/lit/ - Literature

>>11700573
> If you
> Insert random linebreaks
> That makes it
> Poetry
> All of a sudden!
Fuck, I owned the shit out of this poetry business. Where's my Nobel Prize?

>>11700609

Please answer me, why do you do this? Why spam her? Why spam at all?

>>11700609
What didn't you like about it? I thought it describes the passage of time perfectly, especially:

>...Children,
>Still weaving budded aureoles,
>Will speak our speech and never know,

>>11700609
kek

>>11700609
her poem is in meter you fucking retard, go back to your /sfg/

>>11700884
is she becoming paler? i am concerned for her health

>>11700573
I don't like the third strophe, though "and least will guess" is very nice.

>>11700609
-> >>11700900
lrn 2 accentual verse u pl€b

>>11701041
It is slightly irregular iambic tetrameter.

>>11701121
the last line doesn't have a single iamb
irregular vs accentual is a tomato-potato anyway

>>11700573
>>11700609
>>11700900
>>11700906
>>11701041
this is fucking wallace stevens you psueds

>>11701141
Good point.

>>11700573
>blank verse

Dropped.

>>11701146
Doesn't matter, we should strive to see art as separate from the artist.

NFSW:
https://imgur.com/a/YHPxC

>>11701799
weak desu

>>11701799
Of course she has artsy nudes. What a caricature.
Also lel at /lit/ outing themselves. Stevens is great.

>>11701799
she should never take a picture from the side ever again

>>11701799
this stuff always depresses me
she has such an ugly, bulbous face, and I think she knows it; at least, she understands her inadequacy in a subliminal way whenever she is confronted with the pictures of someone like Eva Green who embodies the element of sleek, feminine Sex that she herself never will; yet she has slept with enough men that she deludes herself into thinking that she really must be some Hellenic goddess who represents the divine Female and is "spiritually" on a higher level than the mundane men who are really in her sexual-market bracket
it's annoying because she seeks to deface the criteria of beauty so that she will be allowed admittance into the upper echelons of it (as evidence of these gaudy pseudo-modeling pics that only a girl only takes when she thinks she is attractive enough to really be a fashion or sex symbol, but has merely been frustrated by unfortunate circumstances from being so ('Karly Kloss, the only difference between you and I is that you were born in more fortuitous circumstances', her insecure ego attempts to bargain)); and she uses, as justification, all of the desperate and acquiescing men who have pumped-and-dumped her. She thinks that the few dozen of sexual conquests (true, nothing compare to Becky's number, but still, impress in some respect--I mean, could Rachel even go to a club and find not one, but THREE boys who would be willing to lick her anus?) which she mistakenly attributes to her own aesthetic superiority proves she must genuinely be a participant in that great Principle of Beauty. Yet she suspects, and is right in thinking, that really, it was not her aesthetic triumph that led to those men's penises becoming erect and plunging into her ever-opening cunt, but rather, the libidinal weakness of the male counterparts that facilitated the necessary sexual desire.
so in protest, in an attempt to prove that she is actually attractive and that Beauty ought to be measured by her, she has these cliche photoshoots with "creative nudity" and "expressive sensuality", and posts them online to the hordes of thirsty follows who she receives comfort in knowing that most (if not all, let's be real) will jerk off to her, thereby further justifying the idea that she is of the elite of sexually attractive women (and a creative one at that!)
yet all she achieves is a mockery of Aesthetics and Beauty. And her whole miserable little charade can be overthrown by one candid snapshot of some country-born child in a swing that her father pushes, caught in the joyful smile that accentuates the true and unforced glory of natural Feminine beauty. And so she will come to hate such little girls, and such innocence wherein beauty truly lies.
and yet she will know an overflow of sexual intimacy while I shall die a virgin.
telle est la vie.

Last stanza is superfluous and spoils the whole. Otherwise I think it's breddy gud for quasi free-verse.

>>11701146
k e k

/lit/ deserves every savaloyposter

>>11704003
for a Stevens, that is

>>11703205
good post

lit is so fucking stupid

Is this prose? I never understood why i have such a loathing of prose; i detest it. I dont think i hate poetry in of itself either. I remember looking at some portry like : "Out of the Blue" by simon armitage and The yellow palm or even The Charge of the Light Brigade. Is this just because im too stupid to understand the advanced prose or just a symptom of gold tism?

>>11704184
What the fuck does the word 'prose' mean to you?? What the fuck is this post?

>>11704215
prose without metric or sturcture. this has structure but it seems so random. I'm sorry if i misunderstood. Could you link me any good prose i want to not hate it.

>>11704184
>>11704260
ignore i'm just retarded.

>>11703205
>I mean, could Rachel even go to a club and find not one, but THREE boys who would be willing to lick her anus?

kek

Also, if you're actually a virgin just please go get laid.

>>11704277
I was just about to but nice double.

>>11700573
>as quick as foxes on the hill

I knew after reading this simile that it couldn’t be her work. It’s too good.

>>11701146

>>11701799
>makes a poem about how she shouldn't be objectified
>takes multiple nude pics

>>11700573
Wow, this is the worst poem I ever saw, millenials are retarded.

>>11701146
reminds me of when someone posted a nickel back song and said it was bob dylan's pullitzer prize lyrics

>>11703205
based and redpilled

I generally like Wallace Stevens, but the best free verse will never be equivalent to the best metered poetry.

>>11701146
>modernist literature
>good
>>11701799
sad that she acts more of a caricature than an interesting artist

>>11703205
/lit/posting on amphetamines sounds fun desu

>>11703205
this 2bh

>>11705334
Biblical poetry is in free verse. Enjoy hell.

How can this board be so retarded when it comes to the basics of prosody is beyond me. You midwits would call even OE poetry free verse.

>>11704312
This. Also anyone who is not a complete brainlet would notice the diction choice are absolutely not hers. Really, I would expect this pathetic "gotcha!" working on r/books, but not /lit/.

Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape. Rape.

>>11700573
Why is this cunt getting shilled here everyday all of the sudden

>>11700573
This isn’t by her, I could instantly tell that. This board is fucking idiotic.

>>11701799
perfect lil tatas

>>11704283
>Also, if you're actually a virgin just please go get laid.

Kill yourself

>>11704283
I also agree with the other anon, you should kill yourself

>>11707124
>>11707980
>"I'm a virgin and my life sucks because of it"
>okay, then lose your virginity
>"kys!"
hmmm

>>11706759
No one said it was you retard