I'm still too attached to the idea of the main villain, who's stark crazy and basically pure evil, somehow being the protagonist or turning back into his original form of a good guy at the end.
Its essentially impossible and either leads to something unsatisfying or otherwise faulty, or leads to a boring end that I only wanted for the sake of art therapy that ends on an anticlimactic note.
Please rape my face.

>>12657405
Trash. Reading erotica damages the brain and the capacity to read free of sexual distractions.

>>12658819
It's 2019 hunnie

One must take care to include this board's greatest erotic achievement

>>12657405
She nibbled his cock while pausing at intervals to sip her tea.
"Now darling, you know you have to suck the lot, no use putting it off."
She gave the old thing a look which betrayed her lack of resolve. She kissed it, hesitating slightly, her eyes flashing up at him. He gave her an impatient look and motioned brutishly towards it.
"I've told you now, I want slobber on it."
She took another sip. Then, with her tongue extended ever so slightly, she firmly planted the tip of her tongue on the end of his penis, and kept it still. She wriggled her tongue a little from side to side, gently bobbing his penis.
"Ah yes, that's the stuff."
Then she gave it a right headbutt and he moaned like a dying man, shooting off a pint of semen through the kitchen wall.
"Uwoah! You know how to make my johhny ache!" he said and gave her friendly pat.
I'm no longer sure if this is worth a B, she thought to herself.

Bibi Anderson's "Persona" monologue