/lit/ - Literature

>>17670157
Folks, I've been trying to pump out a short story in the past two days. My work style is that I'm a pantser, but at the very end I go back and I'm a very good editor. I fix up the syntax and add in flowery language and symbolism, but the first draft is very spartan and efficient.

I do this to discover the story I want to write myself! And unfortunately what I've written so far is basically Harry Potter but slightly different. Firstly, all the aesthetics come from Power Metal, and the magic university has a gender divide. Used to be a woman's college, now men are accepted and there's hatred between the genders. My plot will be that the men are slowly picked off a killed by the men, but the main characters themselves will be saved by the school principle, who is a mighty and strong woman, both sexy but also ripped.

Thoughts on what I have so far? How terrible of a cliche it is to have the plot of a magical school. I'm thinking maybe I'll change it up a bit. Making it a hermetically school with monks and nuns, I think that will add another layer of depth to all the sexy murders.
>spider queen descends down from the ceiling and pinches the head of a boy between her thighs. She ropes him back up to her web where she crushes his head, pressing his face into her crotch until his skulls cracks and bursts like a grape.

Thoughts?

I can't tell if this board just keeps getting worse or if I'm growing less tolerant of garbage but I can't stand it anymore. What the fuck is that catalog supposed to be?

>>9100253
fuck off richfag