/lit/ - Literature

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>>12098089
>whom she met at a "scholarship program"

She is cheating on you, she told him about it, and he beat you to it.
You sir have been cucked.

>>12098136
this

I fucking hate them

>>12098164
Them?

>>12098089
This is the direct result of sexual distractions. Whether through your hand or through your girlfriend, you ruined a huge amount of motivation and work effort for ephemeral pleasure instead of the clarity of mind and will that abstinence would have otherwise granted. Instead of writing books, you wasted your life force.

Your seminal vesicles swell from regular sexual activity, which inclines you to even more of it. Abstinence actually decreases sexual urges, which allows you to focus on mattes of the intellect, not the dick.

https://www.eusupplements.europeanurology.com/article/S1569-9056(17)31159-4/pdf

>>12098089
she's cheating on you she likes kfc cokc

>>12098333
Yeah, she probably is. Should I post link to his book?

>>12098358
Nah just murder your gf and carve your novel's concept on her back.

>>12098089
lol

>>12098089
stuff her pillow with shit.

>>12098195
abstinence breeds perversion
a healthy sex life breeds clarity of mind

I literally wrote a story about a guy who gets teleporting powers the same week the jumper movie premiered, never heard about the book before then.

There's nothing original under the sun, even if you're not "taking ideas" from anywhere.

>>12098136
How could he have written and published it that quickly though?

>>12098417
Chads can literally do that.

>>12098389
>didn't read the study
It's the opposite.

>>12098429
was this guy white?

>>12098358
Yeah
Also describe the story you were going to write.

Bonus points for justifying why you hadn’t already started/finished it before now

>>12098668
>https://www.amazon.com/Overton-Park-Peoples-Brooks-Lamb/dp/1621904601

Some back story before I tell you what I am going to write. Several months ago I quit my job to move into the city and date my gf. Ever since it’s been a fucking nightmare trying to stay afloat with my finances. I work full time at a shitty office job and part time on the weekends at some faggot dive bar. I’m basically putting myself through all this so I can date my gf. Sometimes I ask myself if it’s even worth it. That said, the book I plan to write will be a collection of short stories based on the park near my apartment. Through my stories I will report the city life, the city people, and expound on personal things and feelings by telling stories of make believe people and whatnot. It’s something I’m constantly thinking about, but I don’t have time to put on paper, as I’m always fucking working. The little free time I have I spend reading literature. It can be really hard to write creatively when you’re exhausted, mentally and physically.

>for fun, I’ve uploded the text my gf sent me

It crushed me.

>>12098756
Damn lil nigga

>>12098756
>Yeah, pretty neat
I felt your heart shatter in my own ribcage

>>12098756

I'm going to say this roughly, but you need to get your shit together. I understand you're in a rough place but you're indulging your insecurity. This book isn't even remotely the same as your book. Your book is fiction. This is a non-fiction history based on interviews and journalism. This is actually an amazing source for your book and your girlfriend is trying to help you. Fiction doesn't excel just because of its informational content. Zola isn't a great writer because he just did a lot of research.

>>12098815

I'm imagining you're writing something more like Winesburg Ohio but about the park. Who gives a fuck about a bunch of interviews and dry ass historical narrative about Winesburg compared to that?

If anything you can literally take this book and other sources and integrate them into your own work. Dramatic presentation is always more effective.

yeah OP, your idea seems more dubliners while his is a literal history. Similar, but only because the theme is the same area of a city.

don't punish your gf for being cool and trying to help. I don't know the circumstances but you really seem to love her to do this, so why not look for a better job in the area to ease the financial burden. once that issue is solved, I'm sure your relationship will be stronger.

t. man whose relationship with the love of his life was killed by money worries.

>>12098949
I agree, I take back what I said about killing her as she was just trying to help. This site fill me with such bitterness and vitriol I can't help it sometimes.

>>12098195
I unironically believe celibacy is something divine, but you guys need to stop finding every little excuse to post about it

>>12098445
Caucasoid, close enough for christfags

what should really make you think is that there are no nigger prophets or important nigger saints nor any global religions with nigger religious leaders.

>>12098960
there's obviously hope yet anon.

4chan is a funny place to browse just don't let the negativity get to you. the entire world isn't as dark as people here would want you to believe.

>>12098429
i threw my copy of confessions in the trash after finishing it

>>12098815
Good advice for OP
Please read this post OP