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>itt: we create rupi-tier poems

without you
im left alone
with the pain
forever forgetting you
forever alone

>> No.12154073

i feel
like the tree
losing its last leaves
would you catch them
as they fall?

>> No.12154088

i unfriended you because
you made a face
when you smelled my womanhood
for the first time
for the last time
who is this?

>> No.12154126

58 vintage photos
trending now
they show a different side
to the past
than we already know

>> No.12154136

white males:

my cunt
you hunt

my queer
you fear

i'm just not into you

>> No.12154137

I really want
to take a shit
but all is lost
when there's no paper

>> No.12154140

>>12154126
This is too poetic to be a rupi.

>> No.12154144

i left my burger
in the fridge
like you left me
in the cold

>> No.12154149

an inkless pen
has more worth
than your penis

>> No.12154151
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>>12154140
forgive me

>> No.12154155

>>12154151
ayyyy, i know jungle pam when i see her! good taste anon.

>> No.12154159

You left me there
like a sandwich in a fridge
you came back expecting to find me there
but I was already taken

>> No.12154196

>>12154151
holy shit

>> No.12154208
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>>12154048
>>12154136
you accidentally rhyme
no rupi

>>12154137
>no paper
>instagram
too smart
no rupi

>>12154144
you accidentally gave it a relevant structure
no rupi

you just can't compete, guys

>> No.12154225

poo
pee

lost without me

>> No.12154318

>>12154048
>the fire burns
>the branches crackle
>so does
>my heart

>> No.12154325

in the dark
sometimes i think
does he know
that this is the shade
his heart is

>> No.12154343

stinky poop
is a metaphor for
women
in your dreams anyway

in my dreams
i am limitlessly female

>> No.12154350

>>12154343
copy/pasting one of her actual poems is cheating
get out

>> No.12155204

her eyes are blue
your skin is green
the hair on you
its red
in death it'll all be black

>> No.12155353

>>12154048
my vagina hurts
from all these men
big and small
plastic and rubber
i will continue the ride
for i am liberated

>> No.12155371

to see
you need
to open
your wallet

>> No.12155394

>>12155353
this one deserves a prize, for it captures the essence of freedom in dark times

>> No.12155403

my discharge
is in-charge
that's right sweaty
the age of smegma
the age of balls and
skidmarks
has ended and
the age of soiled maxipads
left in public restrooms
the age of female fluids
has crashed in
like
a red wave

>> No.12155404

my talent
is worthless
my doubts
are worth less
but who values anything anymore?

>> No.12155409

>>12154048
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P9qxzgwTS1a16U6qpYgpgIw1fZgUcgXy2ImhWcKfNtg/edit

Poems from the last thread

>> No.12155410

in this thread
we create
but i
alone
am
-anon, 2018

>> No.12155420

make thread
no response
make comment
no response
if there is no (you)
then there is no (me)
and there is
no response

>> No.12155435

>>12154208
Is that actually a real poem by Rupi Kaur? Holy fucking shit. That's like an unironic Pewdiepie-tier meme.

>> No.12155439

>>12155420
this is actually good you retard fuck off

>> No.12155440

>>12155410
I'm fucking moved to tears

>> No.12155462

>>12154048
the negative space
of my wrist scars
Like chain-link fencing

Keeps you away.

>> No.12155464

skim through the silk
gliding like snow
melted by love
you warm me

>> No.12155487

>>12154048
i collect rupees
in Zelda
thinking it will bring
me closer to you
my rupi

- t. not rupi

>> No.12155496

>>12154048

The post is on the Instagram
Yes
YES
The post is public

>> No.12155500

>>12154144
this reminds me of that terrible william carlos williams poem that i had to read in school
still much better than rupijeet obviously

>> No.12155507

>>12155496
don't make fun of the tiger you reddit dwelling incel

>> No.12155516 [DELETED] 

lost in thought, i think I hear
only for a moment
nevermind
it was just the wind
whispering in my ear

>> No.12155547

I sit upon this cold
Porcelain throne of mine
You couldn't know
How clean mine is

>> No.12155557

look back
at you
its behind me
now it's gone

>> No.12155576

just another sucker
walks by

what do you want
i'm an independent woman

except when i'm sad

>> No.12155581

i'm a big dick nigga
got my finger on the trigga
so don't fuck wid me
or my bitch rupi

>> No.12155854

lest you leave me
solitary on the winter swept tundra
of the winter dark
come ignite me from within
heat my world with those
immortal words:
fuck jannies

>> No.12156648

>>12155507

Don't make fun of the incel, you Reddit dwelling tiger

>> No.12157062

>>12154048
I should maybe nut
Even though it's NNN
I don't care
About NNN
But i'm too tired to nut
So i must sleep
Alone

>> No.12157064

tits
fish
a fish with tits

>> No.12157540

my pain
makes me valid
when
you said
'you whore'
it hurt

>> No.12157579
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>>12155403
>my discharge
>is in-charge
Top kek

>> No.12157605

someone here
in a fit of mad boy mockery
will suddenly strike into the seam
of some traumatic hidden memories
and unironically weep tonight

>> No.12158328

ruse my shorts
pull them down
to my feet
and
take my dick

>> No.12158479

>>12155496
ahahahaha

>> No.12158503
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>>12154048
you may not poo
in the loo
but that doesn't mean
you can treat me
like your designated
shitting street

>> No.12158548

>>12154048
I got hit
now I am
Down
Got to get
Back up
Again

>> No.12158557

Stately
Plump Buck Mulligan came
From the stairhead
Bearing a bowl of lather
On which a mirror and a razor lay
Crossed

>> No.12158800

Pull the trigger
on a nigger
screw a few
screws to a jew
FUCK JANNIES

>> No.12158833

>>12158548
he drinks
a whiskey drink
he drinks a vodka
drink
he
drinks a lager drink
he drinks
a
cider drink

>> No.12158849
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>>12158833
>>12158557
entirely based

>> No.12158870
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>>12158833
>cider drink

>> No.12158928

I was going
to be the ray
of light in your
darkness and
you in mine
I was a twenty
dollar bill on the
pavement but
you didn't even bother
to pick me up

>> No.12158975

you were
my morning
coffee

cold
dark
bitter

you gave
me
the shits

>> No.12158986
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12158986

my pussy thus
my rules
so
first rule is
no reciprocating
blowjobs
if you eat me
out

which I doubt
you will
because it reeks
of seafood

>> No.12159034

>>12158986
that picture top kek. your poem gave me an erection

>> No.12159047

>>12159034
glad to please, friend

>> No.12159067

>>12154048
you said you felt small
and i didn't know how to
console you
but what is should have
said
is
without you
there is no world
you are not simply
important
you are
essential

>> No.12159078

>>12159067
this could be ripped straight from her book

>> No.12159108

>>12159078
Thanks, I've been parodying poetry for years. Whenever I see a "share your poetry" thread on /lit/ I pick a poet to imitate and start improvising. A lot of those poems have even received praise.

>> No.12159142

>>12159108
you're welcome anon. i've thought about practicing this kind of thing and trying to get published with bullshit poems under a pseudonym, especially with someone like rupi bc there's such a market for them with the tumblr crowd

>> No.12159664

>>12158986
>first rule is
>no reciprocating
>blowjobs
>if you eat me
>out
Dated a girl who was like this once
De mi vida la boté

>> No.12159686
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>>12159664
>boat of my life

but yeah, life imitates art, doesn't it

>> No.12159689

the light has no bulb and
the lamp has no power
and i
thought that
my life would be
organized
by the time
i blew out the candles
on my
twenty-fifth birthday

>> No.12159966

i remember sitting, lemon wedges in my tea sliced by arthritis digits,
i'm sorry i never kept the seeds

>> No.12160036

I pull the waistband outward
and the smells wafts up.
I won't let you smell
without Consent.

>> No.12160095
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>>12155353
>i will continue the ride
>for i am liberated

>> No.12161194

crazy nights
let me be liberated
i'll come back
to you
with more love

>> No.12162247

>>12154048
best laugh I've had all week - good show, anon

>> No.12162288

when you
set me on fire
did i light ?

>> No.12162362

ass and titties
ass and titties
ass
and titties?
and big, strong independent booty bitches

>> No.12162391

If your hose is too short
Or your pump is too weak
Take a step closer
Don’t piss on your feet

>> No.12162470

steel bent
as will unwinds
through dark misery
made of soft
womanhood

>> No.12162498

>>12155500
I don't know what your thoughts about WCW are in general but I'm quite drunk and am telling you to find his essay about poetry. It's life changing or something.

>> No.12162502

>>12158870
>tfw I'm drinking applejack and cider right now
I ran out of good liquor :_:

>> No.12162556

>>12162391
Meter's fucked. It should be (changes marked with asterisks):

If your hose is too short
Or your pump is too weak
*Then go* take a step closer
Don't piss on your feet

>> No.12162573

you forgot
to lift the seat
my buttocks yielded
and my little indian shithole
puckered up

>> No.12162652

>>12162288
I like this one. It is a true Rupi poem because it sounds poetic and thoughtful without meaning anything.

>> No.12162664

>>12158986
this post made me angry

>> No.12162985

>>12162664
I'll take that as a compliment if you don't mind