/lit/ - Literature

>>4835719
>Don't do this
Why not, exactly? What else can I use to put emphasis on the fact that it's different from a typical western view is on what a regular bed is - or are you saying that the reader should just be able to conclude that it's not a real bed through the description? And do you have any other critiques on the rest of the work? I'd appreciate any other input.

>>4621176

The real question is if the book is, in fact, 2 legit 2 quit.

>>4615704
>She is cold, barren and dry
Right off the bat, I already don't like it. For some reason, the lack of an oxford comma just makes the sentence look bad.

Can someone please explain what possessed my professor to give me such a terrible grade and inappropriate comment? I understand that I didn't put forth much effort, and had blatant mechanical errors, but i don't understand how an F is justified.

What's up /lit/? I am trying to into poetry. Are there any good websites you would recommend? I am also planning on checking out the recommendations on the wiki. Any other amazing poets other than the ones on the list?

Thanks!

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Get on my level.

Thomas Pynchon's V
OR
Celine's Journey to the End of Night

what does /lit/ reccomend I read first?

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