/lit/ - Literature

>>16432524
This is actually pretty charming, Anon, I really like the genuine, authentic feel it has. While I can tell you're new to writing and probably don't read all that often, it's not so bad as to distract from your writing. Honestly, it's refreshing to read something without any pretentions of grandeur. I was particularly amused by the conversation, because I thought you were going to have her characters argue about having characters argue in a short story—you got a good laugh out of me when they just agreed and went about their business. Also, that Cars 2 bit was great.

This is pretty promising, and I think you could be a pretty good comedy writer with some practice. Good luck!