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Here is a poem I wrote while in a depressed but determined stupor. Is it ass? I wrote it in maybe 5 minutes.

Beyond Burning Eyes:
"Out there beyond burning eyes lies the answer I seek. Would my will be enough to set my heart free? Crooked spirit and shattered mind, seeking the will to rebind from behind those burning eyes."

When I look at my poems and then look at poems in this thread.. I feel disconnect. I feel like what I write isn't correct which makes no sense.

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