/lit/ - Literature

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Try to descibe the city at varityest points in the story, Don't try to explain all at once.

A good opening is too just desc the major stuff that one would take notice first out of anything.

Just try to go it though out and not all at once.

But focus on buildings as they go into them or near them or the best opinion commnet on them.

Just try to keep things light and only give the reader what they need and let their minds doing the rest of the busy work (This is a very important lesson in writing)

How would you guys go about writing body dysmorphia and anorexia?

I wanted to write it where The character is a goat person and whenever they look in the mirror they only see a scribbled version of themselfs and refuse to look at it.

Then I thought to myself, Is that not what a furry is?

Thoughts anons?