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Introducing Finley Hallow, and his pet worm, Banner!

This cocky, devious gentleman is a trophy hunter of all sorts. He travels to various dimensions hunting those he deems worthy prey, like Cynthia. Once captured, his assistant Banner doubles as a means of transportation back to his trophy hall. The human cargo can do nothing but writhe helplessly in Banner's belly as they're whisked away to to her certain doom!

The special alien enzymes that coat Banner's belly keep the prey alive against their own will. They have no need to eat or sleep once tightly packed inside, and his skin is thin enough where breathing is not an issue. Digestion can take anywhere from mere moments to an entire year depending on his companion's commands. His length is such that multiple victims can be stored inside his form without issue.

Finley is equipped with a long-range hunting rifle, with several futuristic add-ons that he's picked up while hopping dimensions. The gun has a stun setting for when he's not feeling particularly threatened by the prey.

Finley had noticed early in their travels together that Banner's stomach contours so tightly to his prey's body that he needn't even have the prey be released in order to make a completely accurate taxidermy of the victim! He simply could scan the bulge inside Banner's belly, and 3D-Print a perfect taxidermy trophy of whichever body parts he wanted to display.