/lit/ - Literature

>>19319901
I wrote some loose fragments for one idea (around 500 words) and started outlining a novel I've been thinking could be interesting.
The basic premise is that there's one character who starts off as an atheist but finds God and another character who starts off as a young-earth creationist but ends up losing their faith, and their stories would be told in parallel.
I thought it'd be neat. But I'm also thinking of doing that thing where the old lady and her granddaughter visit the cave with paintings on the walls, I should finish that before I dedicate myself to a novel.

Should I pay for professional feedback? I don't know anyone who has any valuable input on my work as a whole.